Sixteen Years Old, the Fourth Generation Mizukage

You code one word per second, and one hour is 3,600. There are 24 hours in a day. You sleep for 6 hours, eat for an hour, wash for an hour, and give you another hour for ideation. With 15 hours left, you can code 54,000 words, a chapter of 2,000 words, almost 27 chapters, but what does it mean that you only updated one chapter?

I can only say that it's a bit interesting, but I haven't finished reading it yet because there are too few. I've only seen more than 80 pictures? After flipping through the table of contents, it seems that there is no climax in the later part, so I have no interest in it. As for it being interesting, the author's idea of ​​unifying the world of Naruto is a trope that few people have written. Others are either to exterminate ninjas (very funny), or to maintain the current structure, with the protagonist ascending, which is understandable. How can I put it this way? I like reading this kind of fanfic the most, because being forewarned can avoid all regrets. But, I can't understand the idea of changing the fate of others. In reality, not to mention changing the pattern of the world, not even my own family can be changed. Maybe my ideas are different. What I want to see most when reading this kind of novel is the change in the protagonist's mentality. You can't write this novel. Let a big shot travel through time. If an ordinary person travels through time, even if he brings the keyboard of a network master, I think it is not enough. It is just an armchair talk. In fact, it will be much more difficult. Moreover, there are too many improvements in strength. People who write about this often ignore the mentality issue. I feel that just saying "more than ten years of ninja career" is not enough and incomplete for this transformation. It should be divided into several stages. I haven't thought about it specifically because I haven't thought about writing it yet. Here is just an idea. To describe a character should not just be upgraded today or upgraded tomorrow. It should be more comprehensive, covering the body, face, head, even hands, and younger brother. You can't just say that you are wearing clothes, right? Why is the book shortage getting more and more serious these days? Maybe it's because everyone's minds are impetuous, and it's hard to calm down and carefully carve out a book. Okay, that's all. I don't know if I can post it. Anyway, I don't want to type it a second time. If anyone sees this, thank you. Look at this stinky and long word. 😔

I don't even know what the meaning of Hinata Hanabi's time travel is.

There are really few Naruto stories where the protagonist travels to villages other than Konoha, let alone written ones. The author writes very well, especially the setting of runes, which is very good, but too few, Cui Geng! ! !

The part where Uzumaki Kushina gives birth to the Konoha battle is simply unwatchable. If one or two consultants were said to be only jonin-level, they would be killed by a sneak attack. But the author wrote that they had Kage-level strength. In this case, even if they had not fought for many years, they would not be killed by a sneak attack by Kakuzu and a five-scumbag White Zetsu. Second, Obito is really written as too strong. Shisui was defeated even though he knew Obito's information, and Obito didn't even consume much. 3. Sansho Fish Hanzo was not killed by the protagonist before and then Nagato was not killed either. I can't understand this. Now he is causing trouble again. This is disgusting. 4. It's funny that the protagonist actually thinks that a few ordinary jinchūriki plus Obito and Sansho Hanzo can destroy Konoha. Konoha has the third generation, Jiraiya, Tsunade, Nagato, Shisui and other Kage levels. Konoha also summoned more jounin. Moreover, Namikaze Minato and Uzumaki Kushina are temporarily unable to take action. Under such circumstances, it is at most because they suffered heavy losses in the battle in Konoha Village, so they cannot be destroyed. The protagonist, as a Mizukage, actually went to help Konoha. I am also speechless😒

I was persuaded to quit at the beginning, but it was a mess later on. The female character has no IQ and will always like the male protagonist no matter what she does. The male character will always be more like a retard and her experience will be depleted.

Written generally: The protagonist wants a coup, but the feeling of a coup is not written. The protagonist strolls through the plot as if on an outing. There are too many cheats in the system that are completely unnecessary and directly destroy the sense of immersion. The protagonist is very powerful in combat, but in order to keep the plot from collapsing, he can only find various reasons not to take action or to protect himself from the enemy. This is too deliberate. You might as well make the protagonist weaker. The description of the battle scenes is tasteless, because the protagonist always holds the wisdom pearl, Yun Danfengqing, resulting in no tension at all in the battle, and only the progress can be seen constantly advancing. All in all it's bland and tasteless.

It was fine in the beginning, but it was poisoned after Chapter 90. Hinata Hanabi traveled through time before, and now again, taking Kakashi with her, and then letting Jiraiya know about the future. Originally, it would have been better if the protagonist only knew the plot, but it turned out. . . . Speechless

I said before that the protagonist can counteract the side effects of killing Ashbone by relying on the Grasp of Immortality. Now it is said that the protagonist's body cannot bear it and he will be unable to take action for a long time, which is a bit of a slap in the face. I don't know if the author thinks the protagonist is too strong, so now he starts to weaken the protagonist, and then strengthens the enemies infinitely.

The plot is unique, but the strength of the golden finger is difficult to control. Just don't lose your combat power in the later stages. Also, Shisui will become famous in the battle with Kirikage. I hope the author can give a better way out. I personally love Shisui! ! !