Travel Through the World of Martial Arts with an Invincible Hero

First, the game is niche. At least it's not like just browsing a certain tune and there will be a host. +1 For screening readers. . . Second, the map is unfamiliar. It's not that the original work is not good. If you are an author like Zhongyuan Wubai, a new technology master, no matter what you write, fans will be happy to read it patiently. Are you? +1 For screening readers. . . Third, you know it yourself. The protagonist is possessed of magic. In ancient times, there was no extraordinary world. As a result, it is just a grinding plot. Are you tired? If we have a feud, can we still write three or four chapters? Are you kidding me? At the beginning of a feud, wouldn't it be okay to summon a skeleton to kill the person in full view of the public? Is the protagonist a civil servant or a local family? Without evidence, who dares to embarrass him? If a modern person travels through ancient times, forget about it if he doesn't have the power! Which of the powerful modern people is not morally inferior? Regarding the ancient environment, I really don't believe it. Who dares to have the heart of the Holy Mother? ! . . . But, then again, novels have to make money, and if you don't have to worry about writing them, how can you improve the word count? You love me, I love him, he loves her, she loves him, he doesn't love her, she doesn't love him, she and she are best friends, he and he are brothers, he and she are classmates, friends and colleagues and have conflicts... Haha, I understand everything. . .

My brother-in-law's family is really a failure. When your brother-in-law becomes an official, he will be useful. I don't know how strong you will be by then. You spend hundreds or thousands of taels on things for your brother-in-law's family, which is a large part of your net worth. What do you think, directly offering a bounty of more than ten percent of your net worth for your brother-in-law's children? In ancient times, the family of a small official still showed his wealth, so he thought it was too late to die fast enough. It's even funnier to spend thousands of taels to open up wasteland

It's really ugly. What are you writing? If you don't know how to write, don't write it. I'm timid and very timid. I've already mastered magic, and I'm still doing rural business here.

Readers who come to read this book have no idea what they are looking for. There is a problem with the direction of the writing. Then in the brain hemorrhage operation, there are invisible and insubstantial spirit troops that can be driven. Killing people will not let the ghost go. You have to consume the ghost life yourself to flash the front of Kazuto master, awesome.

Very stupid time traveler, I can't stand it

What can I say about this writing style? It's extremely uncomfortable to read...

First, there should not be too many storyline worlds, generally no more than 3, and a maximum of 5. Otherwise, the completeness and logic of the story's cognition will be too poor. The world of resources can be passed through in one go. Second, the value of force should not be infinitely exaggerated. It is too far away from the actual human body and the basic laws of the physical world. If it is separated from too much, the sense of immersion will be too bad. A bunch of scenes that cannot be understood or experienced are too obscene to be added to the word count. You can no longer read the last book after you connected to Cultivation. It can only be discarded. The story routines and realms of the Three Cultivation Immortals basically have a framework. It is too difficult to innovate and create a genre of your own. Fourth, the timeline of travel should not be flashbacks to the prehistoric times, which is ridiculous. Because of the underlying time loop paradox, it is difficult to tell the story clearly. It seems that there is an underlying contradiction, which leads to the feeling of subverting the origin by default. Since the past has been changed, how can it exist in the present? And since it has happened now, it must not have changed in the past. So flashbacks to go back and forth are not allowed. I hope you will adopt the above suggestions. After all, I am an old reader who supports you.

After reading Chapter 30, the landlord Huang Silang has a gun but doesn't need it. There are hammers here and there, not even a stick.

Before it was released, the more I listened to it, the more half-literate it became.

Rory, what a failure. Looks annoying