Journey to the West: Starting from Digging Out Sun Wukong
About This Novel
After many difficulties, he unified the world and the people lived and worked in peace and contentment. Just when Wang Mang was about to enjoy the fruits of victory, a five-element mountain fell from the sky and crushed countless people to death. What's even more annoying is that some Samana disciples came to the door and told the people that their destiny was given by God and that everything was destiny. Damn destiny! Suppressing my people, treating the lives of human beings as nothing, and still want to plan a journey to the west? There are no doors! If I don't let Daofasi pass on, I will lose.
What Readers Think
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Official(3)Scraped 3d ago
My evaluation is more fair
The length is short, but the plot is too long. I'm sure you don't have 1,500 words. You also reminded me of the Zhutian Projection video last year. That person made a list of 50 chapters. It's still good so far
As far as personal preference is concerned
I think the author's writing is quite good. The first point: The idea is novel, and the description of the characters is still okay. You can briefly write down the psychological aspect, but it all depends on the big picture. (I think it's okay) Second point: There is also a storyline, which is okay and good-looking ( •̀∀•́ ). I think the most important thing is that the characters are non-ooc, so that readers will feel smooth. Some of the current writing is still a bit OOC, but the large writing is still very good. The third point (here is a little bit involved in the article, new friends please leave quickly╮(╯▽╰)╭) Regarding the third point: Actually, I want to give the author some suggestions. The plot is indeed a bit long, so I should try to give as many tips as possible when the protagonist is struggling (but not too outrageous). Facing powerful enemies such as heaven and Buddhism, readers should also feel that this will take a long time. In addition, even if there is no way to show up, I want to conceal my identity secretly, form cliques and build an organization, etc. (Just describe it, the specific operation, if it is widely adopted, it can be used appropriately (･ิϖ･ิ)っ) (The above is purely a personal opinion, if there is any offense, please do not take offense (ฅ>ω<*ฅ)) I still hope that DaDa's books will be seen and appreciated by more people, so come on DaDa and don't give up (ง •̀_•́)ง. (Note: Personal feelings and other suggestions can be discussed downstairs, so that this book will gradually become better!) The funny part (my first time is dedicated to you)~(≧▽≦)/~ (referring to the long comment😘) Don't forget to update! The following pictures are from the Internet. If there is any infringement, they will be deleted (ಥ_ಥ)
generally
It's not very exciting, the setting is a bit uninteresting, and there is no feeling that the more you watch it, the more you want to read more.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 3d ago
My evaluation is more fair
The length is short, but the plot is too long. I'm sure you don't have 1,500 words. You also reminded me of the Zhutian Projection video last year. That person made a list of 50 chapters. It's still good so far
As far as personal preference is concerned
I think the author's writing is quite good. The first point: The idea is novel, and the description of the characters is still okay. You can briefly write down the psychological aspect, but it all depends on the big picture. (I think it's okay) Second point: There is also a storyline, which is okay and good-looking ( •̀∀•́ ). I think the most important thing is that the characters are non-ooc, so that readers will feel smooth. Some of the current writing is still a bit OOC, but the large writing is still very good. The third point (here is a little bit involved in the article, new friends please leave quickly╮(╯▽╰)╭) Regarding the third point: Actually, I want to give the author some suggestions. The plot is indeed a bit long, so I should try to give as many tips as possible when the protagonist is struggling (but not too outrageous). Facing powerful enemies such as heaven and Buddhism, readers should also feel that this will take a long time. In addition, even if there is no way to show up, I want to conceal my identity secretly, form cliques and build an organization, etc. (Just describe it, the specific operation, if it is widely adopted, it can be used appropriately (･ิϖ･ิ)っ) (The above is purely a personal opinion, if there is any offense, please do not take offense (ฅ>ω<*ฅ)) I still hope that DaDa's books will be seen and appreciated by more people, so come on DaDa and don't give up (ง •̀_•́)ง. (Note: Personal feelings and other suggestions can be discussed downstairs, so that this book will gradually become better!) The funny part (my first time is dedicated to you)~(≧▽≦)/~ (referring to the long comment😘) Don't forget to update! The following pictures are from the Internet. If there is any infringement, they will be deleted (ಥ_ಥ)
generally
It's not very exciting, the setting is a bit uninteresting, and there is no feeling that the more you watch it, the more you want to read more.
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