My Understanding is Against the Heavens, I Create a Family of Villains with Longevity

What does a villain have, background, resources, talents? I hope the author will not write too much. It will be completed when it is due and there is no need to delay. A villain must be ruthless and sinister. There is a villain who only sees women. To deal with the Son of Destiny, you must kill him with one strike, so there is no way to raise a fish

The introduction is well written, but I didn't want to read it after reading it for a while. It felt like an outline was drawn up, but it was mixed with the author's YY fantasy. Let's take the early development line as an example. You either have to be transparent since childhood, or you reveal yourself. Writing and writing turns into pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. It's obvious that your ability on paper is a mess, but you still have to point out the country, pretend to be cool, and show your hands, right? I have no desire to read on. It doesn't feel like a villain novel... The characters are very strange. I jumped back and read a few clips. Without the halo of this book, it is really no different from the mentally retarded villains in some books... What you describe in your introduction is one of non-acquisition.

I think the recent writing is quite good. It is not a simple mindless article. The game between the holy land and the aristocratic family has the feeling of an iceberg on the sea. Good luck, author.

How outrageous, author. I would like to ask if you are a junior high school student or a high school student. I don't understand why you insist on describing the juvenile stage. Couldn't you just write it as 18 years old? There is no big foreshadowing in the front. After watching it for so long, the other protagonists of Destiny are not half as high in IQ as the protagonist, and they are reduced to intelligence by the halo of intelligence reduction. Same, I'm not nitpicking, but this is the most basic thing. The protagonists each have a halo of wisdom around them. Whoever watches it doesn't feel uncomfortable. If I want to watch a pretense and slap in the face, I'll go directly to Shuangwen. There is no need to watch villains. The main purpose of watching villains is to watch the protagonist who is destined to suppress him. What's so good about the protagonist who is destined to look like a brainless elementary school student?

It doesn't quite feel like a cultivating immortal novel. It's a novel about cultivating immortals. But if you say it's a villain, it doesn't make sense. The decent version doesn't make sense. The second-generation novel also doesn't make sense. The family version doesn't make sense. The invincible version is too sloppy. As for the system version, it feels like the system doesn't have a sense of existence. It's life-stealing. 😄 I don't see what destiny is of use to you. There are many sects described but no people in them. There are many aristocratic families described, but it gives me the feeling that there is only one family of the protagonist and no others. There are no monsters, monsters or monsters. They are just toads, mice, monkeys, maggots, ants, etc.? ? ? If the author wants to write about a lone wolf, you can just start with your parents offering sacrifices to heaven. After dozens of chapters, it's really confusing. If you can't fly as a cultivator, you ride a horse. Geniuses in the family have no protection. Geniuses are born without visions. Can the immortal family give you a mount, spiritual beasts, magic pills, pills, and treasures of heaven and earth? They don't even give you a villain like you. The second generation of the immortal was reborn in the wrong child😄 No, the family has no self-preface and is very loose. The writing is not out of the realm of mortals. It is not written well and is very messy. The protagonist can break through the realm if he wants to. Why does the true body of the true self need so much? It is very simple to have a true body of the true self to bless the combat power. It is very simple to use magical powers and magic. 😄You wrote about the true body of the true self, one realm and one dharma. Use the dharma to fight without using magical powers? If you use magical powers to fight, why do you need so many magic signs? ? I don't understand, I'm too stupid to understand 😄

It feels like it's a bit high and low. The content setting could be more innovative, but things started to go wrong from Li Changsheng's point of view and he gave up immediately. A centenarian wants to have more children and more happiness, but because the Sikong family threatens his wife's life to deal with the protagonist, the protagonist kills his entire family, his wife and children, what kind of values ​​are this. The novel says that giving Li Changsheng a chance depends on how he makes his choice. Isn't the chance you gave him first to control the other person's family and promise to protect them before extending his wife's life? As a result, the opportunity given is to see if the other party can take action. If he takes action, he will go against his own family and be damned. Who is this person? He is against humanity.

The rest of Chapter 350 is full of shit. There are a lot of typos, the plot is wrong, and there are too many inconsistencies. I want to write something vivid but can't write it well. I want to write old routines but want to renovate them. The whole book and chapter have the same style, as if it was written by AI.

It was okay at the beginning, and the content was still readable in the middle period. After getting married to Xu Qingqing, you were not a buddy. You got married suddenly without any foreshadowing. It was similar to a one-night stand. Of course, I am not saying that Xu Qingqing is not good. You were too sudden. In addition, many characters disappeared in the later period. Ruan Zhunan, Shan Yang, Chen Buqi, many, many people are gone. It's okay if these are gone, it's not a particularly important role. But you wrote Chen Buqi as Chen Chou'er? Wasn't Chen Chou'er arrested? He smiled evilly when he was arrested, and then he was gone? The two elders of Netherworld are gone too. Chapter 380 starts with a crappy plot, a mess of content, and disconnected from the main plot. You might as well write a battle with Shi Li after the peak of Juexian, and finally win, and then fight with the Holy Land, and rescue Mo Yuemei by the way, and then how about immortality. What you wrote is just a bunch of typos, wrong sentences, wow, nothing to say, a bunch of stuff.

When I first read it, I had a lot of expectations. Once I got into it, even though some parts were a little sloppy, I could understand that some people had to die and some had to leave for the development of the plot. But after Chapter 300, I can't understand it anymore and more. What on earth do you want to talk about? Have you forgotten all the pits you filled in? Why did Chou'er come back? Why did you smile evilly in the first place? Didn't your ancestor disappear? Why did it become dead? It's understandable that there are typos and wrong names from time to time, but you don't show it off now. Is it still what you had in mind when you wrote it here? If not, you say, we give up, the attributes are now incomprehensible, and the scene switching is too sloppy. After chatting with one person, I chatted with the next person, and started to talk about the structure. As you said yourself, right and wrong, future generations will judge, how is the structure you wrote, human nature, etc., Class, you don't need to explain it so clearly, it is just a personal understanding. How come you write it, it feels like it has become a resentful article?

The writing is complete shit, and the male protagonist is made to look like a fool.