One Piece: When a Cultivator Disguises Himself as an Ability User

To be honest, the author is not very suitable for writing this kind of novel that integrates world views. The integration of the two worlds must have priorities, and one must know how to summarize and split them reasonably. For example, the beginning of this book is all about the popularization of knowledge about cultivating immortals, which makes people feel very boring and confused after reading it. Not only does it not look good, but it will also lose a large number of readers. Most of the interesting novels that integrate the world view are summarized in the early stage, and only after experiencing some events or battles, different things will be revealed one by one. This way it will look unobtrusive and look better.

I can't understand what's written in the first chapter, the whole thing is nonsense

The quality of the old authors in the fandom area is guaranteed, but there are too many settings. If you don't want to see them, you can skip the settings.

First, although there are two chapters every day, each chapter is very small. It is just a matter of splitting one chapter into two chapters. Secondly, can you please write less about your cultivation settings? There are often several chapters devoted to cultivation settings. What you wrote is a fanfic, right? The main content should be on the fanfic plot. If we want to read cultivation novels, we will go to the Xianxia section to find books.

No, what and what, completely--

The writing style is smooth and the setting is detailed. But the shortcoming is also obvious, that is, the pace is too slow

There is too much nonsense, the content is not bad, I would like to give you five stars for encouragement.

I can only say that it is quite innovative, but the writing is a bit watery.

Devil Fruit can be regarded as a living creature and can be used as a universal material for refining weapons or elixirs.

Finally, I have a novel that I can read well, without wits or stallions.