What Bad Intentions Can an Alchemist Have?
by Seven Kills
About This Novel
Su Mu, a hardcore player of "Zhutian" who has been practicing for thirteen years. Bring the [Miracle Alchemist] template to travel to the world before the plot of "Heavens" begins. Six years later, alien gods will break through Blue Star and enslave the entire world. 70% Of all living things in the world will die. In order to survive, Su Mu used the "Miracle Alchemist" template as a fulcrum while trembling, and planned and planned like a toddler in Handan, trying to leverage the general trend of the world and protect himself. ... Six years later, Ragnarok suddenly came, and foreign gods died one after another for nine days. Su Mu silently put away the latest model of the 135th generation [Border-Breaking God-Killing Sniper] and washed the divine blood from his hands. "I'm just an ordinary alchemist. I just tried sniping. Ragnarok has nothing to do with me!" After that-- While experimenting with the [Star Destroyer Cannon], the Azure Empire's home planet disintegrated. When experimenting with the [Dimension Fusion Device], the Light God Realm connected with the Abyss. When experimenting with [Black Hole Annihilation Bomb] and, ah, [Black Hole Engine], the Mechanical God Realm was directly swallowed by a black hole. Su Mu said: "This is just a coincidence and has nothing to do with me. I am just an alchemist, what bad intentions can I have?"
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Official(11)Scraped 6d ago
After reading more than 40 chapters, the protagonist's character and attitude are acceptable, but after reading the narration of the protagonist's inner feelings, I can abandon it. It feels like a fairy cultivator picking up girls in the city. It is best not to have emotional scenes in online articles. You can just write about hooks and listening to music. No one will say anything, but if you write too detailed about it, the price of the book will be reduced.
You can read it in the book wasteland
It's a good work, but there are some flaws in its logic. Although it's not so bad that the woman can't walk, it still feels like a light lick.
A bit deviated from the profession
It can be seen that the author's writing is still acceptable, but the early plot almost deviates from the main profession. You are mechanically ascending, martial arts, sword-wielding and immortal, and you also use the main alchemy profession as a mechanic. I really don't see the feeling of an alchemist at all, and you also added a miracle. The author, your miracle is added to martial arts training and technological immortality. . I feel like the fishing guy is the essence, okay? The professional storyline of the fishing guy is really attractive!
Extremely poisonous
Writing a novel is telling a story, and the story must be coherent It talks about a bunch of background panels at the beginning, and then talks about hanging and golden fingers, which is no problem. Then it says that in a few months there will be millions of people who will have a sense of urgency to advance the main story, which is also no problem. Now that these things have been explained, is it time to seize the opportunity? Or describe the career template in detail? If the author doesn't tell me, I won't. I've described something so awesome in the outside world. I have to do the task of cleaning the toilet and go out to educate the shrew next door. To be honest, it's easy to say that you started like this. You have to first describe how awesome all the world is, and then educate the shrew. Your gap is too big, and it is simply extremely poisonous. Then let's talk about the career system For reality it is history, for games it is history within history The problem with this system is that Don't players and natives learn and summarize? Of course, whoever dumps this kind of meat pigeon more often will be the best, right? This is why meat pigeon games are difficult to balance. They can only be played in real-time, such as golden shovels or dungeons. Damn it, it poisoned me to death
It's actually a good book, but I don't like the depiction of women in it. Around Chapter 40, there was a psychological description with a woman in it. When I saw that, I felt that it was a precursor to multiple female protagonists, so I gave up the book. Although I don't know if there is currently no heroine, only one, or more, but I guess there is a high probability of it. If you like it, you can check it out. The content is pretty good.
Hurry up update Hurry up update
More, I only have 4 monthly passes in my hand, how much you can get is up to you, the author.
The author can write slower, I mean expand on the details?
I thought the author had sent it, but unexpectedly it came back to life. The previous book was very well written
It's not cool enough, and it's still far behind Super Mechanic. I hope the author can refer to the works of great masters more and think about it better.
Let's change the title of the book. We won't write about alchemy in less than 20 chapters.
I quite like this setting. Better than those cool articles that are too brainless
Rating
Community(0)
Official(11)Scraped 6d ago
After reading more than 40 chapters, the protagonist's character and attitude are acceptable, but after reading the narration of the protagonist's inner feelings, I can abandon it. It feels like a fairy cultivator picking up girls in the city. It is best not to have emotional scenes in online articles. You can just write about hooks and listening to music. No one will say anything, but if you write too detailed about it, the price of the book will be reduced.
You can read it in the book wasteland
It's a good work, but there are some flaws in its logic. Although it's not so bad that the woman can't walk, it still feels like a light lick.
A bit deviated from the profession
It can be seen that the author's writing is still acceptable, but the early plot almost deviates from the main profession. You are mechanically ascending, martial arts, sword-wielding and immortal, and you also use the main alchemy profession as a mechanic. I really don't see the feeling of an alchemist at all, and you also added a miracle. The author, your miracle is added to martial arts training and technological immortality. . I feel like the fishing guy is the essence, okay? The professional storyline of the fishing guy is really attractive!
Extremely poisonous
Writing a novel is telling a story, and the story must be coherent It talks about a bunch of background panels at the beginning, and then talks about hanging and golden fingers, which is no problem. Then it says that in a few months there will be millions of people who will have a sense of urgency to advance the main story, which is also no problem. Now that these things have been explained, is it time to seize the opportunity? Or describe the career template in detail? If the author doesn't tell me, I won't. I've described something so awesome in the outside world. I have to do the task of cleaning the toilet and go out to educate the shrew next door. To be honest, it's easy to say that you started like this. You have to first describe how awesome all the world is, and then educate the shrew. Your gap is too big, and it is simply extremely poisonous. Then let's talk about the career system For reality it is history, for games it is history within history The problem with this system is that Don't players and natives learn and summarize? Of course, whoever dumps this kind of meat pigeon more often will be the best, right? This is why meat pigeon games are difficult to balance. They can only be played in real-time, such as golden shovels or dungeons. Damn it, it poisoned me to death
It's actually a good book, but I don't like the depiction of women in it. Around Chapter 40, there was a psychological description with a woman in it. When I saw that, I felt that it was a precursor to multiple female protagonists, so I gave up the book. Although I don't know if there is currently no heroine, only one, or more, but I guess there is a high probability of it. If you like it, you can check it out. The content is pretty good.
Hurry up update Hurry up update
More, I only have 4 monthly passes in my hand, how much you can get is up to you, the author.
The author can write slower, I mean expand on the details?
I thought the author had sent it, but unexpectedly it came back to life. The previous book was very well written
It's not cool enough, and it's still far behind Super Mechanic. I hope the author can refer to the works of great masters more and think about it better.
Let's change the title of the book. We won't write about alchemy in less than 20 chapters.
I quite like this setting. Better than those cool articles that are too brainless
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