
The Old Monster Who Survives the Tribulation in the World of Konoha
by Salted Fish Love To Bask In The Sun
About This Novel
"Six Paths Immortal? Three Holy Lands? Five Ninja Villages? A bunch of local chickens and dogs. Their practice is rough and inferior, but their tone is quite bad."
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Official(39)Scraped 11d ago
I can't stand this protagonist
If you want to practice, you can only kill people, but you can't even make a spirit gathering array?
I'm so embarrassed watching it. As a Naruto fan, you don't even know the plot, and you explain it like crazy.
Don't tell me, write a fan story and explain it, why don't you write it as a second-person pig's feet who knows the plot?
Introduction to third-rate
No one wanted to read it at first glance after seeing the introduction. As soon as I walked in, I smelled like a villain. How arrogant someone must be to say something like this. There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world. Don't underestimate others casually.
After reading the introduction
I have to say that the stupidest people in the world are those who are self-righteous. Don't think that you are the strongest. You must know that there are people outside the world, and the future of self-righteous people will be like that.
After seeing the introduction, I felt like a third-rate villain, and I had no desire to watch it at all.
well enough
The writing is good and the story is also good. It's just that the protagonist has never watched Naruto. It doesn't matter if you have traveled through time or Uchiha doesn't have the Sharingan or anything like that. I really can't stand it! It would be better if you were a commoner with no bloodline limit. Since you have nothing, you don't want anything from Naruto. You, the author, might as well write about other worlds. This is disgusting for Naruto fans, you know? Personally, I suggest you have a Sharingan eye or something.
Are you serious about the last chapter? Write repeatedly
If you are awesome, I will obey you.
Has the author watched Naruto?
How come a villain knows Kaguya Otsutsuki? Orochimaru knows that Kaguya ate the fruit of the sacred tree...
Really tired
I feel uncomfortable. Keep talking.
Very average
The protagonist's sense of existence is too weak, and the only way he can practice is to kill people.
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Community(0)
Official(39)Scraped 11d ago
I can't stand this protagonist
If you want to practice, you can only kill people, but you can't even make a spirit gathering array?
I'm so embarrassed watching it. As a Naruto fan, you don't even know the plot, and you explain it like crazy.
Don't tell me, write a fan story and explain it, why don't you write it as a second-person pig's feet who knows the plot?
Introduction to third-rate
No one wanted to read it at first glance after seeing the introduction. As soon as I walked in, I smelled like a villain. How arrogant someone must be to say something like this. There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world. Don't underestimate others casually.
After reading the introduction
I have to say that the stupidest people in the world are those who are self-righteous. Don't think that you are the strongest. You must know that there are people outside the world, and the future of self-righteous people will be like that.
After seeing the introduction, I felt like a third-rate villain, and I had no desire to watch it at all.
well enough
The writing is good and the story is also good. It's just that the protagonist has never watched Naruto. It doesn't matter if you have traveled through time or Uchiha doesn't have the Sharingan or anything like that. I really can't stand it! It would be better if you were a commoner with no bloodline limit. Since you have nothing, you don't want anything from Naruto. You, the author, might as well write about other worlds. This is disgusting for Naruto fans, you know? Personally, I suggest you have a Sharingan eye or something.
Are you serious about the last chapter? Write repeatedly
If you are awesome, I will obey you.
Has the author watched Naruto?
How come a villain knows Kaguya Otsutsuki? Orochimaru knows that Kaguya ate the fruit of the sacred tree...
Really tired
I feel uncomfortable. Keep talking.
Very average
The protagonist's sense of existence is too weak, and the only way he can practice is to kill people.
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Official(2)
Type one: It can be seen that it is a ticket-making work, but unexpectedly I insist on writing it down. Because of the fun, it is written that the power is invincible. The three immortals kill whenever they want, and the various original characters kill when they want. Planting medicine and harvesting are also cunning. Also because of the fun, the plot lacks planning, but it's okay and quite enjoyable. Rating: Food and grass are on the upper side




Traveling through the world of Naruto with a technique for cultivating immortals, the author's writing style is pretty good, and the golden finger is just right. The only worry is that the upgrade is too fast, so don't just wait and see it every second.













