Simple Mode Starts from the Red Building

Not to mention that you can travel to other worlds, adjust the difficulty, and increase your talents. The golden finger is actually given to you by the human consciousness in a world without demons. Isn't it funny? If he can do this even if his level of prowess is low, why would he just give you a person who has traveled through time and directly give you a big gift of 100 million? There are more people who are better than you to complete the task, and there are so many people. There is really no basic logic at all. The level of Goldfinger has also been reduced to an extremely low level. I have written so much about a Red Mansion. I don't know what you are doing?

Why did Gu write about the second world? Can't martial arts, internal strength and lightness skills be taken from other martial arts worlds? Just find a side door? Is there anything better about adopting a prostitute's son as your own? After writing millions of words, no wonder he is still a third-level author.

The first three worlds are pretty good, but you can't see them in the real world. Goldfinger is created by human will in the real world. If the real world is going to end, let the protagonist save more people. Let the protagonist practice in the heavens and then save the world. If the will is so powerful, if he can't just connect to the heavens, why should he train the protagonist? The protagonist's logic is also weird. It's like making a virtual game and letting people in the real world play through the levels. There's also an organization called Butian Temple. There's no one left with all kinds of weird logic.

It's all an inner drama, I got goosebumps all over my body

Let's go to Chapter 40 or 50. You said earlier that the plot was okay, which can be considered self-defeating, but you suddenly made an advertisement for Michelle Ice City, which is really too dramatic. After all, it is an ancient world. You can be a villain in two worlds, but if you mix in too many modern elements, then what else are you watching? It will be boring. Then the other ancient world is just the same modern world, and it is easy to make these ancient characters stupid. You can say that compared to the modern world, these people in ancient times were ignorant, but you can never say that they are stupid. If an ordinary author wants to depict a wise man in ancient times, he needs to constantly ponder his thoughts in tea literature. If he adds too many modern elements, it is easy to ignore this aspect. For example, a very smart ancient man. All the people you wrote in the previous plot are quite smart, at least that's how your character is. However, if such a smart person appears shocked and miserable in some of your advertisements, then the character design is somewhat deviated. Smart people are easy to adapt to. It is difficult for such people to think about what this thing is like, but how it can be transformed into their own interests. I consider my own gains and losses, so after reading this, I stopped reading the rest.

What a waste of time to write about Yanzi Li Sanshi! Just learn martial arts and leave! Why are you writing this? Rewards again! Rubbish!

I thought it was good at first, but suddenly it was written that the golden finger was given by the collective consciousness of the human beings who traveled through the world in 2012, and I was instantly speechless.

The author is self-deprecating, and that's not wrong at all. Suppose it's me. I'll buy gold first. How can I buy a few kilograms? Then I'll buy things for self-defense. If I don't sell glass or pearls, I can sell sugar. Don't open a store, just wholesale. Are you doing business? Where do the store opening talents come from? How to trust? Women in ancient times were very particular about staying close to home. No matter how good your products are, no one will spread your reputation as a greedy person just for the sake of food and drink. What should you do with publicity? It's too natural, you just sell goods, get gold, sell pearls, sell silver, get gold. You wrote plots related to Dream of Red Mansions, and some people think it's good, because it's Cao Xueqin's stuff, and you just modified it. Look at other stuff you wrote, it's too bad.

After reading this, I don't know what to write anymore. The author started to let himself go

It's too poisonous in the back, why not just travel through the world honestly?