Naruto: My Ninjutsu is Mediocre
About This Novel
There have been more than 50 large-scale battles in all directions of the Ninja world. It is difficult to discuss the rights and wrongs. However, historians have all noticed that it was on each ancient battlefield that the rise and fall of many Ninja clans were determined. Therefore, there has been a saying of the winner and the loser in ancient times. Back then, the First Hokage led the Thousand-Handed Ninjas, divided their troops into three groups to join the Fire Country, marched north, conquered Iwagakure, Sunagakure, and Kumogakure, and won a great victory! On the second day after the entire Fire Country was restored, all the countries surrendered one after another, seeing that the situation was over. Thirty years ago, I embarked on a journey from Konoha and started the Second Ninja World War. I used mediocre ninjutsu to conquer all the enemies I saw. Wherever I went, the people wholeheartedly welcomed me. I really took full advantage of the time. The state of vitality and all things competing is still before my eyes. I don't understand why everyone is talking about Uchiha Madara being trapped in the Valley of the End, as if this ancient battlefield of the ninja world is destined to be doomed for us. Just 30 years later, has this place turned into my burial place? No matter how you put it, the battle strength is 80,000 vs. 100,000, And I have the advantage! - Excerpted from the famous old immortal, the ninja among ninjas, the kidney destroyer, and the legendary ninja Hazhen who enjoys the lifetime allowance of the Konoha Senate "Speech before the Fourth Ninja War"
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There's a lot of talk, it's so rubbish, it talks a lot of useless stuff, and the plot progression is also slow.
It's such an abstract plot. It goes back and forth in the timeline (in the physical sense). It's a bit boring after returning from the Sage of Six Paths to the current timeline. The daily plot of raising children is so boring. Also, it actually feels like it will be finished when the protagonist comes back. Writing from now on feels like a continuation of the story. I want to write about the ancestor of Otsutsuki, but I am still writing about daily life, which seems very boring.
It feels pretty good, a bit like a long-lived one, but compared to Uzumaki, Yuzhen lives a more relaxed and indifferent life. The further you go, the more otherworldly and different you are from ordinary people. I look forward to the development of the plot in the future.
Looking at the introduction, you are probably talking about Xuzhou. I have the advantage.
Eat Bai Jue? Why didn't Bai Jue resist?
Looks good. I hope I don't become a eunuch.
The one chosen by the author is Shiro Zetsu. There is no ninja with Otsutsuki bloodline. Only this kind of alternative method is chosen. The process of directly awakening the Fudun in the subsequent battles is a bit abrupt.
Rubbish, if you can't write an ordinary story well, why are you still trying to travel through time? Do you understand?
Very good setting. From this resume, it seems that this novel cannot be finished without 2 million words. I have read a few chapters so far and the writing is fine. Even with this setting, 2 million or 3 million words are possible.
I really like it. Why did the author stop updating it? [Emot=default,18/]
It's really rubbish. There's too much rubbish that has nothing to do with the plot. It's equivalent to a useless monologue.
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Official(19)Scraped 20d ago
There's a lot of talk, it's so rubbish, it talks a lot of useless stuff, and the plot progression is also slow.
It's such an abstract plot. It goes back and forth in the timeline (in the physical sense). It's a bit boring after returning from the Sage of Six Paths to the current timeline. The daily plot of raising children is so boring. Also, it actually feels like it will be finished when the protagonist comes back. Writing from now on feels like a continuation of the story. I want to write about the ancestor of Otsutsuki, but I am still writing about daily life, which seems very boring.
It feels pretty good, a bit like a long-lived one, but compared to Uzumaki, Yuzhen lives a more relaxed and indifferent life. The further you go, the more otherworldly and different you are from ordinary people. I look forward to the development of the plot in the future.
Looking at the introduction, you are probably talking about Xuzhou. I have the advantage.
Eat Bai Jue? Why didn't Bai Jue resist?
Looks good. I hope I don't become a eunuch.
The one chosen by the author is Shiro Zetsu. There is no ninja with Otsutsuki bloodline. Only this kind of alternative method is chosen. The process of directly awakening the Fudun in the subsequent battles is a bit abrupt.
Rubbish, if you can't write an ordinary story well, why are you still trying to travel through time? Do you understand?
Very good setting. From this resume, it seems that this novel cannot be finished without 2 million words. I have read a few chapters so far and the writing is fine. Even with this setting, 2 million or 3 million words are possible.
I really like it. Why did the author stop updating it? [Emot=default,18/]
It's really rubbish. There's too much rubbish that has nothing to do with the plot. It's equivalent to a useless monologue.
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It's beautiful, and I feel like the writing on Red Leaves is getting better and better. This time it starts in the Warring States Period. The protagonist is the founder of Konoha, and time travel elements are added to it. (Dead pigeon)
At the beginning of the Warring States Period, the leader of the ninja tribe mistakenly ate the dying White Zetsu mushroom while escaping. From then on, he became a White Zetsu like Spider-Man. He would hold meetings with the White Zetsu from time to time, and he was like a Zetsu! The protagonist reorganizes the ninja clan into a wandering organization and is committed to continuously attracting new ninja clans to join. Currently, he has absorbed several ninja clans, established a base area, "sought refuge" with an interesting name, and successively met Senju, Uchiha, Sarutobi and other ninja clans... The style is quite interesting and the setting is novel!
The leader of the small ninja clan who traveled through time accidentally ate the dying White Zetsu mushroom while escaping. If you are bitten by a spider, you can become Spider-Man. If you eat a bite of White Zetsu, wouldn't you become White Zetsu? I've read a lot of Naruto fanfics, and this one is a bit new, so you can check it out. It's still a seedling at the moment, so I hope it can live up to expectations.
好太多了 推荐些火影同人里的小众 @日在火影 @火影里的国术宗师 @赤之沙尘 @这个火影不热血 @我的眼睛通晓忍界 @岩忍者日志 @木叶忍者之野火燎原
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