An Edict to Heaven

The background of the book, Da Qin, is as follows in the introduction. 100 Years ago, Da Qin's power was exhausted. Many emperors died mysteriously. The sect gradually rose to the point where it was too big to lose. To be honest, in this situation, in the world of cultivation, fists were king, and Da Qin basically had no The hope of reversal turned out to be a destiny emperor, and the Qin Dynasty rose again. This can be said to be a reasonable explanation, with good talent and high power skills, but there is also a background, a powerful figure suspected of being the protagonist in the previous life, the Taoist master, the leader of the sect's rise. The leader, the best in the world, ended up being the second best. He was surrounded and killed by the Emperor of Qin with four top men. It seemed reasonable, but if you think about it, if Da Qin had these four top masters to suppress it, how could Da Qin have exhausted its strength and many emperors died mysteriously? , It is impossible for the emperor to be destined to surrender to Great Qin immediately as soon as he comes to power. Or maybe Great Qin, which is exhausted, can still train them (having these resources does not mean that the person being trained has this qualification). If Great Qin can train, the sect cannot even train four? Could it be that the rise of this sect is due to Yelang's arrogance? Then why does Da Qin keep this kind of sect? Isn't it the characteristic of the dynasty to be self-centered? In fact, it is reasonable to separate the two backgrounds. For example, the Taoist master began to rise, but he was surrounded and killed by four masters sent by the first emperor of the Great Qin Dynasty, which also opened the door to the end of the Qin Dynasty, and then the rise of this Holy Emperor (the masters of the sect and the Great Qin suffered heavy casualties in that battle, but the sect had the upper hand, which led to the rise of the sect and the decline of the Great Qin).

Less pretense, more realism, there are too many female characters,

When I saw the first chapter, I thought it was a time traveler, but later on it didn't seem like it. This answer was actually in the author's subsequent choices, which turned off the readers' appetite. Then there is the fact that the author is not good at writing emotional dramas, but he should write them hard. The portrayal of the heroine is also a mess, especially the background. In order to show that the heroine is a noble, the Lin family, a powerful family, was arranged. In order to show that the heroine's identity is complex, it was arranged that her father would die and her mother would marry the emperor. This created a contradiction. If the emperor cared about the existence of the heroine, then the heroine would have died long ago. If he didn't care, she would definitely have a successful career. Daughters are valued by their mothers, small and medium-sized dignitaries dare not interfere, and big nobles do not care. Some people will say that small nobles may fight for wealth. The key point is that there is really no wealth. If you succeed, the emperor will have to kill you for the sake of face and harmony. If you fail, the emperor will still kill you. Anyway, the person who dies is the little one. Then there is the heroine's attitude towards the dynasty. In a feudal society, she must be happy. Firstly, she is rich. Secondly, her mother has new support. Could it be that she has wanted to keep her mother's holiday since she was a child? Even if she is not happy, she still misses her mother and resents her abandonment. In terms of feudal ethics, the heroine still has to call the emperor stepfather. Then there is the protagonist. He obviously only has 4 years to live, but he spent three years in the academy and three years in the first two realms. There is not only one elixir to extend life. Since you can communicate with heaven and earth, and you can also command heaven and earth, why not find the treasures of heaven and earth, practice skills, and reach the point of immortality as soon as possible. You said that the protagonist's golden finger can communicate with all things and know the world's affairs. It seems that it can't. It's very restrictive. It's not a prediction of the future. How can you know two treasures that can help the protagonist, and know that you will have a chance to get one of them three years later?

So, what exactly is the author going to write about?

The protagonist is too pretentious. The protagonist has no background now. He just pretends to be the protagonist. But from an objective point of view, it is a bit funny. I can only say that writing like this will attract people to watch in the short term, but it will not last long.

Hahaha, not bad, good book, worth reading

I feel that the setting of the entire book is too simplified. Each sect family feels like there are only one or two people, and the descriptions of the battle scenes are also very simplified. The whole book gives people a feeling: very light and not rich enough

There is no main plot. The protagonist's purpose should be to extend his life and become an immortal. I don't see the long-term goal and the means to achieve it. It's inexplicable to watch, and it's hard to get angry

Awesome, awesome, awesome, great. Looking forward to your next book.

The article has a smell, like the indifference of me blowing the sea breeze at night. The plot is well controlled, but the plot is rubbish. It's a standard slap in the face counterattack, but with a good layer of skin. The absurdity of serving iced tea to guests in a house worth tens of millions. As a newcomer, I can only say that the future is promising, but if you are an experienced author, I can only say that I wish you success.