I Stole Divine Power in Daxia

In the part before and after it is released, the contradictions are concentrated on the Jade Sage, which is handled very well, with tension and relaxation, and a good rhythm. But after it was put on the shelves, there was a problem when switching to the next plot. The steam engine line, the newspaper line, and the Zhou family's old department line were all opened together (in fact, there was a duel line that was considered a small branch line), and the narrative became messy. I mentioned it here and there. The whole story is about how the villain plots against the protagonist, and how the protagonist plots against the villain, and then what? Then it was gone. These calculations were mentioned and there was no follow-up. I started writing about the advancement of the three antennas again. In short, it was hundreds of thousands of words in the past, but it seemed that there was no progress at all. You want to talk about it, but it really isn't water. More than 100,000 words have buried all three lines, but the perspective changes too quickly. I mentioned the steam engine, then mentioned Confucianism, then changed the perspective to the protagonist, then to the emperor, then to the queen of heaven, changed the newspaper again, changed the old department again, and changed the events again during the period. There is obviously something real, but with this change of perspective, the whole article seems to be full of water, and how can there be hundreds of thousands of words written in a way that is all foreshadowing and not explosive? According to the conventional way of writing online articles, this kind of group portrait is usually about an event, and the perspective of the game of all parties is transformed (such as Shen San, Best Friend), and now it is the rotation of the forces of all parties in the perspective of several events, good guys, thief chaos. It can only be said that the final chapter was not handled well, otherwise it would not be difficult to become a god according to zz's writing style, right? It still feels quite powerful. As far as this series of events is concerned, it is too detailed, and the perspective should not be changed so many times. Take Confucianism as an example, it has been discussed in meetings more than four times, and the protagonist has made a plan in more than ten chapters each, and none of them have exploded. According to the normal way of writing, it should not be that a small accident first caused waves (that duel was just right), and then the aftermath ignited a second incident. All parties were caught off guard and started to mess up (the three gods are mentioned here again, whether it is the two cauldrons of heaven and man or the restart of the rules, it is amazing), and then All parties began to compete, and the protagonist took this opportunity to continue to prepare for the last two major events while dealing with the first major event. After the first one was dealt with, each party just threw out the two prepared events because they had nothing to do, and another big climax was completed in one volume. . . I can only say that zz's writing style is very detailed, but the rhythm is sparse, but I still envy it. I have also written and smoothed out the timeline of various events. As a result, I got tired of writing. I am not suitable to deal with the detailed issue of expanding the outline to the full text. . .

If the fantasy content is the main content and the rest is supplemented, it would be five stars. If the historical plot content is the main focus and the rest is supplemented, it would be four stars. If the main focus is the industrial revolution and social changes, and the rest is supplementary, it will be three stars. But all together, I can only give two stars. For fantasy-related content, there are not many fighting scenes after 200 chapters and two levels, which is too torturous. I take the machinations of historical novels too much for granted, and lack the treacherousness of Bo Yun in political and historical novels. Regarding social changes such as the Industrial Revolution, I personally feel that this did not happen overnight. Simply writing about this requires a very deep foundation, let alone a mess. I appreciate the author's writing style and also admire the author's knowledge. However, the mixture of so many contents does not seem to be well integrated. In fact, I think it is necessary for a good novel to have clear priorities. Finally, I feel that this book still has great potential and I offer it with two monthly passes. That's all

The son of the founding martial artist was still very popular in the capital, but he was planted with a soul seed by an equally famous beauty. I don't understand. They are so awesome, but they are no longer invincible. The main character is still fighting with each other, so let's forget it.

It was good before it was released, but it started to become unreadable later on. It has over 1 million words, and it is still plotting and plotting. It is only level 7! The world over there has a population of only 2,000! What on earth is this about? I shouldn't just buy 100 chapters. 9 Items for a few days, 8 items for a month, and then 88888888888888888888888888888887777,

I bought all the chapters and regretted after reading a little bit. The latter part was too watery. After entering the eighth level, my combat power has not been touched and has been in the water.

The writing is okay and refreshing, and it is understandable that he would be crushed by Li Taibai's poems, but the political consciousness and routines are very idealistic, and crushing ancient politicians like dogs' heads is too much to look down on these top politicians.

I feel like it's just so-so. Although I don't know why 4,000 people read this book on QQ Reading (referring to book friends), but to be honest, the language description is quite lacking, and the characterization is quite dull. The protagonist's mother and some characters feel quite facial and have no characteristics. When I read it, I kept flipping through it, and there are some settings. It may not be very full, and it made me frown a bit. , I just feel that the world view and this novel are not well polished, and also about the arrangement of the heroine, I don't know if it is the witch in the beginning, but it seems to be hinted at several times later, I just frowned at that time, and then I gave up after reading less than 20 chapters. I can only say that it is not suitable for me. Maybe it is a refreshing novel, no need to use my brain, it is a good novel.

I don't need IQ for the sake of the plot, but I am controlled by that person named Hanhan. Isn't his family a martial arts family? After releasing the control, don't call the master immediately to kill that Huanhua. Is it interesting to have an affair with her and write a pig's foot like such an idiot?

I watched it through the free path. It's so fucking frustrating. The dog with the broken spine is both a bitch and a holy mother. It makes no sense. You work for people who want you dead every day. You can flip the table many times, so just flip the table and recreate the world. It's disgusting...

The early stage is very exciting, but the later stage is either introducing here or there, or introducing skills. The plot is too ideal, of course. No matter who he faces, he can win. The protagonist of the fantasy novel is barely strong enough to be cannon fodder, but he can also control the whole world in the palm of his hand.