Dear Lord Broom Knight

At the beginning of the first chapter, he awakened as a mage, and then complained for seven chapters about how long he worked hard to become a knight. Goldfinger is also related to knights. Why did he awaken as a mage? At the beginning of the chapter, he complained for seven whole chapters, with a little background introduction but the information content was extremely low. Who dares to read this? You can't go out and read more than ten chapters.

It's not like you're writing a composition, you're just chatting. Many things that don't need to be said are also written in the text, which gives people the feeling that you can just show me this thing for money. I'm just making an objective evaluation. If you read it smoothly, you will feel that the words in each chapter can actually be compressed, but there are a lot of them. Nonsense, and then it's all about what the protagonist likes, but it feels like the author is cultivating it, but although it seems so detailed, there is really no need for it. It's not that no one will watch it, but we are here to watch the plot. You didn't write much in the plot, and there was a lot of back and forth about Che Zulu. Isn't this nonsense? Do you think a lot of people would like to watch you talk about what the protagonist did to have a meal, and then met such and such people because of such and such things, and met such and such things because of such and such people, and then because of these things, it got involved in a bunch of other topics, back and forth. I go back and forth, my imagination is so rich, but it has nothing to do with the right track. It's like when I'm chatting with you, you and I are not on the same channel. I'm chatting with you about business, and you insist on running somewhere else. I can only say that you have a really rich imagination, just like me.

I originally thought that the comment section was a bit extreme, but I was stunned when I saw Chapter 10, which is comparable to 500 words of AI polished to 10,000 words. . .

After reading three chapters, Che Zhuglun talked back and forth. To sum up, his mother didn't want to get involved in the battle for royal power and married his father, and he originally wanted to be a knight but awakened as a mage. It just doesn't get to the point, giving people the feeling of talking without any focus.

The same recipe as the previous book, the same opening, too long and too long, but it doesn't get to the point, it doesn't talk about cheats, it doesn't talk about the upgrade system, it doesn't talk about the plot, it's boring.

It's a rubbish novel, it's too wordy, don't write it if you don't know how to write it.

It's hard to watch, hard to understand, odd sentences, confusing, and rude. I can't believe that after the author created a 7 million-word novel, his writing style deteriorated in his second book, which is also a strange thing.

Can anyone really read it? It's a bit too short. There are only a few useful sentences in one chapter, and I get off track as I write. Hundreds of chapters have passed and I'm still recalling my past life. A single day's plot in this article can fill sixty or seventy chapters. It's invincible.

I am a long-time reader of the previous book The Fourth Natural Disaster. The transition in this book is too slow and not as fast as the last book. Personally, it was a bit uncomfortable to read. The positioning of the protagonist is also a bit unclear. The advancement of the main plot is also a bit intermittent. It is still wandering around after two million words. The actual plot is also relatively small, and there are too many dialogues and monologues, a bit like the last part of the previous book. Overall, the pace is too slow and new readers may not be able to read it. Recommendation index 3.5❤️

The reading experience and writing style of Laji