Dou Po: Internal Scrolling Practice, Scrolling and Crying Xiao Yan
About This Novel
Xiao Yang traveled to Dou Po Cang Qiong and became Xiao Yan's cousin. I wanted to lie flat all the way and wait for Xiao Yan to break through the Dou Emperor and use the power of his blood to become a Dou Saint. Unexpectedly, the system suddenly fell from the sky. The system can set its own tasks. As a result, Xiao Yang began to involute his own cultivation path. [Task: Practice Kaishan Fist 100 times, reward: Kaishan Fist proficiency +1] [Mission: Break through to the eighth level of Dou Qi, reward: Physique +1, Root Bone +1, and a portion of Foundation Building Spiritual Liquid] [Task: Defeat Xiao Yan in the competition, reward: Luck +10, Comprehension +10, and a portion of Foundation-Building Divine Liquid] [Mission: Capture the heart of the little medical fairy, reward: Charm +10, "Netherworld Poison Skill"] ... In this way, Henry Zhang continued to set up tasks for himself and became crazy. Whether it is cultivation, soul power or medicine refining ability, Henry Zhang is far superior to his peers. Xiao Yan cried. He had a teacher who was known as the best alchemist in the mainland, and he also had the "Burning Jue" that could be evolved, but he still couldn't defeat Xiao Yang. Many years later, Emperor Hun Tian was finally ready and started to implement his plan. When he was about to snatch the original ancient jade from the Xiao clan, a figure appeared. "Jie Jie Jie, Soul Emperor, prepare to die!"
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Official(97)Scraped 3d ago
Seeing that Hu Xiaoxuner was born in the Xiao family but was not intercepted, I can only say that I am speechless. She has made a lot of enemies for nothing, and she is still the nanny type.
First of all, if the author does not choose to let the protagonist intercept Hu Xiaoxun'er, then there is no need to help the protagonist write to the Xiao family, because how to say it? It just feels very boring. If you write like this, although most fan fiction writers have similar trajectories, they have their own, for example, creation and writing methods. So how do you say that your writing is more like it? It's just that adding one more person on the road to anti-inflammatory is no longer interesting. Because adding this protagonist is even more unnecessary. Why? You cause a lot of trouble for no reason. I don't know if you are writing a cool article or something else?
I don't know what you think. You all know that nine years of compulsory education. Don't you know that it can prevent inflammation? Well, what, what? I have nine years of compulsory education, unlike Xiao Yan, can't you stop it? You write a hammer there, and I'm reading fan fiction, but I'm reading their original work, right? If you're like this, I might as well just go read the original work. Sometimes I really don't understand what the names of those of you who write fan fiction should be when you write fan fiction? There is also some insistence on following the plot. Don't grab the opportunity. Don't fight for beauty, yes, you have a good outlook on life, you are a good person. It's such a damn good person to look at someone who clearly knew what was going to happen and didn't try to stop it. If you write like this, I might as well just read the original work and then show you the fanfic. The names are all written by the original author. Following the plot, who would say that you don't rob or seize anything here. But I look at a hammer.
It's really strange that a bunch of bad reviews can give you an 8.4 Rating.
If Xun'er and Yafei don't take the Xiao family route, Liang should do it.
If you don't have a heaven-level fighting skill, you dare to run to the Warcraft Mountains. You really treat the second-, third-, and fourth-level monsters in the Warcraft Mountains as domestic animals and the mercenaries in the Warcraft Mountains as charity.
It's understandable that he didn't accept Hu Xun'er after he was born in the Xiao family. He didn't even accept Yafei. He even used Yafei to tease Xiao Yan and let Xun'er and Yafei have sex. Is this a harem story? I don't understand harem stories anymore
He practiced so slowly that he could barely keep up with Xiao Yan's progress.
Are you trying to save Xiao Zhan by relying on your strength as a great fighting master or fighting spirit? , Don't even think about it without Dou Zong or Dou Zun
Highly recommended, it's right not to accept Xun'er
It took a long time to write such a strong Golden Finger, but it is still near the peak of Dou Si, and the emotional scenes are not outstanding.
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Official(97)Scraped 3d ago
Seeing that Hu Xiaoxuner was born in the Xiao family but was not intercepted, I can only say that I am speechless. She has made a lot of enemies for nothing, and she is still the nanny type.
First of all, if the author does not choose to let the protagonist intercept Hu Xiaoxun'er, then there is no need to help the protagonist write to the Xiao family, because how to say it? It just feels very boring. If you write like this, although most fan fiction writers have similar trajectories, they have their own, for example, creation and writing methods. So how do you say that your writing is more like it? It's just that adding one more person on the road to anti-inflammatory is no longer interesting. Because adding this protagonist is even more unnecessary. Why? You cause a lot of trouble for no reason. I don't know if you are writing a cool article or something else?
I don't know what you think. You all know that nine years of compulsory education. Don't you know that it can prevent inflammation? Well, what, what? I have nine years of compulsory education, unlike Xiao Yan, can't you stop it? You write a hammer there, and I'm reading fan fiction, but I'm reading their original work, right? If you're like this, I might as well just go read the original work. Sometimes I really don't understand what the names of those of you who write fan fiction should be when you write fan fiction? There is also some insistence on following the plot. Don't grab the opportunity. Don't fight for beauty, yes, you have a good outlook on life, you are a good person. It's such a damn good person to look at someone who clearly knew what was going to happen and didn't try to stop it. If you write like this, I might as well just read the original work and then show you the fanfic. The names are all written by the original author. Following the plot, who would say that you don't rob or seize anything here. But I look at a hammer.
It's really strange that a bunch of bad reviews can give you an 8.4 Rating.
If Xun'er and Yafei don't take the Xiao family route, Liang should do it.
If you don't have a heaven-level fighting skill, you dare to run to the Warcraft Mountains. You really treat the second-, third-, and fourth-level monsters in the Warcraft Mountains as domestic animals and the mercenaries in the Warcraft Mountains as charity.
It's understandable that he didn't accept Hu Xun'er after he was born in the Xiao family. He didn't even accept Yafei. He even used Yafei to tease Xiao Yan and let Xun'er and Yafei have sex. Is this a harem story? I don't understand harem stories anymore
He practiced so slowly that he could barely keep up with Xiao Yan's progress.
Are you trying to save Xiao Zhan by relying on your strength as a great fighting master or fighting spirit? , Don't even think about it without Dou Zong or Dou Zun
Highly recommended, it's right not to accept Xun'er
It took a long time to write such a strong Golden Finger, but it is still near the peak of Dou Si, and the emotional scenes are not outstanding.
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