Immortal Sword Pavilion

A person's Xianxia is ultimately weak. Xiaoxian already has the system of this book. So, next, readers, have you thought about the fairy tale scenes, magic weapon skills, and plot narration that you yearn for? Those who are willing to participate can join in together and the selection will be appropriately arranged. Above, thank you! (This book was originally planned to be completed with more than one million copies. How much you can write in the future depends on the results. You still have to save some love to generate electricity for the next time.)

The story is very exciting. It is not a cool novel. All the villains in it have brains. They are not just pretentious and slap-in-the-face type. I can only say that it suits my taste. I give it a good review (o^^o)

Just write your own book well. At the beginning, you keep showing off. One moment, you say that you think you need to have emotions to become an immortal. The next moment, you lament that you have no emotions. Compared with other time-travelers, you are really a person who has emerged from the mud and is untainted. Please get treatment for split personality, and please get treatment for moaning without illness.

In the plot of River God, the protagonist hangs up the whole time. Since you randomly follow an ordinary person and find that there is something wrong with the other person, instead of following the line to check, you just give up and go to the river to squat. I really can't think of any other words to describe the protagonist's mind.

After reading hundreds of chapters, let me tell you my thoughts after reading it. Let me talk about the good parts first. It has a fairy-like atmosphere. The bad thing is that the layout of the book is quite large, but the content cannot support it. After reading two to three hundred chapters, as a disciple of a large sect, I feel that only the protagonist or ordinary disciples are traveling abroad, and the other genius disciples are staying at home. There is only one main line of the protagonist, and there is no interaction when there is a plot. The psychological descriptions are all hasty, and the interaction with the characters is too superficial. The descriptions of each character are not full, and the characters are facial makeup. I can't remember it, and then I can't watch it anymore.

This book should not be so popular. Could it be that the title is not eye-catching enough?

Maybe it is really difficult to write a book, with grades, recommendations, and pressure from all aspects, but I still hope that the author will persevere. If it is really too tiring, then take a proper rest, and we readers will understand you. I believe that everyone who persists may not succeed, but if he gives up, he will definitely fail. I believe that after all the hardships, you will still be the young man who sticks to his original intention of writing!

I feel so tired and troubled. That guy called Danmo is such a fucking waste. He needs help every day. It's really tiring. It feels like the protagonist is busy wherever he goes, he has to help wherever he goes, he has to help wherever he goes, and he is almost exhausted.

The speed of advancement and the protagonist's level of defiance are very suitable. The protagonist is also very calm. He is not the kind of guy who likes girls when he sees them. It's very good.

It's really good, except for the scene with the witch and the monk in the temple, which looks a bit awkward. Other than that, everything else is good. Come on, author