
Demon Slayer: Deliverance
by Show Off
About This Novel
Reborn in the world of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, he vowed to change those regrets (Non-infinite stream, non-system stream, single heroine Masaki, the protagonist is Tanjiro's brother) (Opened a new book "Dragon Clan: Chu Zihang's Restart Journey")
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Official(17)Scraped 1mo ago
writing style writing style
It's the author's first time writing a novel. The writing style is too different. The plot description, dialogue description, character description, emotional description, scene description, and fighting description are all at the level of a novice, the kind of composition written by an elementary school student. I don't know if you are an old bookworm, but even if it is your first time writing a novel, the writing style should not be so bad. But I still give you 4 stars, come on
I just finished reading the Castle Chapter of Demon Slayer.
It's true that all kinds of anime are like that. The more you watch them, the more regrets you have. But if there are no regrets, they are just ordinary people. There are no ups and downs in the story. There are too many regrets. Is the anime good? Regret does not affect? The impact is huge, so I can only read the anime and then use my brain to make up for these regrets. Second creation of the novel is also a great way. Everyone has different opinions and regrets, but it is a way to make up for it. It is great that the author can create. Really, after all, brainstorming cannot fill the gaps intuitively! 👍
It's best to mark the CPs in the book. I, a single-minded fan of Qiangtu and Lei Yiren, felt a bit dead after reading half of it.
It's good, not bad, the ending is great but a bit short
Thank you so much for saving so many lives. (I cried so hard when Brother Yanzhu died, thank you for saving him.) The story of Kamado Guxuan has never ended. Reincarnation is just a new beginning. I hope that the reincarnated Kamado Guxuan can create a new story in this world without ghosts. Come on, I support you! Come on! (ง•̀_•́)ง
Woohoo, eldest brother finally won't leave.
I feel like this is a good way to make up for our unhappiness.
Very well written. Hope to keep working hard
personal opinion
Author, I personally think that you are not suitable for writing this kind of fan fiction, because you are a novice, and the fighting scenes make your writing a bit unremarkable. You can try writing daily stories first to gain some writing experience.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(17)Scraped 1mo ago
writing style writing style
It's the author's first time writing a novel. The writing style is too different. The plot description, dialogue description, character description, emotional description, scene description, and fighting description are all at the level of a novice, the kind of composition written by an elementary school student. I don't know if you are an old bookworm, but even if it is your first time writing a novel, the writing style should not be so bad. But I still give you 4 stars, come on
I just finished reading the Castle Chapter of Demon Slayer.
It's true that all kinds of anime are like that. The more you watch them, the more regrets you have. But if there are no regrets, they are just ordinary people. There are no ups and downs in the story. There are too many regrets. Is the anime good? Regret does not affect? The impact is huge, so I can only read the anime and then use my brain to make up for these regrets. Second creation of the novel is also a great way. Everyone has different opinions and regrets, but it is a way to make up for it. It is great that the author can create. Really, after all, brainstorming cannot fill the gaps intuitively! 👍
It's best to mark the CPs in the book. I, a single-minded fan of Qiangtu and Lei Yiren, felt a bit dead after reading half of it.
It's good, not bad, the ending is great but a bit short
Thank you so much for saving so many lives. (I cried so hard when Brother Yanzhu died, thank you for saving him.) The story of Kamado Guxuan has never ended. Reincarnation is just a new beginning. I hope that the reincarnated Kamado Guxuan can create a new story in this world without ghosts. Come on, I support you! Come on! (ง•̀_•́)ง
Woohoo, eldest brother finally won't leave.
I feel like this is a good way to make up for our unhappiness.
Very well written. Hope to keep working hard
personal opinion
Author, I personally think that you are not suitable for writing this kind of fan fiction, because you are a novice, and the fighting scenes make your writing a bit unremarkable. You can try writing daily stories first to gain some writing experience.










