The Golden Elixir is a Star. Do You Call This Cultivating Immortality?

I can't see what is being written and what the author wants to express. A mentally ill person travels to the world of immortality, inexplicably awakens the golden finger, and then plays a game. In the game, a netizen is a real person. The protagonist does not know and always thinks that the netizen is playing the same game as him. The map in the game is real, but the protagonist doesn't know and always thought it was a game. The protagonist is very weak. During the Qi training period, the game character turns out to be a boss. But the game is not a game. It is real, so what the author is writing, I have no brains. Can anyone explain it to me?

The front part is fine, but the back part is really uncomfortable and not at all exciting. Why put up the label of Invincible Liushuangwen, hide everything, and not show off to others. Everyone thinks that the protagonist is too nervous. He rarely has the opportunity to show off his game and it becomes a match-fixing, and he cannot show his strength. In the game, I became a boss and before I started pretending, I went to save the world secretly. No one knew about it, and I died again. You want all kinds of resources, spiritual stones, you want to understand and create skills, and you want to upgrade your soul skills to play the game. As a result, you become a real pig and don't show it. Almost everyone thinks that the protagonist is crazy. What resources do you want? The soul of the game is not enough to enter, the reality does not show, and there are no resources to create skills, and the realm of the protagonist is completely suppressed. The way you write it offends those who want to watch the invincible flow and those who want to watch a slow pace. It is not that you are crazy and have no brains. This makes people unable to get up or down. What are you trying to do?

It's so low-key. I read the first dozen chapters and found them quite interesting. After reading the last few chapters, I still felt the same thing. 3000 Years of refining qi, raising a fish turned out to be a dragon, raising a chicken turned out to be a phoenix, a kitchen knife turned out to be a magical weapon, and there were all kinds of ridicule about the protagonist's life experience and various settings that you yourself are not the same. It's still the same, disgusting! It's the same old thing, and I thought there was something new, but it's still the same thing, what's wrong with the authors nowadays? So unprofessional, not even a bit innovative, just set up a template and just write it there, it's stereotyped, it's all a running account, and you still want money

Boring, this protagonist is both stubborn and unsatisfied, jumps but shrinks, is a lunatic, and is a lunatic pig waiting to die by eating.

I thought those who wrote about fantasy and immortality were not that sadistic... But I was wrong, it was amazing, no, what on earth were you thinking, author? I put up with the wrong timeline of the first one... After all, you said it would be fun later... I suspect you wrote back the wedding dress because you couldn't withstand the pressure... The second world is really awesome... Good guy, when I saw it later, I said it was a bit cruel, but it turned out to be acceptable... In the end, I left someone else on the golden elixir, oh... That's the star... I thought I would bring it back... Good guy, it's not cruel after all. I was wondering if we could meet and talk or something? Doesn't this sound like what the author means? Did you say it was for future plots? No... Brother... Your label is Shuangwen, right? Where is the fun?

It's not good to write about a normal person. You have to write about a carefree psychotic protagonist, which is rarely enjoyable. Outsiders will treat the protagonist as a psychopath with some talent for cultivating immortals. The game world is written in a fog, and it took me a long time to understand that it was about traveling to the past to shape history, with some love and romance mixed in. The author also likes to engage in literary youth, love across time and space, and his writing skills are not enough, making everyone look at the game world in a confused way. Fog Shui, the reality is that he is insane on the surface. In fact, beating a genius is like beating a dog, but after being a pig for a long time, he really becomes a pig. He also likes to use the supporting role of the junior sister to describe the power of the protagonist, and then the junior sister thinks that the protagonist is crazy and must be fake. You could call the protagonist a pervert, but he's not that exaggerated. You could say he's not a pervert, and he's not a normal person. Finally, I want to say that this novel also likes to have a harem. Different people have different opinions.

It's very interesting to watch. The two plots are very touching and almost made me cry. TT Especially the first one is so well written. It twists and turns again and again. Anyway, I understand it. Keep up the good work...

I have read more than a hundred chapters, but I don't understand what's cool about it. I also like to play some bad jokes. Let's put it this way, it's more fun to watch the sword than to watch you. There are still contradictions in the portrayal of the protagonist. Let's not talk about the invincible cool article marked, but what you marked is the same as what you actually wrote. That's the way to go. The protagonist likes to brag, but at the same time he still resists. The key point is that he also defends himself. If you either ignore others or don't brag, and don't show your strength after bragging, everyone will treat him as a psychopath, and sometimes the writing is completely inaccurate. Then there is the emotional description of the protagonist and supporting characters. If you like to write about the harem, you can write it, but you can't have only women around the protagonist. It is said that you can't be emotional when playing games. You really don't have feelings for men, but for women, there is no malice and you just get involved in the relationship directly. I really don't know if the author has never been in love or what. The most representative one is the canary, as long as it is a fair girl. Yes, I kept chattering next to me when I was enlightening. I was 100% sure that I would slap him to death, and I didn't see much affection for the female partner. In order to write about the harem, I forced a love scene. Really, if the author is a woman, you should write women's stories. If you are a man, I suggest you write women's stories. That's it. I will complain after I see the latest chapter

The author may have changed someone, maybe Xiaodai, maybe AI

Let's talk about the first world first. In the two timelines before and after the world of the protagonist and netizens, the push-ups of netizens with ladders on their backs can also be explained. After all, after clearing the level, the protagonist has gained most of his powers, the sun and the four domains. Those who have not passed the level have the moon and a Jedi. It makes sense that the wedding dress can reach the world of the protagonist, since most of the power is in his hands. Netizens didn't say much about the ending, and they seemed to be protected. An average ending, the Riddler sucks after all. The reality is that there is a master, the protagonist of The Riddler, who has appeared until now. He is an inexplicable character who is nothing. The second world is also quite interesting. His consciousness was captured by Bu Yianjiao and entered the game. More than 40 levels correspond to the real-life level of the protagonist. Upgrade again. This time the level limit is higher. After all, those who reached the last 110 or so levels in the world are from the past of this world. The protagonist and his friends in this world have reversed the past. Every time they go to enlightenment, they go back in time, and the protagonist also enlightens to the devil. That's it for now. However, if the protagonist slowly enters world after world like this, it can really last a long time. After all, he has to level up slowly every time. To be honest, there are quite a lot of various elements in this novel. The main character is driven by a madman and is different from others. The supporting characters have cheats. The main character can go to various timelines, forum groups, etc., Which makes it a hodgepodge. But it's still too bland. I was very interested in it at first, but it plummeted from the beginning. I don't know if I can wait until the story unfolds. After all, there are a lot of things buried, so I'll wait until it unfolds. At the moment, I really have no interest in watching the main world and the game world.