The Innate Five Elements of Mortals

There is really no need to write it like this. Get a Heavenly Spirit Root. Get another golden finger. It can evolve into other spiritual roots and speed up cultivation. That's it. I don't understand, why would you make such a start? There are a few people watching you waste out there now. You don't even have an attraction.

Tianlinggen still goes to the Bloody Forbidden Land? If you go to a forbidden place and you don't get the golden box, why go to a forbidden place? With the plot? I thought I was going to the forbidden area to watch the live broadcast.

Rubbish, the more you look at it, the more awkward it becomes. Is Goldfinger rubbish?

If the author is not going to grab the little green bottle, there is no need to use a weak reason of being restricted from personal freedom to explain that the protagonist cannot grab the green bottle because of this. This reason is really retarded!

Han Li is a dark and despicable person. If you play with him, you will die and then the treasure will be his. It's really disgusting to lick such a person.

For things that have nothing to do with the plot, please keep them consistent with the original work. For example, the caves of Tianxing City and Star Palace are calculated every 100 years. Is it interesting if you change it to 20 years? A monk in the alchemy stage also retreats for 40 to 50 years. It is obviously unreasonable to renew the lease halfway.

The protagonist's character is rubbish, he licks Han Li too much, he keeps licking, and even keeps licking him until he falls out, his skills are rubbish, and he's even more of a noob in fighting. Where do you have the nerve to charge money?

This plug-in is quite funny. It only takes a few days to complete the martial arts while it takes more than a hundred years to complete the immortal cultivation technique. If the idle time is calculated based on the protagonist's qualifications, then this panel is useful. The question is whether it is calculated based on qualifications. I don't believe that the protagonist of a martial arts can complete it in just a few days based on his own qualifications. As a result, when cultivating immortals, the idle time is calculated based on qualifications. It is better to change the setting and calculate the idle time according to the surrounding spiritual energy concentration. You can rely on spiritual stones to speed up. Taking drugs and practicing by yourself is another calculation. This is a qualified plug-in, and there is no such thing as a bottleneck at all.

I really dare to charge for reading any kind of article. I don't care about other people's well-written articles, but you also charge for your running account.

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