Hogwarts Card System

I don't like that the protagonist is a treasure-delivery boy. What's the use of Hermione and others? If they either involve the protagonist in various incidents or they have something to do, why should they be babysitters for others? The knowledge you have earned so hard is given away directly. Don't talk to me about friendship. Those people are just supporting characters. Every time the protagonist will deliberately persuade them not to go, and they have to show their temper to go. The protagonist should not worry too much. Let a few of them die and they will definitely be honest. And the protagonist is a time traveler, so don't even think about any family friendships. It's disgusting.

I really can't help but want to complain. There are only 200 or 300 students in the entire Hogwarts. Are you serious? In other words, there are only 30-40 students in each grade on average. If we expand the scope, the population from newly born to 20 years old is only 800 at most. Excluding a quarter of those born in Muggles (the proportion is already very low), assuming that the remaining 600 are only children, if you add more, three generations of the family will live together. In other words, there are more than 4,200 people. Taking into account the situation of being unmarried or DINK, if the population is expanded twice, it will only be more than 10,000 people. Even if the previously excluded Muggle-born people are included in the expansion, the maximum is barely 20,000 people. Can this population support a complete and relatively independent small society? You must know that the British population in 1991 was more than 50 million. And the most straightforward setting is that if there are more than 30 people in a grade, even if they take classes together, they can only be regarded as a small class. There is no need to subdivide the two colleges and continue to combine classes.

There is only one wish in my life for Harley to become the heroine.

Before entering Hogwarts, the story was quite novel. It borrowed part of Harry's worldview and mixed in some original works. The character of the protagonist was also quite good. However, the turning point came after entering school. Although there was still a small part of his own things, the protagonist was deeply bound to the original team. The protagonist was not a real child! Moreover, he obviously has his own pursuit, but in order to adapt to the plot of the original work, he changes the protagonist's character mechanically. The troll plot alone is obviously not a task that must be completed, and the rewards are also useless, and he also comes with a lot of drag bottles, but the protagonist insists on completing it as if he has a brain hemorrhage, which is completely inconsistent. The protagonist's character is unwilling to even go out at night just to be safe, and the other is the collapse of the power system. With the blessing of golden fingers and unremitting efforts, the protagonist's strength is simply unsightly. He is like a soy sauce in the battle with the trolls, and his progress is actually not as good as Neville. What is such a protagonist used for?

You can only read this book until the protagonist is in first grade. In the second year of the novel, the main character was made mentally retarded for the sake of plot, with only one more name than the original. Sometimes, the protagonist is written in such a way that he knows everything, but doesn't talk about it, just watches the tragedy happen, and then pretends to be a good person after the incident is over. It's specifically here to disgust readers, right? These three stars are for the early stage, but I really don't want to give any stars for the later stage. I doubt it was written by just one person!

The subject matter is good and very attractive, but I feel uncomfortable sharing my research with others. I hope I won't become a gift boy.

In the second year, I wrote a very stupid story about where Hagrid was captured and went to the Forbidden Forest. Hermione "Didn't I promise not to enter the forbidden area without permission?" Lin, even if something happens, take me with you. ? Ted was shocked to realize that he had spilled the beans and quickly Adding: "Don't be angry, you know I Some experiments require something from the Forbidden Forest. And I only need a short amount of sleep Yeah, I'm mainly worried that your lack of sleep will affect Hibiki has class the next day...". When did you have such a good relationship with her that you insist on writing a dog-licking article?

I'm speechless. This plot originally caused a great psychological shadow on Ginny. After all, a twelve-year-old girl was possessed by a bad old man in his sixties for several months. He saw everything that should be seen and shouldn't be seen. How much damage is this? To give an analogy, a fat woman weighing over 300 kilograms is trying to keep you healthy and harassing you every day. The Weasleys are very nice to the protagonist, but are they really just following the original story in a cold tone?

If you weren't so closely tied to the protagonist, I would say the writing was good, but now I can only say it's too witty.

Why did the new book from 1980 suddenly disappear? ? ?