Travel Through the World of Martial Arts with an Invincible Hero

First, the game is niche. At least it's not like just browsing a certain tune and there will be a host. +1 For screening readers. . . Second, the map is unfamiliar. It's not that the original work is not good. If you are an author like Zhongyuan Wubai, a new technology master, no matter what you write, fans will be happy to read it patiently. Are you? +1 For screening readers. . . Third, you know it yourself. The protagonist is possessed of magic. In ancient times, there was no extraordinary world. As a result, it is just a grinding plot. Are you tired? If we have a feud, can we still write three or four chapters? Are you kidding me? At the beginning of a feud, wouldn't it be okay to summon a skeleton to kill the person in full view of the public? Is the protagonist a civil servant or a local family? Without evidence, who dares to embarrass him? If a modern person travels through ancient times, forget about it if he doesn't have the power! Which of the powerful modern people is not morally inferior? Regarding the ancient environment, I really don't believe it. Who dares to have the heart of the Holy Mother? ! . . . But, then again, novels have to make money, and if you don't have to worry about writing them, how can you improve the word count? You love me, I love him, he loves her, she loves him, he doesn't love her, she doesn't love him, she and she are best friends, he and he are brothers, he and she are classmates, friends and colleagues and have conflicts... Haha, I understand everything. . .

My brother-in-law's family is really a failure. When your brother-in-law becomes an official, he will be useful. I don't know how strong you will be by then. You spend hundreds or thousands of taels on things for your brother-in-law's family, which is a large part of your net worth. What do you think, directly offering a bounty of more than ten percent of your net worth for your brother-in-law's children? In ancient times, the family of a small official still showed his wealth, so he thought it was too late to die fast enough. It's even funnier to spend thousands of taels to open up wasteland

It's really ugly. What are you writing? If you don't know how to write, don't write it. I'm timid and very timid. I've already mastered magic, and I'm still doing rural business here.

First, there should not be too many storyline worlds, generally no more than 3, and a maximum of 5. Otherwise, the completeness and logic of the story's cognition will be too poor. The world of resources can be passed through in one go. Second, the value of force should not be infinitely exaggerated. It is too far away from the actual human body and the basic laws of the physical world. If it is separated from too much, the sense of immersion will be too bad. A bunch of scenes that cannot be understood or experienced are too obscene to be added to the word count. You can no longer read the last book after you connected to Cultivation. It can only be discarded. The story routines and realms of the Three Cultivation Immortals basically have a framework. It is too difficult to innovate and create a genre of your own. Fourth, the timeline of travel should not be flashbacks to the prehistoric times, which is ridiculous. Because of the underlying time loop paradox, it is difficult to tell the story clearly. It seems that there is an underlying contradiction, which leads to the feeling of subverting the origin by default. Since the past has been changed, how can it exist in the present? And since it has happened now, it must not have changed in the past. So flashbacks to go back and forth are not allowed. I hope you will adopt the above suggestions. After all, I am an old reader who supports you.

After reading chapters 5 and 60, I felt that the twisting energy was very familiar. When I looked at the author, I found out that he was indeed the author of The Bronze Door Through Time. Every book written by this guy relies on the title and setting to attract readers, and then drives people away with the boring plot and the protagonist's mysterious thoughts. Several books can be considered as food, but they cannot become jelly. Let's talk about the problem. The characters in the author's works, whether they are protagonists or supporting actors, men, women, or children, are all stereotyped, with little personality or appeal. Let's talk about the protagonist first. It's obvious that the author wanted to set the protagonist up as a character with a moral bottom line and a strong sense of humanity. However, he made the same mistake as in the previous book. When he got the golden finger, he didn't think about how to maximize his profits. Instead, he worried about how much damage his excessive killing would cause to the world and society. He died speechless. It's like buying a car and leaving it in the garage for fear that it will aggravate the greenhouse effect. Eh! I won't open it. I wonder if the author's editor has ever told him that the protagonist's rival is not someone else in the book, but the protagonist in someone else's book. Your protagonist is timid all day long. One moment he is worried that he is anti-social, and the next moment his inner demons show up again (referring to the previous book). The protagonist in other people's books is brave and diligent when he gets the golden finger. He has clear goals in doing things. He kills when he should and sets fire when he is told. He enjoys the pleasure himself and leaves the anxiety to the enemy. Also, whether a character is attractive or not depends on what he has done, not what you tell him. If you want to write about a brave person, you have to describe how powerful the enemy he faced, how difficult the difficulties he encountered, and how frightened and helpless he was in his heart, but he finally chose to face it. You have to write about a person who is very strong. If it is an enemy, you have to write about how a strong person on your own side is usually vulnerable to him. He still cannot escape from the clutches of the enemy despite all possible means. All conventional methods are ineffective. Use despair to set off the strength of the opponent. If it's your own side, you have to use peace of mind to set it off. I hope the author will go further in the future and not waste his own settings.

Readers who come to read this book have no idea what they are looking for. There is a problem with the direction of the writing. Then in the brain hemorrhage operation, there are invisible and insubstantial spirit troops that can be driven. Killing people will not let the ghost go. You have to consume the ghost life yourself to flash the front of Kazuto master, awesome.

Very stupid time traveler, I can't stand it

What can I say about this writing style? It's extremely uncomfortable to read...

It's too watery. What can be said in just a few words must be expressed in hundreds of words. As for whether there was any poison, I felt it was okay, mainly because the water one kept jumping around.

There is too much nonsense, I can't stand it anymore. If you don't know how to write about Heroes and Invincibles, then don't write. This is a strategic game, where you lead troops to fight, not for you to play house or farm. And the essence of your type is to screen readers. Those who know the Heroes and Invincibles series should play All that happened was because I wanted to become a hero lord with a faction city, and then conquer the world with troops, and then conquer the world. I won't see you doing business here, not to mention that you are starting in the cemetery, and the creatures are naturally hostile. You will either conquer the world or be wiped out.