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I read dozens of chapters. The author's writing style is okay, I didn't complain about this. First of all, let's talk about Gua, a small shop that can connect with the heavens. I initially thought it was "transcendental", but it didn't feel like it after seeing it. Then I thought it was at the level of the heavens, but found that the world I went to was accessible to everyone. If I changed the plot, someone would correct it, so the fate path was initially determined? It was just the development of a small world? Then the "immortal master" in the first world felt very speechless. I don't want to say that I am an immortal if I can be manipulated by mortals. Even if the rules are set by the sect and the royal family, can't someone be replaced as the emperor? He can still assist until the change is satisfactory. As the highest "nuclear weapon" of a country, he is a coward from the beginning to the end. If he can't interfere with the royal family, then can't he change the general? Everyone can force him to do nothing in front of her, what a coward. It is also mentioned in the article that immortal masters from various countries assist in improving the strength of the national army. Is this immortal master the first generation? Were there no immortal masters before? Is it possible that no one helped improve the previous generation? Isn't it possible that the previous generations could not leave a legacy to the people? After the previous generation leaves, everything has to start from scratch, right? Finally achieved this level for the refugees, fighting against the dragon and splitting the sky, everyone is like a dragon? To say it is lofty, other countries have marched on the border, but you left yourself, more people die when a country is destroyed, or more people die when these refugees die? The country's combat power is not mentioned, how to protect the refugees? Is this the only way for refugees to protect the law? As I said before, if the officials don't obey, it's not enough. If the general is domineering, it's not possible. If the king is not good, it's not possible to replace him. Anyway, it seems that you are not helping the country by taking the refugees away. If you want to replace a few people, the country will not be in a worse situation, right? Also, the sky can crack, and the place it cracks is still the main world. Is this a small secret realm? Does the little secret realm still have a destiny? Just write about astronomy, just write about astronomy, don't make so many twists and turns, wouldn't you? I don't know how to set up the world view. Anyway, you didn't say it before, so it looks very awkward. The definition of "immortal" seems very aggrieved. Even if it is the country's "nuclear weapon", it should not be so aggrieved. If a general writes like that, there is nothing to say.

What kind of stupid thing is he writing about? A cultivator of immortality can't compare to a little emperor. What he's writing about is really stupid. If I had let him enter the Imperial Banner Seat a long time ago

It seems that the author or the world view reflected in the work supports the old and American style, but he does not dare to write too obviously for fear of failing to pass the review or something else is unknown. So many places look very awkward.

Going to a pharmacy to sell medicine? What a stupid operation. Is this the level of the veteran author?

Another one who is resting on his laurels, his writing is not good, and he relies purely on previous fans to pay for it.

The author is actually a fan of everyone holding biobio to avoid chaos. 😕

Wang Baihu, didn't xxn offend you, right? Oil cake, is it necessary to write it like this? You will lose your dignity by having your head cut off after death. If you want to write such a cruel text, you can do it earlier. Now the text style has been set. This blood and fire is true oil cake. And at the end of the day, you, the protagonist, didn't hide your head and hide your tail. You forced him to be involved in the crime of defection. You did not add any life protection to the person, and the guests were not registered. Now you have indirectly killed someone, and you don't feel any guilt at all. You forgot about it in the blink of an eye. You, the protagonist and the author, are invincible... Abandoned, it's no wonder it's broken up like this. (The reading time is wrong because this account has been logged out once before)

I originally thought it was the type of shop owner who deals in all the worlds, but after reading dozens of chapters, I found that it was not the case. Slipped away

I think that regardless of whether the writing is really that bad or not, the plot is really so unpleasant to most people. At least I think the author is really trying to innovate, and personally I feel that it is quite imaginative and interesting.

It's a bit similar to the writing method of "The old man wants to return to secular life", but the logic of the plot is not clear, and you need to store your brain. You might as well just follow the writing method of Shuangwen and get more people to read it, and add some humanistic feelings, good and evil, good customs, etc., But the writing power is not there, and it looks very awkward.