Two Realms: I Have Become an Immortal
by Deep In The Forest, No Whales Can Be Seen
About This Novel
Song Yunyuan accidentally opened the portable world, but was treated as an immortal by the natives of the alien world. He wanted to use the guise of an immortal to farm in the alien world and develop technology, but strange things came one after another. A strange and strange classical woman, a white fox who came to the door and refused to leave... It wasn't until an old Taoist came here because of her fame, and then left in the clouds and mist while laughing, that Song Yunyuan was shocked to realize that there really are immortals in this world!
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Official(35)Scraped 20d ago
You can see it without delving into it
Poison 1: The monster is written in such a humanistic way. You need to know what kind of environment people who become monsters live in. Poison 2: The severe drought was not written out. It was still in ancient times. Have you never watched TV? Poison 3: In ancient times, people dressed luxuriously, walked around alone without bodyguards, and really thought everyone was a good person. Learn about the customs in ancient times. There are a lot of little poisons, so you can read it as a light-hearted, no-brainer article. Compared to other pretenders who slap in the face, I give 1 star because he dares to write I gave this 4 stars because he can see it.
It looks pretty from the front, but it gets worse as you go to the back.
How good is the writing in the front, traveling between two worlds, but when you go out later, you won't write about the real world anymore? It's no longer exciting at all, and the writing drags on. What about the real-life childhood sweethearts plot? I have been cultivating the world of immortality, so I want to write about both worlds together.
The protagonist's IQ is quite lacking.
No, I have a question, what is the plot of this book? It feels like the author just writes casually, wherever he goes, without any clue at all. Just like me, a novice playing King, I kill the opponent in the development path, and then I don't know what to do next. Other authors' articles on seeking immortality are slow-burning at best, but this one is just plain boring.
Too old-fashioned and outdated
You can guess the plot just by looking at it And humans and demons coexist harmoniously👍 It's really a harmonious society 666. Can it be more outrageous? Except for the identity given by the author, I can't see any difference between the so-called monsters and humans in terms of behavior and way of thinking. Then why don't they call them fox monsters and deer monsters? If they look so similar to humans, I can just call them ren monsters. Also, after the protagonist cheated the Dragon King of Jinghe, he just walked away and defied the heavens.
The book is a good book. The author is not a good author. Too lazy and not diligent at all.
Can you write more? So who can see enough? Just two of them every day. Do you have 5,000 words?
This book is too pretentious. I thought the protagonist would be normal if he knew there were immortal cultivators. But I didn't expect that the protagonist is just like a cabbage. He doesn't feel like a modern person at all. You still say it's good, but it's the babies who can't even read the free chapters
Qianying came out of nowhere.
I feel like the protagonist didn't have much to do with the medical girl, but why did she become so strange and clingy? If I really wanted to give the protagonist a Taoist companion, I'd rather choose her than the modern one who keeps chasing her.
The key points are modern and ancient. There is no key point. Don't let the pig's feet know that they can gain merit.
The further you go, the more water, water, water, you are all water in the ocean.
The author doesn't understand modern people, is it written by a female author? The Holy Mother's heart is too heavy, I can't watch it
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Community(0)
Official(35)Scraped 20d ago
You can see it without delving into it
Poison 1: The monster is written in such a humanistic way. You need to know what kind of environment people who become monsters live in. Poison 2: The severe drought was not written out. It was still in ancient times. Have you never watched TV? Poison 3: In ancient times, people dressed luxuriously, walked around alone without bodyguards, and really thought everyone was a good person. Learn about the customs in ancient times. There are a lot of little poisons, so you can read it as a light-hearted, no-brainer article. Compared to other pretenders who slap in the face, I give 1 star because he dares to write I gave this 4 stars because he can see it.
It looks pretty from the front, but it gets worse as you go to the back.
How good is the writing in the front, traveling between two worlds, but when you go out later, you won't write about the real world anymore? It's no longer exciting at all, and the writing drags on. What about the real-life childhood sweethearts plot? I have been cultivating the world of immortality, so I want to write about both worlds together.
The protagonist's IQ is quite lacking.
No, I have a question, what is the plot of this book? It feels like the author just writes casually, wherever he goes, without any clue at all. Just like me, a novice playing King, I kill the opponent in the development path, and then I don't know what to do next. Other authors' articles on seeking immortality are slow-burning at best, but this one is just plain boring.
Too old-fashioned and outdated
You can guess the plot just by looking at it And humans and demons coexist harmoniously👍 It's really a harmonious society 666. Can it be more outrageous? Except for the identity given by the author, I can't see any difference between the so-called monsters and humans in terms of behavior and way of thinking. Then why don't they call them fox monsters and deer monsters? If they look so similar to humans, I can just call them ren monsters. Also, after the protagonist cheated the Dragon King of Jinghe, he just walked away and defied the heavens.
The book is a good book. The author is not a good author. Too lazy and not diligent at all.
Can you write more? So who can see enough? Just two of them every day. Do you have 5,000 words?
This book is too pretentious. I thought the protagonist would be normal if he knew there were immortal cultivators. But I didn't expect that the protagonist is just like a cabbage. He doesn't feel like a modern person at all. You still say it's good, but it's the babies who can't even read the free chapters
Qianying came out of nowhere.
I feel like the protagonist didn't have much to do with the medical girl, but why did she become so strange and clingy? If I really wanted to give the protagonist a Taoist companion, I'd rather choose her than the modern one who keeps chasing her.
The key points are modern and ancient. There is no key point. Don't let the pig's feet know that they can gain merit.
The further you go, the more water, water, water, you are all water in the ocean.
The author doesn't understand modern people, is it written by a female author? The Holy Mother's heart is too heavy, I can't watch it
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