Dou Po: Golden Thunder Weapon Refiner, Holy Body Unparalleled

I saw that some readers don't like Yun Yun and hope that Yun Yun is not the heroine. The author is also undecided, so I leave it to the readers to decide. If you want to receive Yunyun's likes, if you don't want to, please deduct 1 below the comment. The author will decide whether to accept or not based on the number of likes and comments. I also hope that all readers will actively participate, otherwise the author really does not know the preferences of most readers.

The first point is that you spent 6 years in order to lick, instead of going to the academy and relying on your own savings to buy the exercises. Don't talk about the fact that Jiangnan Academy never came to recruit students. It was clearly stated that they only come every few years. This has discouraged a large number of readers, and the author is still talking harshly. Why are we willing to spend money to read the follow-up? The second point is that such a 9-year-old fighter with such a good talent has become a poisonous point for the author, wasting five or six years in vain. He changed his age slightly because he wanted to break through as a fighter. If he missed the academy enrollment, he could only wait for the next time, but he shouldn't be stubborn. The third point is that the idea of refining weapons is really good, but since I don't have a famous teacher, I have to figure it out on my own, and my own strength is only that of a fighter, so I figured it out so easily that it makes people abandon the book completely. In the eyes of old bookworms like us, Demon Chief and Sky Demon Phoenix Wings are already like weapon refining. To put it another way, my family's experience in making magical nuclear weapons is not blacksmithing experience, or apprenticeship, but in a word, I have rich blacksmithing experience, and I figured it out by myself. The final outcome is that the author obviously no longer writes a book, but he still goes his own way. Sooner or later, it will have the same poisonous points as the previous books, causing no one to read it, and it will end up unfinished.

The protagonist is not forced to eat hard, Chun sb, the nine-year-old fighter is under the nose of the Xiao family, the Xiao family is all sb, right?

No, buddy, you are too abstract. You already said that the protagonist broke through to the Dou Zhi age at the age of nine, and Xiao Yan did not break through the Dou Zhi until he was 11 years old. Then Xiao Yan was called a once-in-a-hundred-year genius in the Gamma Empire. When the protagonist breaks through as a fighter at the age of nine, as long as his parents are normal and have some brains, they will definitely want the protagonist to join a better force, not to mention joining the Gamma Empire royal family or the Yunlan Sect, so that he will have a good future and become a big shot in the party, moving the wind and rain. Then you directly abstract it to the point of asking the protagonist's parents to work as mercenaries to make money. Is this something a normal person can think of? The logic doesn't make sense. If you write it like this, you might as well just write the protagonist and join the Xiao family directly. This is simple and clear, and we won't feel awkward looking at it. It is very abstract to portray a protagonist who is a peerless genius and wants to be on the same level as Xiao Yan.

If you say it's a good masterpiece, go read the original work. After reading the original work, you will still feel that the original work is more enjoyable... This fanfic is purely based on some trolls to get good reviews! It's disgusting to watch female videos. From Chapter 1 to Chapter 10, how could the protagonist have such an idiotic idea? Moreover, who is the wise man who said that this book is logical and that the combat power will not collapse? Based on this plot logic and the stupid setting, when Potato comes, he has to start complaining. If he has this talent, he still has to wait for Xiao Yan? Just say it if you want to lick the dog, it made me laugh to death! The worst book among the fics

Abuse stories, I read novels to relieve my boredom, not to be abused. Goodbye abuse stories 😔 When the Snake Tribe was forced in various ways, when Medusa was forcing the protagonist, she also said that she would not accept suicide as a resistance. He would not be able to die even if he wanted to. Please come in if you can accept it.

I hope there won't be too many female leads, maybe three or four, and the emotional scenes will be written more delicately. Have you considered the Queen, Zi Yan, Qing Lin, and the Little Medical Fairy? Personally, I quite like them. I don't really like Yun Yun as the female lead. After all, she really can't keep up with the rhythm.

It makes me laugh. The videos on Kuaishou have more than 10,000 views, but not many people have read the novel.

When I was 9 years old, I had trained to the point where I no longer had any suitable martial arts skills for a fighter. I couldn't go to Canaan Academy, so I really couldn't join the Yunlan Sect. Frankly, he has been fighting weapons in Wuhan for 6 years and saved gold coins to buy a yellow-level low-level Kung Fu book. He is also a talented person.

The main character is really la. He stopped practicing Kung Fu just because his adoptive parents sent him cultivation skills. The writing of the good brother Xiao Yan is also funny. The friendship and talent are not worth the Kung Fu. Even if the Huang class is low, the protagonist will not stagnate. He just delayed the Kung Fu until the beginning of the plot. Yao Lao's collection is so big that he doesn't even have the Kung Fu for cultivating Jin Lei. Making money by blacksmithing is still monopolized. Befriending the young master of the Xiao family, even if he is already useless, will not be able to protect a young fighter. Is he short of your ten gold coins to be against the young master of the Xiao family? Is it okay to use the skills to create an iron-cutting weapon, and then show up to sell it by yourself, only to be visited by Xiao Yan, and take it back to his father? Xiao Zhan cheated on his son's good friend? Will he die if he sells it to Mittel? A big businessman will covet your three melons and two dates? It seems that he is walking steadily, but in fact, Xiao Zhao San is always cautious and unsatisfactory, and he is not as good as those clever and clever articles.