Simultaneous Time Travel: Alliance of Father-worried Persons
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Special note: 600,000 words have been written in this book, so don't worry about eunuchs The worlds that have been confirmed to be involved are "One Piece", "Topo", "Naruto", "Hunter", and "Sword Wind", and other worlds are to be determined. It was a bit slow to pick up in the early stages, with the main characters being the protagonist's old father.
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Official(37)Scraped 1mo ago
No, buddy, the title of the book is time travel at the same time, but it ends up being 38 chapters or is there only one One Piece world? You might as well change your name to One Piece.
I really like this author's books, especially the fanfics! So far I have only read the DNA one, not the others!
The protagonist and his father are in supporting roles, and each chapter is very interesting. Except for the fighting chapter, which I didn't read, I recommend reading all of them. It's just that the latest Naruto arc feels a bit watery recently.
Not happy, criticize
The Naruto arc is a piece of shit, what's the point of the author's end? Is there no one left in the Uchiha clan? Or is the entire country deserted? Are the people in the village that the protagonist collected earlier dead? Mark it, Dou Po's writing is also a mess, no wonder I've never seen it. Always stops suddenly, always deliberately avoids the plot of improving the realm? Are you trying to use an original plot and a daily word count? No wonder. You can't write without following the plot, right? The most disgusting thing is that in Chapter 270, the story of breaking through the Douzong, the whole small space world suddenly riots. A lot of energy is gathering crazily on the protagonist! Then I thought that I would have to upgrade to at least two major realms, which would bring some great joy. Then you told me it was a one-star Dou Sect? ? ? So what's the use of this Qingdi Breaking Technique? And the Eternal Life Palace that was created, as well as those peak Dou Huang subordinates and sixth to seventh grade pharmacists? There are also several peak Dou Sects among them, including ordinary Dou Zun... Coupled with the protagonist's own strength, it is not difficult to obtain some resources of 1~2 star Dou Sect, right? Including those secret realms, it turned out to be a big mess, and the cheats were shit. I don't understand, what's the use of learning the old tricks of the same genre? So many resources plus small plug-ins are superimposed. But just can't be promoted to Dou Zun Half Saint? It's totally off the mark
If you are reading the same story, just skip to chapter 50, the previous part is all nonsense.
6. We only started to share strength after Chapter 50. There were all pirates in front of us. I came here to fight with you. What's the point of you showing off for Chapter 50 at the beginning? 😎
Author, I would like to make some comments on your previous scientific articles. A career that is clear and watery is very thin. If you write three years to subvert the entire industry, and the field will bloom, it is very thin. Just like your words about making hundreds of millions of dollars by stock trading are far less impactful than reality. (And you have written so much about your industry that it has become a disaster) You can completely use the Internet to let the protagonist secretly plan the plot. In reality, it is low-key, but on the Internet, he throws out theories that are beyond the times and inspires the famous figures who are now familiar with them. Describing the psychology and surging emotions of these characters when they see the protagonist are like a frog in a well, looking at the sky and the moon. Isn't it much better than simply writing about career? . It can also be postponed to be more enjoyable (for example, given your age, the events of appearing as a saint in front of others and appearing mysteriously can not lose character and lead to a reasonable climax. After all, that's what Masked Butterfly is for). You can also write about life. After all, the book about the protagonist with hyperamnesia shows that you have diligently checked the information. Isn't it natural to write about the local customs and encounter celebrities and heroes when writing a road story? And for online novels, it's entirely possible to arrange a scene where the protagonist falls out after becoming famous in two unrelated fields.
The plot is good, but it looks like a running account, without any passion, emotion or sense of involvement.
It's a great subject, but the writing seems a bit petty and slow, or maybe the progress is too slow and a bit boring!
Hanging sheep's heads and selling dog meat! Totally a pirate fan! It's been more than thirty chapters and I haven't seen any trace of Tongchuanliu!
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Official(37)Scraped 1mo ago
No, buddy, the title of the book is time travel at the same time, but it ends up being 38 chapters or is there only one One Piece world? You might as well change your name to One Piece.
I really like this author's books, especially the fanfics! So far I have only read the DNA one, not the others!
The protagonist and his father are in supporting roles, and each chapter is very interesting. Except for the fighting chapter, which I didn't read, I recommend reading all of them. It's just that the latest Naruto arc feels a bit watery recently.
Not happy, criticize
The Naruto arc is a piece of shit, what's the point of the author's end? Is there no one left in the Uchiha clan? Or is the entire country deserted? Are the people in the village that the protagonist collected earlier dead? Mark it, Dou Po's writing is also a mess, no wonder I've never seen it. Always stops suddenly, always deliberately avoids the plot of improving the realm? Are you trying to use an original plot and a daily word count? No wonder. You can't write without following the plot, right? The most disgusting thing is that in Chapter 270, the story of breaking through the Douzong, the whole small space world suddenly riots. A lot of energy is gathering crazily on the protagonist! Then I thought that I would have to upgrade to at least two major realms, which would bring some great joy. Then you told me it was a one-star Dou Sect? ? ? So what's the use of this Qingdi Breaking Technique? And the Eternal Life Palace that was created, as well as those peak Dou Huang subordinates and sixth to seventh grade pharmacists? There are also several peak Dou Sects among them, including ordinary Dou Zun... Coupled with the protagonist's own strength, it is not difficult to obtain some resources of 1~2 star Dou Sect, right? Including those secret realms, it turned out to be a big mess, and the cheats were shit. I don't understand, what's the use of learning the old tricks of the same genre? So many resources plus small plug-ins are superimposed. But just can't be promoted to Dou Zun Half Saint? It's totally off the mark
If you are reading the same story, just skip to chapter 50, the previous part is all nonsense.
6. We only started to share strength after Chapter 50. There were all pirates in front of us. I came here to fight with you. What's the point of you showing off for Chapter 50 at the beginning? 😎
Author, I would like to make some comments on your previous scientific articles. A career that is clear and watery is very thin. If you write three years to subvert the entire industry, and the field will bloom, it is very thin. Just like your words about making hundreds of millions of dollars by stock trading are far less impactful than reality. (And you have written so much about your industry that it has become a disaster) You can completely use the Internet to let the protagonist secretly plan the plot. In reality, it is low-key, but on the Internet, he throws out theories that are beyond the times and inspires the famous figures who are now familiar with them. Describing the psychology and surging emotions of these characters when they see the protagonist are like a frog in a well, looking at the sky and the moon. Isn't it much better than simply writing about career? . It can also be postponed to be more enjoyable (for example, given your age, the events of appearing as a saint in front of others and appearing mysteriously can not lose character and lead to a reasonable climax. After all, that's what Masked Butterfly is for). You can also write about life. After all, the book about the protagonist with hyperamnesia shows that you have diligently checked the information. Isn't it natural to write about the local customs and encounter celebrities and heroes when writing a road story? And for online novels, it's entirely possible to arrange a scene where the protagonist falls out after becoming famous in two unrelated fields.
The plot is good, but it looks like a running account, without any passion, emotion or sense of involvement.
It's a great subject, but the writing seems a bit petty and slow, or maybe the progress is too slow and a bit boring!
Hanging sheep's heads and selling dog meat! Totally a pirate fan! It's been more than thirty chapters and I haven't seen any trace of Tongchuanliu!
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C Taiping, I can't read the long story, and the author of short stories doesn't seem to be very good at writing.
The new book by the author of "Homo Sapiens" has gone through the exploratory stage in the first 80 chapters, and then ushered in an explosive and enjoyable plot. At the same time, the golden finger of time travel and the unique plug-in designed by the author in the inner space are all displayed. The protagonist's strength is greatly increased, and the farming plot in the inner space and the imagination of the development of power are also eye-catching. If this book had 20 chapters at night, the situation would be much better. Before it was released, there were too many pirates and it was in the development and exploration period when the power was not rising. It was not fun enough. When it was released, it was stuck in the exploratory stage before Dou Po was about to rise. Many people gave up on the wonderful design and plot of the inner space without seeing it. Not to mention the rapid development of Hokage Dou Po in the future. The gameplay was very cool, which resulted in unsatisfactory results. It was too late to wear the game and it was released too early. It is a pity.
99 Tongchuanliu fan The worlds are well connected The sharing of power is also good. It improves one's own strength, and there is no distorted feeling like Naruto conquering the world with pirate domineering. What is commendable about this book is its exploration of the plot, its use of treasures, and its exploration of the system. These three points will crush 90% of the Tongchuanliu fans Moreover, the switching of worlds is very smooth, and there will not be a situation where there are hundreds of thousands of words in one world. After I read it, it was a rare and good book, worth reading.
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