The Peerless Tang Sect's Sun and Moon Glory

How can I put it, I feel a little uncomfortable watching it all the time. I don't seem to be hostile to the protagonist group, but in fact I am full of them, especially Huo Yuhao's setting is a bit poisonous, and so is Wang Dong. Wang Dong should not be so hostile to the protagonist who is also a genius. Just forget it once or twice. If it happens again and again, it is acceptable for Wang Dong to be defeated by Huo Yuhao, but not acceptable to be defeated by the protagonist? Wang Dong is not Tang Wutong, and the protagonist is not domineering or humiliating, right? The character of the protagonist is too cold, just like Huo Yuhao in your book. He feels a bit like a hypocrite. He is always cold here and there, and he is dismissive of everyone. He can only accept it if he is indifferent (the word may not be used well). It is too self-interested, and the thunder attribute is domineering and the most virile. The protagonist should have a soaring spirit. Even if he is imprisoned for three years, then So what, golden scales are just things in the pond. They turn into dragons when encountering storms. However, the protagonist has been living like an insect. He is too tired. Even if he likes someone, he has to consider his own interests. After breaking through the shackles of imprisonment, he locked himself up again. To be honest, with such a character, he is not worthy of the ultimate thunder, ultimate destruction, the god of destruction in the divine world. At least he is an honest person.

Xu Zihuang is also very aware of his current position and status. No matter how he looks at it, it will look very ridiculous. Will the so-called Prince and Highness also be exiled?

Your writing is really bad, don't make any mistakes. Huo Yuhao, the protagonist you wrote is worse than Huo Yuhao, even worse than Tang San

Xu Zihuang is worthy of the name of Buddha, which is reflected in the following points 1. Double standards Xu Fozu has surpassed Tang San in terms of double standards. Tang San arranges for himself, no! Arrange for others yourself, okay! Only Xu Fozu can control Douluo Continent 2. Stand and stand again Xu Fozu is always just. Anyone who opposes me will seek death and be on the evil side, including but not limited to taking the initiative to go to the other party's home to provoke him in order to legitimately obtain the soul ring, eh? How dare you attack me in your home, then I will destroy you on behalf of justice#(so happy) 3. Noble There is great malice towards the common people. You commoners should not only think about yourselves, but also think more about the interests of the nobles. There are endless words.

If you come to the website for a short term, it usually comes before 100,000 words. If you don't come with 100,000 words, you can take the initiative to apply for a contract. If the application is unsuccessful several times, this book will not be written. Of course, if you can sign a contract, you won't be a eunuch. It can only be said that using love to generate electricity is doomed to be unrealistic.

The protagonist is no different from Tang San, so isn't it just that after killing one Tang San, another Tang San comes? There is even a person who has more erroneous views than Tang San and is more harmful than Tang San. You might as well let Tang San kill you. You should at least portray the protagonist as a character with righteous views. After all, he is the protagonist. You have to lead the readers and guide their three views. You can't teach them to develop for the bad, right? Regardless of whether you are strong or not, as a positive image, your three views must be good.

Although he feels bitter in his heart, Xu Zihuang also knows that saying this is completely equivalent to not saying no. After all, it really has no meaning, and what he is doing now is really heartbreaking.

Thanks for everyone's support, I can sign the contract. Rush, rush, work hard to save the article and wait for it to be published😋

This is the first comment I couldn't help but post after reading an online novel for two years. Among many fans, I personally feel that this novel is very good. But I personally feel that there are some shortcomings, such as the emotional creation and character creation. Ye Guyi, who is the childhood sweetheart of the protagonist, suddenly appears (the author foreshadowed it in about 200 photos). I don't have much objection. The problem is that Ye Guyi is portrayed as too yandere and possessive of the male protagonist, to the point of being pathological. For example, Ye Guyi (who is revealed to non-confidants to be the protagonist's biological sister, but is actually not related to the male protagonist by blood) behaves with the male protagonist in front of Ning Tian (the girlfriend he met at Shrek Academy, who was put to sleep by Ye Guyi at the time). Poor Ning Tian didn't know it yet, and she deliberately tried to please Ye Guyi (in her eyes, the protagonist's biological sister had to have a good relationship with him). It gave me a feeling of heart attack at the time (I have never been in a relationship, so I don't know the pain of being in front of a tauren, but I still feel uncomfortable. I don't know how to express it since yesterday afternoon). I feel that if the male protagonist was asked to choose between two, the male protagonist would definitely choose Ye Guyi (the male protagonist was too good to her, and it felt like it was too much) The role of the male protagonist is set as a proud, ruthless emperor who pays attention to bloodline and status, and is a hero. His goal is to return to the throne and unify the continent. Among the women he took in, except for Ye Guyi, they were all for profit (very consistent with the image of an emperor), but they did not show the vigilance and ruthlessness that an emperor should have. He was so kind to Ye Guyi. When he recognized her, he confessed everyone except Tianmeng Bingshu (the protagonist did not expose her out of respect for Tianmeng Bingshu). (Here, the male protagonist did not show any vigilance. He should know that after so many years, people will change. It was the imperial uncle who was related to him by blood who killed his parents back then, and it was his cousin who imprisoned him. Therefore, the protagonist should not trust anyone for the first time, even his childhood sweetheart. Normally, one should observe the situation for a while and feel that he can believe it. Ren Cai believed her. For example, Cao Cao and Yuan Shao had a very good relationship when they were young. They even went to rob their mother together. They could be said to be very good friends. Later, because of their interests, they became enemies. It can be said that in the eyes of the emperor and heroes, relatives and friends are unreliable. Only power is real. This is very inappropriate and does not fit the character of the emperor. To sum up, I personally don't like the yandere version of Ye Guyi, so I want to complain about it, which is the purpose of writing this review (I can't help it, it's really uncomfortable). All in all, although this book has some flaws, it is still a very satisfying fan fiction. (When I was reading this book, I skipped reading and did not finish reading the book. There may be some omissions in some places, resulting in some unreasonable comments. Moreover, this comment comes with strong personal subjectivity and strong personal emotions. Please readers, please do not be affected by this comment after reading it. This is a one-sided review. In the end, I did not take any money, and I did not maliciously score points. This review is based on my own feelings when watching it. At the same time, I also wish the author can write better and gain better visibility, and update it quickly )

Some people look very different from birth. Now that they have reached such a state, it is not easy for Xu Zihuang. Although his life is good, what about his heart?