Mortal: Start on Jiyin Island, Body Against the Sea of stars
by Erqingzi
About This Novel
At the beginning, a disciple of the third level of Qi training on Jiyin Island was used as a tool for making puppets, practicing "Iron Bone Kung Fu". Fortunately, he was equipped with [Mengbao] AI, blessed by Yuan Shen's computing power, connected to the Dao database, deciphering the secret of evil energy, punching through the cage, and flesh against the sea of stars. Thousands of years later, Luo Qing stood on the top of the Tianxing Holy Mountain, holding Yuan Yao on his left and Yu Ling on his right, suppressing him for the rest of his life. "Husband, you are truly a genius!" "Yao'er, my husband is not a genius, he is just an AI cultivator with boundless magic power!" PS: There is also an old book "I Cultivate Immortality Scientifically among Mortals" that has been ordered by Wan. Fellow Taoists who feel that the number of words is too short can go and read it.
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Official(10)Scraped 3d ago
A sentence of Mengbao can dissuade half of the old bookworms🤗
I've seen two of them, so I won't comment for now.
Is it well written? I'll read it later and comment if it's good. If it's not good, I probably won't comment anymore and just leave. Two pictures, the IQ of the plug-in is too high, it seems that the protagonist is not so much. Rather than saying that the protagonist is the protagonist, it is better to say that the cute baby is the protagonist, that is, the AI. If the AI wants to seize the body, the protagonist should have no ability to fight back. And is this really an author who came out after writing a complete novel? The protagonist is too out of the ordinary, it is simply a passionate novel. But in the story of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, you want to talk about passion with me, okay, just pretend I don't say it.
Nothing else matters
I just didn't leave Jiyin Island earlier. I was so unhappy reading it. That book was almost all about mortals cultivating immortals. It's written by the same author and it's not the same. It was run by AI or ghostwritten. It's not as good as the previous book.
It's not very useful to have a stupid AI, and it always mentions the original body. I'm really afraid that you won't know that you are a soul traveler. It's also disgusting to have a senior sister who has a close relationship with the original owner to find the male lead.
The veteran author's fodder, it's too bad that no one reads it
Finished
I really can't write it well, I've already finished it
A new trumpet work by the author of Scientific Cultivation of Immortality
Currently, starting from Jiyin Island is very good. It avoids the two big problems of grabbing the small green bottle and Nangong Bowl. Qi training begins again, and settings are added. The additions to Jiyin Island are also good, come on. Remember not to create an original female cultivator, but look for someone who is modeled in anime. Song Yu only has a little plot, and she relies entirely on modeling to increase her popularity. However, Song Yutian's spiritual roots and family elixir inheritance are good candidates for training.
Can you tell me where Mengbao's database comes from? And what is the use of the Mengbao body that Nie Shan took away? If it's useless, why write it down? If it's useful, why not let Mengbao remind the protagonist to get the body back?
To be honest, I personally think that if you want to write about AI, you should have a bigger brain. Let AI directly deduce pure chemical synthesis of elixirs, hybridization of spiritual plants, evolution of spiritual beasts, and design puppets that can fully automatic assembly line for making talismans, alchemy, and refining weapons. It should be better than your simple accumulation of numerical values. Although it is a world of cultivating immortals, if you, a modern person, travel through time and bring an AI, you can rely more on science.
I have read several fics, and this one has a fresh and refined style, a bit like the style of Get Out. Although there are many scenes in Goldfinger, the protagonist is also smart, and the supporting roles are well written. The pendant where the woman is not completely attached to the protagonist and obeys the protagonist is really different from other fics. The women in other fics are too covetous. Moreover, it's great that the protagonist doesn't go out of his way to find the woman who accepted the original work. It's good to go his own way. Now I'm afraid that the gold finger is hanging too hard.
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Community(0)
Official(10)Scraped 3d ago
A sentence of Mengbao can dissuade half of the old bookworms🤗
I've seen two of them, so I won't comment for now.
Is it well written? I'll read it later and comment if it's good. If it's not good, I probably won't comment anymore and just leave. Two pictures, the IQ of the plug-in is too high, it seems that the protagonist is not so much. Rather than saying that the protagonist is the protagonist, it is better to say that the cute baby is the protagonist, that is, the AI. If the AI wants to seize the body, the protagonist should have no ability to fight back. And is this really an author who came out after writing a complete novel? The protagonist is too out of the ordinary, it is simply a passionate novel. But in the story of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, you want to talk about passion with me, okay, just pretend I don't say it.
Nothing else matters
I just didn't leave Jiyin Island earlier. I was so unhappy reading it. That book was almost all about mortals cultivating immortals. It's written by the same author and it's not the same. It was run by AI or ghostwritten. It's not as good as the previous book.
It's not very useful to have a stupid AI, and it always mentions the original body. I'm really afraid that you won't know that you are a soul traveler. It's also disgusting to have a senior sister who has a close relationship with the original owner to find the male lead.
The veteran author's fodder, it's too bad that no one reads it
Finished
I really can't write it well, I've already finished it
A new trumpet work by the author of Scientific Cultivation of Immortality
Currently, starting from Jiyin Island is very good. It avoids the two big problems of grabbing the small green bottle and Nangong Bowl. Qi training begins again, and settings are added. The additions to Jiyin Island are also good, come on. Remember not to create an original female cultivator, but look for someone who is modeled in anime. Song Yu only has a little plot, and she relies entirely on modeling to increase her popularity. However, Song Yutian's spiritual roots and family elixir inheritance are good candidates for training.
Can you tell me where Mengbao's database comes from? And what is the use of the Mengbao body that Nie Shan took away? If it's useless, why write it down? If it's useful, why not let Mengbao remind the protagonist to get the body back?
To be honest, I personally think that if you want to write about AI, you should have a bigger brain. Let AI directly deduce pure chemical synthesis of elixirs, hybridization of spiritual plants, evolution of spiritual beasts, and design puppets that can fully automatic assembly line for making talismans, alchemy, and refining weapons. It should be better than your simple accumulation of numerical values. Although it is a world of cultivating immortals, if you, a modern person, travel through time and bring an AI, you can rely more on science.
I have read several fics, and this one has a fresh and refined style, a bit like the style of Get Out. Although there are many scenes in Goldfinger, the protagonist is also smart, and the supporting roles are well written. The pendant where the woman is not completely attached to the protagonist and obeys the protagonist is really different from other fics. The women in other fics are too covetous. Moreover, it's great that the protagonist doesn't go out of his way to find the woman who accepted the original work. It's good to go his own way. Now I'm afraid that the gold finger is hanging too hard.
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