Little Fairy Phoenix Covering the Sky

Some netizens speculated that there was darkness left in the Immortal Land of Nine Heavens and Ten Earths in the Mythical Age, which polluted the Emperor, and then the Emperor indirectly polluted the Immortal Emperor. Otherwise, there is no way to explain why the Emperor inexplicably wanted to sacrifice the universe, and the Immortal Emperor, who was a fairy phoenix, just degenerated into a fallen blood phoenix that could only survive by attacking the emperor.

Hundreds of millions of years later, in an ancient cave deep in the starry sky, an old man covered in red hair and exuding a terrifying aura opened his eyes: Jie Jie Jie Jie, those hateful readers should be dead, then I will update another chapter! After that, he raised a rusty keyboard and clicked send. In another starry sky, an old man with a haggard face stood up: I didn't expect that you are not dead yet. I have been waiting for this day for too long. After saying that, a stream of supreme aura rose from the depths of the starry sky. Infinite Heavenly Lord, fellow Taoists, follow me and seize this USB flash drive! --The voice resounds throughout the world! -One after another, the ultimate pressure is pressing down on the red-haired old monster! "I didn't expect that you're not dead yet! But, I am the God of Water! The avenue of water reaches the sky and the earth, and a few great emperors can't kill me!" Said the red-haired old man. "Really?" Another breath rose from the depths of the starry sky, "Old thief! You can't protect the USB drive today!

Author, you update too little. It's not enough to read. You should update more. You should update at least 10,000 words every day.

They are all narrative sentences, and it's always about him and him. It's too restrictive. It's always about him, what, and what. There's no plot at all?

The writing is good, the logic is rigorous, the inferences are reasonable, the combat power is not broken, and the character of Xiao Xianhuang is also likeable. Although there were some flaws in the early stage, the characters did not have much dialogue, and the plot image was not so full, but it got much better after it was released. There were more dialogues, and the plot and characters began to become fuller, allowing people to feel immersed in it. All in all, it is a Zhetian fanfic worth reading, and the level of a new author is already very good. One more suggestion. In fact, you can hold a wedding or a ceremony to become a Taoist couple with Yan Ruyu later. After all, this is not just a matter between Xiao Xianhuang and Yan Ruyu, but also a matter between the Emperor's line and the Qing Emperor's line, not to mention Yan Ruyu's beautiful dowry is still so generous. Although there are not many people in Qingdi's lineage, Qingdi is still alive in the Immortal Pagoda, so a ceremony should be held to announce it to the world. This is not only respect for Yan Ruyu but also respect for Qingdi's lineage. Otherwise, they would just get together in such a hasty manner, and not many people outside would know about it, which would be a bit uncomfortable.

I finally saw a decent Immortal Emperor. Many Immortal Emperors in Zheten fanfiction are described as being like clowns, not powerful at all. After all, he was a god respected by all races in the ancient times, and he was still one of the few who embarked on the path of mortal immortality. How could he be like that?

The male is a phoenix and the female is a phoenix. At least you have some common sense.

It is relatively realistic and unsystematic. It respects the original work more and fills in the gaps. It interprets the villains in the original work and the Emperor's lineage into another possibility. The Emperor's Battle, The Supreme Battle, The Conflict with the Fighting Saint Ape Lineage, The Mortal Transformation, The Immortal King's War, etc. Are all considered to be among the best of their kind.

The Second Son of the Immortal Emperor, a very rare subject, fills the gap, and the plot is gradually improving and getting better, not bad

Awakening is the Great Perfection of the Wheel and Sea Realm, which is considered age zero. After three months in the Northern Territory, the first level of the Tao Palace was opened, the Heavenly Sun of the Heart. When he was half a year old, he studied the inscriptions left by the Western Emperor, gained enlightenment and the supply of divine sources, and achieved the fifth level of the Tao Palace. At the age of one, in Kunyun City, he caused a thunderstorm to kill the Holy Lord and achieved the Four Extremes Realm. After being one and a half years old, he went through the Emperor's Battle Brand Trial and the Gong Chen Heart Training. At the age of two, he obtained the Book of Origin and the Sacred Heart of the Demon Emperor, comprehended the Nine Slashes of the Demon Emperor, and worshiped his true fire. At the age of three, he obtained the ancient stele of Heavenly Lord from the Wind Clan, understood the way of the dragon and snake, and then practiced in seclusion. At the age of four, he began to survive the Great Dragon Tribulation, broke through to the Dragon Transformation Realm, and killed a branch in the human world. After one year of enlightenment in the coffin of the Immortal Mansion World at the age of five, he reached the Great Perfection of the Transformation Dragon Realm and could break through the Immortal Platform at any time and defeat Beidi who was in the Immortal One Realm. At the age of six, with the help of the residual traces of the Blue Emperor's law, he defeated Ji Zi who was in the Xianyi realm. At the age of six and a half, during the first Nine Emperors Tribulation, he jumped onto the third small step of Xianyi and defeated Huang Xudao. At the age of seven, God Kun Tian will return, and the protagonist suppresses the Holy Prince in the realm of Immortal One. At the age of eight, he received investment from major royal families, melted the scriptures of all emperors, and gained enlightenment with the help of his immortal uncle. At the age of nine, he suppressed Wang Teng, obtained the ancient inheritance, and reached the state of immortality. At the age of ten, he summoned the Emperor God to read, and the Taoist Fruit returned, rescued the Immortal Taoist, and captured the Immortal Mountain. At the age of eleven, he traveled far away from Ziwei, obtained the Tao Te Ching, countless sutras, etc., Then returned, overcame the heavenly tribulation, and ascended to the fourth level of the Immortal Second Realm. At the age of sixteen, after five years of cultivation in the earth's Dharma-ending environment, he reached the Great Perfection of the Second Immortal Realm. At the age of seventeen, he learned how to perform under the Taoist tree. He practiced it for a year, and then began to break through the pass, becoming an immortal and slashing the Tao in one leap. At the age of twenty, he completed the Immortal Sanzhan Dao and began to practice on ancient roads. The twenty-one-year-old half-saint defeated Ditian. He became a saint at the age of twenty-two and began to sweep the ancient road. The fifty-one-year-old great sage killed the emperor. One hundred and one years old, quasi-emperor, the master of the Killing Court, an old man chopping firewood. Two hundred and three years old, Quasi-Emperor Seventh Heaven, suppresses the Sea of ​​Reincarnation. Two hundred and six years old, he refined immortal fire and was accurate to eight, fighting against Buddha's body of faith. Two hundred and thirty-three years old, the road to immortality is opened, kill the Supreme, and gain experience. At the age of three hundred and thirty-four, he understood the flower of the gods, evolved into a chaotic body, and had two constitutions coexisting. Nearly nine percent perfect, unparalleled in the world. Four hundred and fifty years old, he defied heaven and became emperor. Then there is the road to becoming an immortal in the ninth life. In fact, it did not last too long. He transformed ten times and reached the pinnacle of immortality. It has been a while since I wrote it, so it may not be accurate, but it is roughly like this for your reference. Because of racial issues, he stayed in the egg for a long time to be conceived. The body grows with cultivation, and you cannot simply refer to human beings of the same age in the early stage.