I Play Ninjutsu in the Juju Kaiba!
by Remembering The Great Hierarch
About This Novel
If you also want to read the author's spells, please search "I am creating a hot weapon with spells", a simple world of spells. Don't invite me, I've traveled through time. He came to this world where only madmen can live, but he has the ninja system in Naruto; How will Xia Luo survive? To become a madman and go crazy together with a bunch of cursed spirits, Or do you just want to be a normal person?
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(32)Scraped 18d ago
Mainly in terms of personality
Since the protagonist's predecessor is a medical student, his character shouldn't be so weak. To be honest, you don't have perseverance and courage to become a medical student. You might as well set the protagonist's predecessor to be an unemployed vagrant.
It's ok, I've tested the poison
Overall, it's okay, but there are some issues with the details. The heroine is Zenin Maki, a single heroine, and the subsequent plot of death and return is too fast, the 'angel' disappears from the scene, and the Chinese special class is killed instantly. At least it is a curse spirit that has existed for many years, and it should have some background. Compared with Japan, it is weird (personal opinion)
That universal scroll is so buggy, can it be made into a one-time consumable? It's good to be able to summon only one and then disappear. Otherwise, the author won't be bothered by the writing of hundreds of psychic beasts in the future. I'm also annoyed by the sage mode. It's too hasty, otherwise it will be at least an S-level ninjutsu and the Tibetan Mastiff Shura. There was no problem when you wrote it before. Now that the protagonist can summon psychic beasts, it feels too awkward for you to write it. You don't want to write Shura as a person who grows up to be more powerful than the Kyuubi, right? That's really poisonous -_-|| Then write that, the universal scroll is of no use, it is better to write that the protagonist trains Shura with all his strength and makes him as powerful as the tailed beast😪
Didn't watch it
Author, do you have a good brother named, I play spells in the ninja world? I have seen it before.
Really poisonous
Let's not talk about collecting a Tibetan mastiff as a pet. People and dogs can produce magical power on their own. The protagonist is like a loser. The rubbish system and the lottery are all thank you for patronage. This kind of plot is rancid and smelly.
There's no problem with Chinese comics. If you're a foreign fan, you can do this.
This dialogue is really awkward. For foreign fans, the dialogue can match the style of martial arts, and there are some idioms. It is no problem to write this dialogue in Chinese comics, but it will be very awkward when it comes to foreign fans, and some domestic jokes will also be very embarrassing and very conflicting.
At the beginning, I felt that the author's level was not very high. Some parts read like it was written by a junior high school student.
I haven't read much, so I won't make too many comments. The main reason is that the character description is really not good. However, as an ordinary person, it is normal to be a little cautious. Come on, author, remember to improve your writing skills.
The protagonist is a complete waste. If there is no system, he doesn't even know how to die. He was still a doctor during his lifetime. I laughed to death. The character of a doctor is so weak.
Isn't the infinite three magatama the infinite resurrection coins? Doesn't the author plan to get an Izanagi?
An extremely useless protagonist and system.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(32)Scraped 18d ago
Mainly in terms of personality
Since the protagonist's predecessor is a medical student, his character shouldn't be so weak. To be honest, you don't have perseverance and courage to become a medical student. You might as well set the protagonist's predecessor to be an unemployed vagrant.
It's ok, I've tested the poison
Overall, it's okay, but there are some issues with the details. The heroine is Zenin Maki, a single heroine, and the subsequent plot of death and return is too fast, the 'angel' disappears from the scene, and the Chinese special class is killed instantly. At least it is a curse spirit that has existed for many years, and it should have some background. Compared with Japan, it is weird (personal opinion)
That universal scroll is so buggy, can it be made into a one-time consumable? It's good to be able to summon only one and then disappear. Otherwise, the author won't be bothered by the writing of hundreds of psychic beasts in the future. I'm also annoyed by the sage mode. It's too hasty, otherwise it will be at least an S-level ninjutsu and the Tibetan Mastiff Shura. There was no problem when you wrote it before. Now that the protagonist can summon psychic beasts, it feels too awkward for you to write it. You don't want to write Shura as a person who grows up to be more powerful than the Kyuubi, right? That's really poisonous -_-|| Then write that, the universal scroll is of no use, it is better to write that the protagonist trains Shura with all his strength and makes him as powerful as the tailed beast😪
Didn't watch it
Author, do you have a good brother named, I play spells in the ninja world? I have seen it before.
Really poisonous
Let's not talk about collecting a Tibetan mastiff as a pet. People and dogs can produce magical power on their own. The protagonist is like a loser. The rubbish system and the lottery are all thank you for patronage. This kind of plot is rancid and smelly.
There's no problem with Chinese comics. If you're a foreign fan, you can do this.
This dialogue is really awkward. For foreign fans, the dialogue can match the style of martial arts, and there are some idioms. It is no problem to write this dialogue in Chinese comics, but it will be very awkward when it comes to foreign fans, and some domestic jokes will also be very embarrassing and very conflicting.
At the beginning, I felt that the author's level was not very high. Some parts read like it was written by a junior high school student.
I haven't read much, so I won't make too many comments. The main reason is that the character description is really not good. However, as an ordinary person, it is normal to be a little cautious. Come on, author, remember to improve your writing skills.
The protagonist is a complete waste. If there is no system, he doesn't even know how to die. He was still a doctor during his lifetime. I laughed to death. The character of a doctor is so weak.
Isn't the infinite three magatama the infinite resurrection coins? Doesn't the author plan to get an Izanagi?
An extremely useless protagonist and system.
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