
Yidaoxianfu
by What Day Will The Next Moon Be?
About This Novel
When Wang Yu opened his eyes, he found that he was in the Western Kingdom. Fortunately, he was reborn. Seeing his appearance in the water tank, he sighed: "Although I look better than Pan An, the world doesn't care about face." "Heaven! Heaven!" "You allowed me to travel to this world." "Don't give me the system." "Don't give me the skills." "Even the talent is the worst, how can I practice?" Just as he finished sighing, he discovered that the ring in his hand was actually a fairy mansion. Wang Yu began to grow elixirs and make spiritual meals. He practiced hard all the way, just when he was ready to show off his skills. I found that I had actually become the way of heaven in this world. Then......
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Official(105)Scraped 2mo ago
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One more chapter is not enough, please add more.
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I want to ask if it is a single heroine? ?
I don't know what to write
The level is not as good as others, but I won by luck. The level is the same as others, but I still won by luck. What else can the meaning of writing like this be other than the number of words? Will anyone read this?
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The writing is very good, true, and the writing style is crisp and clear. It is much better than other articles.
Okay, here I come. It looks good. Come on.
Praise, praise, praise, it is a rare good book, full of suspense
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Personally, I think the writing is okay, but the name of the work could be changed. Usually when I see this kind of name, I just skip it and don't click on it at all (only my personal opinion)
Change the introduction. Your protagonist has achieved heaven and then returned to earth. The ending is known immediately, which is boring. I don't know how you wrote it, but you have to read the introduction, right? At least let's trick people into it, right?
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Community(0)
Official(105)Scraped 2mo ago
Everyone is welcome to come and see
Dear cuties, if you have any suggestions, you can leave a message here.
One more chapter is not enough, please add more.
ask
I want to ask if it is a single heroine? ?
I don't know what to write
The level is not as good as others, but I won by luck. The level is the same as others, but I still won by luck. What else can the meaning of writing like this be other than the number of words? Will anyone read this?
OK
The writing is very good, true, and the writing style is crisp and clear. It is much better than other articles.
Okay, here I come. It looks good. Come on.
Praise, praise, praise, it is a rare good book, full of suspense
suggestion
Personally, I think the writing is okay, but the name of the work could be changed. Usually when I see this kind of name, I just skip it and don't click on it at all (only my personal opinion)
Change the introduction. Your protagonist has achieved heaven and then returned to earth. The ending is known immediately, which is boring. I don't know how you wrote it, but you have to read the introduction, right? At least let's trick people into it, right?


















