Only My Way

It's too watery, the plot has no main line, just a hammer here and a stick here and there. Sometimes there is no advancement in chapters thirty or forty. Che Zhuluan talks over and over again, which is the same virtue as the marketing account. If you don't know how to write about feelings, don't write about them. Some women are like fools.

Author, you should go ahead and write about Zhutian Wuxian or fan fiction. Your writing skills are getting more and more original. You have no outline, no polishing of details, and no consideration of the rationality of the character's behavior and the current situation. Your level is only suitable for writing on the world view established by others. Otherwise, you should directly increase the protagonist's starting strength level to the current world view and above. It must be the most explosive street, and the surrounding environment must be upgraded to super martial arts. In this way, you can ignore most logical problems, and you will not be able to write low-level plots at all.

Your new book is not as good as the second one, let alone the first one. Everything you talk about in one chapter can even be said in one sentence. It's outrageous to talk back and forth. It's too watery.

Finally! Both Destiny and Weidao have added QQ.

The logic is all wrong, When you go out, you take the secret book with you because you can't memorize it? Or should I take it out and look at it twice while practicing? Or do you want to make a wedding dress for your enemy? A good old man? His brain is not functioning properly. I just put the secret books at home and press them with rocks, but they are no better than these.

The plot is too long-winded. It's all a running account. Only the first few chapters are enough.

It's really very ordinary. I don't know why you are describing so much in your mind? There are things that are explained clearly in one chapter or two in each chapter. A lot of disgusting descriptions. There is no normal plot advancement at all

Very good, very good, very good~(￣▽￣~)~,,,,,╮(￣▽￣)╭

The previous article is well written, decisive in killing, food and grass + After meeting Pei Yijun again, his level dropped drastically, and he was like hay and had no bright spots. The number of words

The characters and environment need to be well polished. These descriptions need to be more careful. Don't write nonsense. You are a beggar who can't get to the table, but you lie on the roof of other people's houses, making others blind. You have the qualifications to raise your hands to test, and you have a chance to turn around, but you don't want it. The reason is not convincing. Read more articles you have written instead of writing whatever comes to mind