You're Just Making up the Exercises, My Disciple, Have You Really Mastered Them?

In the early stage, the writing was actually okay. Although it was cliche, it was really okay. However, starting from the second apprentice, this book was destined to hit the street. If nothing else, it was created from scratch. It was already outrageous. The first apprentice Xu Yan can also be said to be that the arrival of the protagonist brought a special change, which resulted in the result. The follow-up apprentices are able to do it one after another. This is the most outrageous. Not everyone is special, and the most poisonous point is that in such a big world, even if you write about spiritual energy recovery, it is better than the follow-up foreshadowing of the endless mountain. If this world originally existed, then, can Xu Yan succeed under your deception? There are so many people in this world, it's impossible for him to be the only one. Qiuxian asked, and with the existence of internal strength, wouldn't those top figures in the world be innovative? If you really can, even if this world was wiped out by those top adults who practiced martial arts, your setting is already full of bugs, and it is not as good as the time and space energy brought by the protagonist's time travel. Anyway, I am not optimistic about this setting. Conflicts have begun, at least there are bugs in the logic. Of course, it's okay if readers enjoy reading it. If you want this book to become a classic in the future, it is impossible. I estimate that if the follow-up combat power is not controlled well, it will collapse. After all, there are already signs of collapse. Dear readers, it's up to you. Anyway, each carrot and cabbage has its own merit.

It's too bland, nothing exciting. Each chapter is basically just a brain teaser➕I made up how it could be successful, and then keep repeating it. The more I watch, the more boring I become

This way of writing, if you accept a disciple, you will be divided into a category. If you accept too many apprentices, what tricks can you make? If you really need to divide it, divide it into three cultivations of Jing, Qi and Shen. It's simple and clear. The first disciple specializes in the way of Qi, the second disciple specializes in the way of Jing, and the third disciple will specialize in the way of God. The next disciples will be taught according to this path, instead of accepting one disciple and opening a branch to superimpose the cultivation level. After all, the realm is the king. You refer to the trash that is the strongest Qi training in history. The half-brained routine is doomed to collapse when there are too many apprentices or practitioners later on. It is better to have the protagonist become a Taoist master when the realm is higher. The more powerful people there are, the stronger the protagonist will be. Anyway, according to the setting, the realm of the protagonist will always be the highest and strongest. In this way, it is easier to open the map in the future, and the whole war in other worlds and the like

This subject matter has been around for a long time, but the author's writing is not good. If you don't know how to write, you can look it up and read book reviews. If you are not able, you can ask AI

But, has the author ever thought that since it is a pioneering method, it is not perfect if there is only good and no evil? It does not mean the cruel evil method, but the domineering magic method that allows you to do whatever you want without being bound by borders. The right path is for the upright king. There are many people who read the way of the emperor. However, if you only follow the righteous way of a humble gentleman, you will inevitably get tired after reading too much. Have you considered creating a domineering and arbitrary imperial way?

In fact, there are many novels like this that pretend to be pigs and eat tigers, but this kind of golden finger is indeed an innovative writing method. However, the biggest shortcoming of this book is the unlimited apprenticeship and infinite worlds. It is understandable that there are five apprentices now, but the world has spanned 4. The article has only written more than 380 chapters and averages less than 100 chapters to cross one world. This writing method is too fast, and the jump from one world to the next is basically a routine thing without innovation. I think it's no big deal if you can span multiple worlds, even matryoshka dolls, but how do you end it and make the reader feel comfortable? I thought this novel was quite exciting before chapter 150. Now it's almost 400 chapters, and I really have no desire to read it anymore. Now that it has been updated to Dayuehuang, it would really be meaningless if it were still written in the same way as in Outland. Come on, author

I can't stand this routine any longer. The master has always been one level higher than his apprentice. He hasn't even reached the finale in the middle of the journey. It's really outrageous to step on the horse and open the door for outrageous things

In the early stages of Inner Domain, I could still watch it normally, but later on, the style changed drastically, and the content was even different.

The author is too slow. I like this book.

I feel that the protagonist should not brag about his strength too much. If he encounters an enemy in the future, the protagonist will be defeated. . Just let the apprentice figure it out, and just always act better than him. . . Anyway, as the apprentice becomes stronger, the protagonist will become stronger, and the brain power will be infinitely stronger.