Luo Xiaohei's Battle Notes: Becoming a Disciple of Infinity with Lu Ye

The rest is fine, except that the idea of ​​​​the pig's feet is a bit naive. I saw that "the same kind will not attack the same kind". Is this the thought of a time traveler? Let's not talk about ancient wars, let's talk about the various vicious events today, none of which were caused by the same kind of people.

It's not stable. The author has too many ideas and it's too watery.

If you have any characters you want to see, you can tell me about them, or you can just send pictures (preferably pictures, so that I don't have to look for pictures anymore, just be lazy for a little bit, hehe~)

This is a good fan novel, trying to piece together a story line about the past from the limited public information, and the characters are quite consistent with the image of the movie. There is no need to create a bitter and resentful protagonist in an anime with a relaxed daily theme. It is better to resolve the protagonist's heart problems later (there are signs of resolution now, for example, the pursuit of strength is no longer urgent, and combat effectiveness is not important in daily episodes). There is no need to delve into the conflict between human beings and monsters. This is too broad and difficult to delve into. In reality, there is no good solution, let alone in this world of personal power. Do we want to repeat the old tune of the pseudo-philosopher king who single-handedly defeats the world? Apart from this, there are only two plot points that affect the reading experience. First, every time when the protagonist's talent is mentioned, Infinite and Hei must be compared. Is this a quirk? It's better than once or twice. Each time I compared and suppressed the protagonist. I understand that the first thing to do when writing a fanfic is to respect the original work, but this book also has a protagonist. Second, there is no need to add "joke" after a joke every time. Fans are basically fans, everyone knows the jokes, and everyone knows that the author is making jokes, so there is no need to add superfluous things and make jokes.

Although I am a fan of Luo Xiaohei Zhanji, I am still curious about when the author plans to write about the junior brother. I have no problem reading it so far. The characters are good, the writing is comfortable, and the character creation is not OOC. Some novels make Lu Ye inexplicable, and Xiao Hei is very weak and makes me cry at all times. It is very satisfying to read www. I can't wait to see the plot of the senior brother and the elder sister doting on the junior brother. Long live Kinmen www

The vindictive lynx, the petty lynx, the lazy lynx

The overall content is actually quite good. The biggest problem is the weak positioning of the protagonist. He is born with a powerful soul + 24-hour training + space system. He worries all day long that he cannot beat the six-year-old and eight-year-old Xiaohei. Even the speed of improvement through 24-hour training is the same as Luye, which is the strength of a young genius. , But it is not in line with the strength of the protagonist. It is a bit difficult to keep up with the mention of Xiao Hei and Infinite Power from time to time. However, many details in the content are still handled well, such as the pastry shooting incident, so it is generally good, but it is best to block the repeated parts of Xiao Hei, which is boring and boring.

Hurry up, hurry up, is there any rules for more updates?

The plot is very exciting, keep working hard

The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is just a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.