The Zombie Immortal in Naruto

There are no big mistakes, but there are a lot of small mistakes. For example, Naoki and Tsunade do not have the last name Senju. Tsunade was too old at 36 years old during World War II. Naoki had just graduated at this time, and the difference of more than 20 years is too exaggerated.

Can you master forbidden arts easily? It's so powerful. In terms of the rationality of the plot

It is obviously an update of Riwan, but after reading it, I felt like I didn't read it. It raised the readers' expectations and did not mention the topic of the next chapter. For example, the latest pictures of the solution to reincarnation in the dirty land. Can you believe that this was the last sentence at the end of this chapter of Ten Thousand Characters that he used as the title? If the word count has been reduced or the book is finished, then this is not a big problem. Chasing updates is really torture It's understandable that the protagonist's plan is not made clear. The problem is that he only said that he has a plan. For example, at the current stage, the protagonist plans to die once (wearing a body, compared to the natives who are weak and sick and have less chakra, so he wants to change his body). This was the plan at the beginning, but now it's 470,000 words, so I can only say The plan is indeed progressing. Readers can follow the plot and watch it confusedly. The current update seems to have finally reached the point of interest. To put it simply, the original body is no longer needed. He asked Orochimaru to cultivate an artificial body with Hashirama cells + Sharingan, and then used the art of spiritual transformation + the reincarnation of dirty soil. It is gone, tsk. I can only say that it will last for a few days. When the time comes, you can guess the content by reading the title, so as not to whet your appetite all the time.

Just average. The writing of Obito is great. He is an arrogant person from the beginning to the end, and the other characters' personalities have also changed!

I am looking for the power of thinking. The boyfriend who used the reincarnation technique to resurrect Tsunade also analyzed it and found out that it was really poisonous to rush to make do with Tsunade and the child.

Has the author actually watched Naruto? Based on the situation of the protagonist you wrote, Aunt Snake would not even look down on you when doing experiments, let alone you at all. As for the school, it obviously has no origin since it has no personnel. Even if the orphanage accepts you, you are not qualified to go to the school. Just treat it as if you have it. But how can it be possible to accept you as a rotten sweet potato when your physical condition is worse than that of a commoner?

So expensive! Chapter 25 is more than 9 yuan. Although it looks good, it is not so expensive!

Using corpses was quite novel at first, but later I transplanted the Wood Release and Sharingan.

I feel like there is no main plot at the end. I don't know what the protagonist wants to do. Once I have the power, I feel like I am starting to do my own thing.

It's so good that I can't put it down and I can't wait for the author to increase production capacity. 6,000 Words a day is not enough!