Your Vampire Ancestor is Online

This thing is like shit on a delicious cake, starting with the name. The protagonist's name is Hao Tian. Such a name full of oriental flavor appears very abrupt and inconsistent in a Western fantasy-themed work. Secondly, the appearance of the protagonist is mentioned in the article, but it is only mentioned in a hurry without much description. These are crucial. Readers are reading In novels, something is needed to increase the sense of immersion, and your description of the protagonist can only remind me of the ugly guy in Los Ferrato. We can cite many examples. For example, Yoshitaka Amano, in his novel Vampire Hunter D, used a lot of pen and ink to describe the protagonist. Appearance, personality and characteristics, and the treatment of this aspect in your works is extremely perfunctory. The second is the world view. If I guess correctly, you use steampunk. The biggest feature of this style is the coexistence of advanced and backward, magic and technology. In such an era background, the birth of steampunk will definitely happen. Many novel things and various characters have been produced, but you just wrote down words like steam lamps, revolvers, and steam trains. You want to put steam in front of everything. Even in the steam age, everyone knows about electric lights. Is there nothing else besides these? You can write about modifying horses, cars, airships, spaceships, space stations, and the technology in War 40k, but now? A good hand has been beaten to pieces by you, and it's more like selling a sheep's head to a dog's flesh. Okay, I'm done. This is the first time I've written such a long book review. The shortcomings and shortcomings should be pointed out here. I hope you can read it. I won't give a one star rating. After all, this is the author's first time writing a book, and he is a very good person. I hope this review can be helpful to your future writing. Of course, if you feel unhappy, you can delete it.

Finally found another serious vampire novel

Pretty good! Come on, author, please update more! I think the protagonist ran away too early, it would be better to educate future generations!

It's so hard to wait for updates!

Most of the authors are gone. We just watch for updates. I only have a few.

Hey, come on, author.

Is the author still coding at this late hour? He is so diligent.

The writing is beautiful, the plot is vivid and interesting, I can't put it together anymore

It's very well written. Come on, author, come on＾0＾~

There are some toxic points, and the plot is incoherent. It looks uncomfortable.