
Covering the Sky Starts from the Mortal Body
About This Novel
Traveling through Zhetian and becoming Zhang Wenchang, Ye Fan's classmate, he is a loser with a very rubbish physique. What should I do? After only thinking for three seconds, he decided to go to Beidou to change his destiny. . . (The author already has three million-word Zhetian fanfics, and his character is guaranteed. Everyone can collect and read with confidence!)
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Official(68)Scraped 21d ago
It is not good to practice the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique, because the hidden danger of origin conflict is as great as that of the Holy Son of Shaking Light and has not been solved. In the original work, Emperor Lianren transformed from a demonic body into a divine fetus in her later years and lived another life. This means that Emperor Lianren did not become a chaotic body before becoming an emperor. She became an emperor by relying on her unparalleled talent, rather than by relying on the Heaven-Swallowing Demonic Art to become an emperor. Therefore, if others follow her path, they will die, and they will all end up exploding. The protagonist obviously doesn't have the talent to be a ruthless person, and relying on mortals to practice the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique to become a Chaos Body is a dead end.
So in order not to touch the women who had contact with Ye Fan, he just found a passerby to sleep with? Then why do you write about women? What's more exciting?
Does the author have a female protagonist? Who is the heroine? How many are there?
Tsk, this is just a mortal, a mortal who is more awesome than Ye Fan. Didn't he promise that one weapon can defeat all kinds of magic? Why, the more you practice, the more you practice. This is a tower, a bell, a piano, a knife, a rod, and a furnace. I guess the Nine Immortals Gold will give you different weapons to practice in the future... There are various intentions and various physical constitutions to destroy the remnant soul of the Supreme Being. You can just prove the Tao. At the beginning, you can just eat the Hedao Flower in the coffin and spend it casually. It's better than you...
There is a big poisonous point
If you can't control your own organs, it's a big poison. If you can't control your own organs, why use them? It can't be arranged like this, right?
As the author, I either don't have a heroine, but I can kill a few charming girls on the way to prove it. This can prove that the protagonist's Taoism is not romantic, because if there is a heroine, it is not easy to write about emotions. Most heroines are just dragging their feet, asking the protagonist to take off with them. It can be a single female protagonist, and the protagonist and the heroine help each other, otherwise it will appear that the protagonist is too much of a licker. In the later stage, I will write about the children of the protagonist and the heroine to adjust the dark atmosphere of the sky-covering fight and leave some warm scenes for the readers. Of course, here are some suggestions
It's fine in the front, but why does it get worse the further back? Can't wait to see a girl and accept it? What are you doing with so many magic weapons? How many months has it been since the phoenix spirit body survived the tribulation? Afraid of forgetting?
The practice of covering the sky is not for enjoyment and women
The purpose of practice is putting the cart before the horse. The purpose of practice is to become an immortal and live forever, not to be a loser stallion. It is like never seeing a woman in reality. If you can practice it, you will kill all the women who are useless. After practicing all the useful Immortal Heavenly Skills, it will be over. How can there be so much love and love to reconcile yin and yang?
I've read a few chapters and there are a lot of typos. The plot is okay and I know it well. It's not like some stupid kids trying to grab things from Ye Fan.
I collected scriptures here and there, and even practiced the method of perfecting the world. I lost interest in reading it, and after reading dozens of chapters, I gave up the book decisively.
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Official(68)Scraped 21d ago
It is not good to practice the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique, because the hidden danger of origin conflict is as great as that of the Holy Son of Shaking Light and has not been solved. In the original work, Emperor Lianren transformed from a demonic body into a divine fetus in her later years and lived another life. This means that Emperor Lianren did not become a chaotic body before becoming an emperor. She became an emperor by relying on her unparalleled talent, rather than by relying on the Heaven-Swallowing Demonic Art to become an emperor. Therefore, if others follow her path, they will die, and they will all end up exploding. The protagonist obviously doesn't have the talent to be a ruthless person, and relying on mortals to practice the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique to become a Chaos Body is a dead end.
So in order not to touch the women who had contact with Ye Fan, he just found a passerby to sleep with? Then why do you write about women? What's more exciting?
Does the author have a female protagonist? Who is the heroine? How many are there?
Tsk, this is just a mortal, a mortal who is more awesome than Ye Fan. Didn't he promise that one weapon can defeat all kinds of magic? Why, the more you practice, the more you practice. This is a tower, a bell, a piano, a knife, a rod, and a furnace. I guess the Nine Immortals Gold will give you different weapons to practice in the future... There are various intentions and various physical constitutions to destroy the remnant soul of the Supreme Being. You can just prove the Tao. At the beginning, you can just eat the Hedao Flower in the coffin and spend it casually. It's better than you...
There is a big poisonous point
If you can't control your own organs, it's a big poison. If you can't control your own organs, why use them? It can't be arranged like this, right?
As the author, I either don't have a heroine, but I can kill a few charming girls on the way to prove it. This can prove that the protagonist's Taoism is not romantic, because if there is a heroine, it is not easy to write about emotions. Most heroines are just dragging their feet, asking the protagonist to take off with them. It can be a single female protagonist, and the protagonist and the heroine help each other, otherwise it will appear that the protagonist is too much of a licker. In the later stage, I will write about the children of the protagonist and the heroine to adjust the dark atmosphere of the sky-covering fight and leave some warm scenes for the readers. Of course, here are some suggestions
It's fine in the front, but why does it get worse the further back? Can't wait to see a girl and accept it? What are you doing with so many magic weapons? How many months has it been since the phoenix spirit body survived the tribulation? Afraid of forgetting?
The practice of covering the sky is not for enjoyment and women
The purpose of practice is putting the cart before the horse. The purpose of practice is to become an immortal and live forever, not to be a loser stallion. It is like never seeing a woman in reality. If you can practice it, you will kill all the women who are useless. After practicing all the useful Immortal Heavenly Skills, it will be over. How can there be so much love and love to reconcile yin and yang?
I've read a few chapters and there are a lot of typos. The plot is okay and I know it well. It's not like some stupid kids trying to grab things from Ye Fan.
I collected scriptures here and there, and even practiced the method of perfecting the world. I lost interest in reading it, and after reading dozens of chapters, I gave up the book decisively.









