Mortal: Starting from Accelerated Space

I originally wanted to give it five stars, but out of nowhere the guy named Yan fell in love with the protagonist, and so did the protagonist, and then he was speechless about going to the Chaos Star Sea Teleportation Array. Isn't this what I've never seen before?

The golden finger is too outrageous. Half an hour and a year, time accelerates more than 8,700 times. You are much more powerful than Dao Ancestor. Immortal King Dao Ancestor level giants are not as good as you. It is really unreasonable! ! In addition, since this kind of portable space exists, the best way is to major in alchemy, go crazy in a small place to cultivate immortality, and wait until you are strong enough to get the opportunity, instead of wasting a lot of time in the early stage to learn talismans, weapon refining, formations, etc. As long as you learn the beast control art, you can use your spiritual pets to gain strong combat power and squeeze out enough time to practice.

Why don't you accept the Nangong Bowl in the forbidden area? It's boring to cultivate immortality all the time. The protagonist has no shortage of elixirs and spiritual stones and has no use in trading medicines. As long as you take drugs and practice elixirs, you have to recruit some quality Taoist companions.

Personal opinion, if you have any questions, it's your opinion

According to the original work, the Six Demonic Dao Sects traveled approximately tens of thousands of kilometers to the Yue Kingdom. Is it credible to send three Qi Refining Stage sects to convince other Yuanying Stage sects? Think about a mayor or municipal party committee secretary sending a village chief to a remote poor area to persuade the municipal party committee secretary or mayor to change his mind. Is this feasible? I won't slap him to death.

Generally speaking, it's okay, but I feel that this book has a single female protagonist or dual female protagonists. The female protagonist seems to be from Yanjiabao, which is a big trouble. If it has a single female protagonist, the safest one is Xin Ruyin.

There must be a pitfall in accepting Yan Ruyan. His father is in conflict with the protagonist and he is messing around. I can't understand it after writing it in random words. He still wants to make progress for the sake of performance. Goodbye.

The timeline is confusing, the character lines are confusing, the map lines are confusing, For example, the timeline was just five or six years after I found Doctor Mo, and he said that the devil would invade in 10 years. You must know that Doctor Mo has not yet confiscated Han Li as his disciple, etc. There are still many confusing timelines. The map line is like the Bloody Forbidden Land. In the center, you have to use the orb after three days to dispel the fog. You didn't explain how you got in. You just went in to get the treasure and then came out. The treasure chest was obviously in an underground cave, but you said you had to go up the stairs? It's just the other way around, one is underground and the other is in the sky. The main plot is confusing. I write wherever I think of it. It's like there is no outline. In my opinion, a score of 7 points or so is too high, 6 points at most. If it is free or a member, you can just jump around and read it without thinking.

Well! ! Why don't you grow elixirs because there are no elixirs? ? So how many years were wasted? What is the logic of this? ? Can't the elixir be saved? Can't sell it? ?

Give you some advice, First, how much can space be accelerated to say no? ? ? Secondly, if you have traveled through time and cultivated immortality, don't write greetings or the like, it will look very embarrassing. Third, don't appear so naive. To be honest, mortals tend to be darker and selfish.