If You Are Asked to Be the Leader of the Clan, You Will Only Accept the Protagonist?

Why can't Tang San do it? He secretly practices martial arts. His qualifications are very good. The sect has some connections, and he is also tacitly approved by the elders of the sect, right? He had the sect as the master in everything, he had never caused any harm to the sect, and when he found out, he did not reveal his tacit approval to the elders. He also trained hidden weapons for the sect and committed suicide by throwing himself off a cliff. If he is not discovered, he will be the same as the sweeping monk, but his acting skills will not be as good. Why did he feel sorry for the sect? After being reincarnated into Douluo, how could he feel sorry for Yu Xiaogang? Why are you sorry for Tang Hao? Even when he came to Douluo Continent, he was the only one who practiced Tang Sect's martial arts. He didn't pass it on to anyone, not even his daughter. How could he let the sect down? People may not be able to compete with Xiao Yan, but everyone has different thoughts and codes of conduct. They can do as many things as they can. Help Yu Xiaogang: Ninth Grade Zizhi, lift the isolation, and finally help him unblock all his muscles and veins. His disciple is the emperor, his brother is another royal family, and Yu Xiaogang is also a prince. Besides becoming a god and not being able to help, what else can be done? Help your brother pick up girls and introduce your cousin to your brother. Xiao Wu is the only one who has a single-minded relationship. When it comes to your mouth, what is good and what is evil?

You can watch it but don't recommend it. Let's talk about the advantages first. You can do it without thinking. I haven't thought of the other ones. Let's talk about the shortcomings: ①Single chapter pricing issue. Regardless of whether you have a membership or not, or if you don't read the updated chapters immediately and use free coins to read them, it is more expensive. In addition, the word count can always be maintained, which is okay, but occasionally there are some chapters that are very short... ②Writing problem. In plain language, I feel that the author has no idea of improving his writing skills. He has a lack of imagination and poor choice of words and sentences. I can only applaud him. Character creation, whether it is dialogue or other details such as facial expressions, etc., Is not enough. It can be written in just a few words. Repeated expressions affect the perception. Similar sentences are everywhere. There are many It would be good to learn more from other authors' expressions. It is easy to vomit blood, but even if it is vomiting blood, it is better to add more descriptions. The author can write as many words as possible... The word count is too low. This low word count is completely caused by the writing style. Repeated sentences make readers feel whether to read or not, so they subjectively think that the word count is too low. At least this is my perception... ③ Logical problems. In terms of time, if you pay attention to each time, you will feel that there will be inexplicable contradictions, which can be tens of thousands of years. Compared with the time of the protagonist, the contrast is too strong, and I am speechless; the spells used by the characters, especially the length and distance, will be very contradictory. Although I know that the author set a very large continent, it is just confusing. The author has not clearly defined the scope of influence of this spell; in addition, using science in the world of cultivating immortals, it can be You also need to understand the scientific principles, which can be summarized in a nutshell. The overall performance is anticlimactic. The author breaks the fourth wall too much, which is not impossible, but it will be abrupt. Writing has a certain subjective view, but it is also necessary to evaluate or design the behavior pattern of the characters in reference to the current world view. Concreteness means that the personality changes of individual characters or the transformation of language and emotions are very sharp and change for the sake of change... The other is that I feel that there is a shadow of a collapse in combat power. ④Setting and character issues. In terms of setting, for example, for the entire continent, the author only has a general distinction and no detailed thinking. The reading process makes the readers confused about the setting. At the same time, because of various mixtures, there are signs that the painting of a tiger is not the opposite of a dog. There are problems with introducing too many characters. First, the author's writing style is limited. It is obvious that too many characters will drag down the novel as a whole. Judging from the recent battles, there are too many characters and it is necessary to write them, but not enough writing will be like a slap in the face. Each character can only write one or two sentences, so that the reader only knows that such a person exists but does not know what he has done before; secondly, in the face of In addition to referring to the original novels for the characters I introduced, it is better to design better plots to enrich the characters, rather than forcing part of the plot of the original novel, which is the cause; thirdly, the subjective thoughts and personal understanding of the introduced characters are too heavy, which is not impossible, because writing is used to express one's own thoughts, but not everyone will agree with the author's personal thoughts... ⑤Plot progress issues. Because the author has already set the time when the protagonist will face the disaster, this issue is not very prominent. But I don't know if the author had it in the original synopsis, or if he just came up with it as he thought. In fact, with so many characters in the original novel, I can write whatever I want in the subsequent plot, and I can't complain. I don't want to talk about other issues. The author has worked hard. This is not a flashy thing, but a failure in addition to the failure.

When you have the writing power of "Perfect World", "Mortal Cultivation to Immortality", "Immortal Rebellion", etc., Why should you be so expensive?

Two stars. The whole book can only be made up for other flaws by stitching. There are many places where you express your inner drama at length. But who likes to read it? Don't you think it's very brainless? It's interesting at the beginning but becomes more and more confusing later on. I hope your writing style can be improved. I don't want to compare with your stitched novels, but I have to shape all the protagonists. What I'm writing now is Xiao Some stories about Yan Template and Long Aotian, if you want to feminize these protagonists, can't you write with less mother-in-law and less inner drama? Have you finished writing the two languages of classical Chinese and vernacular? I have also read 400 chapters. Although the number of words is mostly unnutritious text, and quality is directly proportional to money. Only if it looks good can I feel that it is well spent.

After reading the author's reply that the word count was ten chapters higher than others, I really calculated the novel I was following. I did the math and found that one chapter of the author's novel had more than 2,000 words more than other authors, which is equivalent to one extra chapter. Generally, the author charges 20 coins for a chapter, but his charge is 100 coins, which is more than half the price of others. If it costs 40-50 coins, I can still accept it. After all, one chapter adds more than 2,000 words. There are other assignments just like yours. One chapter has about the same number of words as yours, and each chapter costs 10 coins. Of course, if your writing is better, it doesn't matter if it's more expensive. If it's too expensive, there won't be many updates. His book has 1.87 Million words and 313 chapters, with an average of more than 5,000 words. Compared to your 600,000 words, 114 chapters, an average of more than 5,000 words.

Water is not good, 10,000 words and 9,000 words are in water. There are still many inner dramas, and I have to tell them over and over again.

The novel is quite interesting! But the author should adjust the narration. The useless narration throughout the article takes up a lot of space, or it is repeated over and over again. The water injection is a bit too obvious. There are also many times where the dialogue or soliloquy is ambiguous. Don't give me any suggestions, just say Xiao Heizi, the novel is quite interesting, but the writing is not strong enough and the strokes are quite easy. Also, author, if other book friends make suggestions, ban them or delete them!

Quick Update: In addition to the eldest disciple, the relationship between the other disciples and the protagonist can be deeper. Too soon, there will be no accumulated human touch. After all, you are based on the character design of other books. You might as well write more about your thoughts and practices about the protagonists in these books, as well as the completion of the character, so that the character of the protagonist will be full.

How to put it this way, many places are very watery, and the rhetoric is also problematic, and the characters are almost empty. It is just a bunch of routines mixed together, with almost no nutrition (of course, the Internet article is not expected to have any nutrition), but the shaping is also a little bit failed. The teacher said that the last time I saw a network with such a low number of words, it was Emperor's Domination, but they also added some rhetorical techniques. You don't even have rhetorical techniques, except for relying on data splicing. Even if you do stitching, there is no need to be so vulgar.

Has the author read the novel? Some of the characters' combat abilities are seriously inconsistent. He forcibly reduced the characters' intelligence and made them look like fools. Does the protagonist even have a brain?