I'm in Yellow Maple Valley, and I Have an Equipment Slot!
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[Gou Dao Cultivation] + [Hexagonal Monk] Zhou Yuan, a man on earth, traveled through the legend of mortals cultivating immortals and became a casual cultivator in Huangfenggufang City, Yue Kingdom. He accidentally awakened the equipment panel. ... [Equipment 1: Alchemy Jade Slip (first-order high-grade) Effect 1: Improved alchemy talent. Effect 2: The rate of refining first-level elixirs is increased by 30%. Note: This is what an alchemist has learned and understood in his lifetime, and it retains all the hard work of this alchemist. [Equipment 2: Red Gold Furnace (first-level high-grade) Effect 1: Refining first-level elixirs, the elixir-making rate increases by 20%. Effect 2: Alchemy talent is improved. Effect 3: The weapon refining talent is improved. Remarks: This is an alchemy furnace carefully refined by an alchemy master. After several changes, it passed through the hands of three alchemy masters and has been opened more than 3,700 times. The furnace body contains the rare charm of alchemy and weapon. [Equipment 3: Fire Cloud Technique Jade Slip (first-level mid-grade) Effect 1: Fire Cloud Technique training speed is increased. Note: This is an inherited technique left by a monk in the foundation-building stage. It contains the insights and experiences left by the monks in the foundation-building stage. [Equipment 4: Jinyuan Dan (first-level top quality) Effect 1: The training speed is increased during the Qi training period. Effect 2: The first-level elixir's success rate increases by 20%. Effect 3: Improve alchemy talent] ... With these, Zhou Yuan felt that he with pseudo-spiritual roots could become an immortal and become an ancestor.
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Official(107)Scraped 5d ago
I must take the Heaven-Building Pill, but what about the Ten Thousand Years Thunder Bamboo? You can't let Han Li give it to you, right? I personally think it's impossible for Han Li's cautious character! Confess about falling out
Don't you even think about writing novels now?
The protagonist is a mortal, and he can enter the cave of a foundation-building monk at any time? Can you still open the storage bag? Will you practice even if you get the exercises? Even if the protagonist is a casual cultivator!
The most taboo thing for mortals to write about is a nanny, and then the nanny leaves you with exercises, etc., And there is no such thing as an old one. Unless it is a cool article, the main reason is that you are not invincible.
From the beginning, I thought it was a good product and I was going to give it five stars. After chapter 60, it has many flaws and is even poisonous.
It looked good from the beginning, and I thought it was a high-quality mortal fanfic. Although there were some flaws, they were not major problems. However, after the 60th chapter, the flaws were a bit big. For example, the protagonist was besieged and killed by the Qianzhu Cult, and Han Li secretly watched the show to find out. Then the protagonist gave Han Li a skill because he sympathized with Han Li for being a fake spiritual root. Then he explained that it was for investment, so why don't you find some reasonable reason to give it away? Li Huayuan and Hong Fu both decided that Han Li and Dong Xuan'er would become a Taoist couple, but Han Li could directly refuse Li Huayuan and even agreed to it, and even asked the protagonist to go back to Yanjiabao and leave it to the protagonist. Is it reasonable? Moreover, the protagonist Ji Zhu had said before that he would not participate in Yanjiabao's mess. However, when Li Huayuan handed the matter over to him, he didn't refuse. Later, Han Li and Dong Xuan'er went together, and the protagonist went alone. Then the protagonist actually didn't take the opportunity to refuse, let alone go, and didn't sneak away. It was really wrong. It was ridiculous to kill Wang Chan. It wasn't like he was killed instantly by a sneak attack, but he was killed by waves of skills without using the Nascent Soul's back-up skills. When fighting the Blood Jade Spider, Han Li had just accepted the protagonist's skills without giving anything. The protagonist even vowed to have no future life due to inner demons. Here he began to have inexplicable suspicions that the protagonist would kill him and silence him. He didn't doubt it even if he didn't say it. After receiving such a huge benefit, he also eliminated the suspicion of the benefit. At least he had some trust. He really had to deepen his suspicious character!
Half of the chapter contains repeated equipment attributes. It doesn't matter if it's written like this before it's put on the shelves. But it's disgusting if it's written like this after it's put on the shelves.
Why does it get a score of 8.6? The author feels that he has no outline of his own and keeps following the main line, and the writing is particularly disgusting. As a time-traveler, the protagonist knows the plot, and what to do after various analyses, but he just doesn't do it or prepare, and he doesn't know whether he's missing the word count or what.
The author doesn't have much new stuff. He studied Qingyuan Dayan, came into contact with Nangong Wan, entered Yellow Maple Valley, and paid homage to Li Huayuan. He will probably follow the original work in the future. This is a low-level writing method for a fan.
Good-looking, very good-looking, super good-looking
Kill Wang Chan? Does the author know how many Nascent Souls Wang Chan's family has?
Wang Chan is more powerful than Wu Chou! Wu Chou is just one ancestor, and Wang Chan has several Nascent Soul relatives. Wu Chou has Nascent Soul upper body, can Wang Chan do it? In the previous Foundation Establishment Cave, his skills had to be placed on the table, otherwise you wouldn't be able to open the storage bag.
I found a special problem. In this mortal fan fiction, the original author forgot to write about not licking pig's feet. Nine out of ten books are like this. Basically, all of them will be read like this. Don't tell me that many people like dog licking stories, otherwise they wouldn't all be read.
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Official(107)Scraped 5d ago
I must take the Heaven-Building Pill, but what about the Ten Thousand Years Thunder Bamboo? You can't let Han Li give it to you, right? I personally think it's impossible for Han Li's cautious character! Confess about falling out
Don't you even think about writing novels now?
The protagonist is a mortal, and he can enter the cave of a foundation-building monk at any time? Can you still open the storage bag? Will you practice even if you get the exercises? Even if the protagonist is a casual cultivator!
The most taboo thing for mortals to write about is a nanny, and then the nanny leaves you with exercises, etc., And there is no such thing as an old one. Unless it is a cool article, the main reason is that you are not invincible.
From the beginning, I thought it was a good product and I was going to give it five stars. After chapter 60, it has many flaws and is even poisonous.
It looked good from the beginning, and I thought it was a high-quality mortal fanfic. Although there were some flaws, they were not major problems. However, after the 60th chapter, the flaws were a bit big. For example, the protagonist was besieged and killed by the Qianzhu Cult, and Han Li secretly watched the show to find out. Then the protagonist gave Han Li a skill because he sympathized with Han Li for being a fake spiritual root. Then he explained that it was for investment, so why don't you find some reasonable reason to give it away? Li Huayuan and Hong Fu both decided that Han Li and Dong Xuan'er would become a Taoist couple, but Han Li could directly refuse Li Huayuan and even agreed to it, and even asked the protagonist to go back to Yanjiabao and leave it to the protagonist. Is it reasonable? Moreover, the protagonist Ji Zhu had said before that he would not participate in Yanjiabao's mess. However, when Li Huayuan handed the matter over to him, he didn't refuse. Later, Han Li and Dong Xuan'er went together, and the protagonist went alone. Then the protagonist actually didn't take the opportunity to refuse, let alone go, and didn't sneak away. It was really wrong. It was ridiculous to kill Wang Chan. It wasn't like he was killed instantly by a sneak attack, but he was killed by waves of skills without using the Nascent Soul's back-up skills. When fighting the Blood Jade Spider, Han Li had just accepted the protagonist's skills without giving anything. The protagonist even vowed to have no future life due to inner demons. Here he began to have inexplicable suspicions that the protagonist would kill him and silence him. He didn't doubt it even if he didn't say it. After receiving such a huge benefit, he also eliminated the suspicion of the benefit. At least he had some trust. He really had to deepen his suspicious character!
Half of the chapter contains repeated equipment attributes. It doesn't matter if it's written like this before it's put on the shelves. But it's disgusting if it's written like this after it's put on the shelves.
Why does it get a score of 8.6? The author feels that he has no outline of his own and keeps following the main line, and the writing is particularly disgusting. As a time-traveler, the protagonist knows the plot, and what to do after various analyses, but he just doesn't do it or prepare, and he doesn't know whether he's missing the word count or what.
The author doesn't have much new stuff. He studied Qingyuan Dayan, came into contact with Nangong Wan, entered Yellow Maple Valley, and paid homage to Li Huayuan. He will probably follow the original work in the future. This is a low-level writing method for a fan.
Good-looking, very good-looking, super good-looking
Kill Wang Chan? Does the author know how many Nascent Souls Wang Chan's family has?
Wang Chan is more powerful than Wu Chou! Wu Chou is just one ancestor, and Wang Chan has several Nascent Soul relatives. Wu Chou has Nascent Soul upper body, can Wang Chan do it? In the previous Foundation Establishment Cave, his skills had to be placed on the table, otherwise you wouldn't be able to open the storage bag.
I found a special problem. In this mortal fan fiction, the original author forgot to write about not licking pig's feet. Nine out of ten books are like this. Basically, all of them will be read like this. Don't tell me that many people like dog licking stories, otherwise they wouldn't all be read.
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