Breath of the Dead

Since it is a heroic and invincible method of producing troops, the timeline is very important. After all, the more time passes, the more troops there will be. At the same time, various resources and troop quantity data are also very important. But looking at it, the timeline is a piece of shit. I don't even know how many days have passed. A lot of plots have been squeezed into one lump. The two contract positions in Chapter 50 are all ghost girls. The emphasis has been on powerful combat units, but the more it is written, the more rubbish it becomes. I came here for the label, but at first glance it looked like a variant of an adventure article, and the content of the label was just a supporting role. In addition, there are dozens of miscellaneous chapters, and the most important background of the world of Pig's Feet is not mentioned. Are you talking about it after the book is ready to be written?

There are not enough skeleton soldiers for a necromancer, and an undead natural disaster is played like a person living on a basic salary. With all kinds of mindless operations, it will make your brain split.

I have watched the Judgment of Onion and Breath of the Dead by now. I am an old bookman. Boss Featherman, didn't you say that there will be a follow-up to the game 40,000 Years? Why haven't we started work yet?

There are not many concise titles like this in new books these days. It's inexplicable. I don't know why the title of the novel now has a long paragraph.

It's almost 2,000 chapters and it's only level 15. If it reaches level 60 or can still break through, it will take 10,000 chapters to complete this book!

Let's start a new book and write about the type of trial. I can't keep up with this one anymore. I see that there is a perception now that the Necromancer profession has hundreds of millions of troops at every turn, and the level 60 soldiers under his command are also bad. Other professions are taking the lead in confronting the Necromancer. The total number of Death Knight players in the entire game is probably not as many as the knights under the protagonist. The professional balance of novels in the game world has completely collapsed. Other players such as warriors and shooters seem to be very cool at level 60, but the protagonist has so many level 60 soldiers that they don't even have names. It feels like just a few level 60 necromancers and an entire army of tens of billions of undead are enough to unify the entire gaming circle. The game world that originally had a good sense in the early stage has now become a pure playground and source of resources due to the extreme expansion of power. Not to mention that the game world does not match the player's level, I feel that there is no need to describe the content of the game world if this continues, and a one-click sweep function is directly introduced. Write about what the protagonist lacks and sweep a certain game world with one click. Instead of the step-by-step calculations and battles during game development, there is only the boring operation of a group of soldiers. The most interesting part of the original trial was the section from the beginning to the New World exclusive. Without the detailed description of the game, it becomes an ordinary fantasy book covered in game skin.

The protagonist relies entirely on coincidence and luck to advance the plot, the villain is as mentally retarded as Yasha Yushu, and the battle is sloppy. The leader with level 20 lightning eyes was instantly killed by three level 8 skills alone. His strength fluctuates up and down without logic and brains? How many times have you said that the food tastes bad or you are busy and have no time to eat? Don't you know how to buy something delicious and save it for the protagonist's backpack and coffin? The city has no system, the management is in chaos, the skill selection of pig's feet is hard to explain, personal pursuits are not mentioned, the personality is angry and timid, I don't know how to set prices, no one takes care of me, and I don't hire assistants, it's too fragmented, it's too noisy, I'm unhappy, I've written so many books and suppressed the battle force enough, hay, I'm so annoyed😡😡😡😡! ! !

The creativity is good and the writing is average. The pacing and plot are a bit messy. Many settings are unclear, which makes many places look like smoke and mirrors?

I like it very much, nothing to say

Did you just sign with another platform?