The Infinite Paradise of Qi Practitioners

Crowdfunding to write the second part of the book. Infinite flow is a cliché. If you have any worlds you want to go to, you can write them here, and there's no problem in being original.

To be honest, the cliche unlimited flow is a test of the author's writing style and imagination (●°u°●)" Let me talk about the shortcomings in my opinion (^~^) 1. In the first three pictures, you go right into it and it's very rough (fuck), which means it feels like having sex without foreplay! 😏Impatient readers will feel that the Qi Ti Origin is unclear or the world view is not explained clearly, and the same will be true in the follow-up╮(╯＿╰)╭ 2. Issues with worldview? It's been three copies and I still haven't explained the world view and the origin of the paradise clearly. Is the dungeon world an anime fantasy work of the main world? 🤗 3. Fill in the pit descriptions. Such subjective jokes like the park evaluation really detract from the quality of the park! Although I filled in the holes later, I think it was a bit slow (●°u°●) 4. Equipment description Hmm🤔This is a bit of a problem with the writing style🤐🤐🤐🤐 5. The attractiveness of the protagonist. In my words, he is the protagonist. Unfortunately, he is positioned as a auxiliary (the combat power is subtle), which is like missing the mark for readers who prefer direct combat power😡 Summary: This book is not good at driving, and its imagination is too small. There is also an author who is receiving subsistence allowance and is madly poisoning himself in the text🤭 Late stage cancer 😞..............................

It's really beautiful

The introduction is a bit weak, is there any problem?

Water water water water water. . . . . . . . It's so difficult, I still need 5 words.

Author, thank you so much, the (her) character in Chapter 27 of your novel should be (him). Also, thank you, author! Stay in good shape!

Come on, come on, come on

The author works harder and stands shoulder to shoulder with Samsara Paradise