
Mortal: Return of Apprenticeship? Bug at the Beginning
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New Book: Mortal: I Have a Lottery Panel Traveling to the mortal world, there is a disciple-returning system, and the treasures taught to disciples can be returned multiple times? Then it must be stuck with a BUG! First cut off the Hu Palm Heavenly Vase, and then teach it to Han Li.
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Official(49)Scraped 3d ago
The author is definitely a newbie! There are many typos and the writing is not precise! I suggest you reopen it.
From the perspective of cheats: the protagonist should seize the opportunity and keep using cheats to get rewards! Instead of selling elixirs through 10x Palm Sky Bottle. Because there is no risk in getting rewards through cheats, but there are risks in trading! Therefore, the best way to use this golden finger is to give spiritual stones to apprentices, and then buy items with the spiritual stones, and then give them to apprentices, forming a virtuous cycle! Just give him the Palm Heaven Bottle, let's not talk about what Han Li will think! Do you think Han Li still lacks you as a master after he obtained the Heaven Palm Vase? This is called eating out of control! What can't Han Li get in exchange for the Sky Palm Vase? Have you ever thought about whether he would take it back next time you give him something? People are always reluctant to accept easy gifts, especially when they have the ability to get it easily! This is human nature! Let's make an outline first! The protagonist goes to be a disciple to give you a thousand-year elixir or something. Let's not talk about whether others will investigate the origin of your thousand-year elixir. What is the meaning of this plot? Do you lack the skills to have this golden finger? Also, do you think it's so easy to meet a Danjie elder? It's just like you suddenly want to learn business from Jack Ma. It's not that easy. A little Qi practitioner holding a thousand-year-old elixir is like a child carrying gold through the busy city. It is really blinding.
When rice rises, rice rises and rice falls, and the master is plotted against by his apprentice in the mortal world of cultivating immortals. The wife plots against her husband too much, and her desire cannot be satisfied if she gives too many things. Sooner or later, she will be plotted against in the mortal world.
Such a well-written novel is really rare😥
It's really speechless that Mo Mansion accepts wives.
Write an outline carefully
I have ideas, but the plot is too honest to be honest. Judging from the plot of the original book, the Chen family does not have many worldly connections, but more family interests. Secondly, why did you meet the ancestor of the Dan Jie during the Qi training period? In comparison, Huang Fenggu Hongfu and Li Huayuan are definitely better. Secondly, Li Huayuan has the Qingyuan Sword Art and the third-turn Chongyuan Gong in his hands. In terms of plot, Han Li is only ten times better? The nameless character in the subsequent three spiritual roots, twenty times? If you only look at spiritual root qualifications, why would you accept Han Li? Secondly, there is no need to accept the supporting characters in the original work. Han Li and Zhang Tie are enough. Then I will collect Xin Ruyin, make the characters more vivid, and then collect the chaotic sea of stars that follows.
What a stupid dog. He traded all the talismans of the Void Stage and returned hundreds of thousands of spirit stones. What a fool!
What a stupid dog. He traded all the talismans from the Void Training Stage and returned hundreds of thousands of spirit stones. What a stupid dog. ^_^
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Official(49)Scraped 3d ago
The author is definitely a newbie! There are many typos and the writing is not precise! I suggest you reopen it.
From the perspective of cheats: the protagonist should seize the opportunity and keep using cheats to get rewards! Instead of selling elixirs through 10x Palm Sky Bottle. Because there is no risk in getting rewards through cheats, but there are risks in trading! Therefore, the best way to use this golden finger is to give spiritual stones to apprentices, and then buy items with the spiritual stones, and then give them to apprentices, forming a virtuous cycle! Just give him the Palm Heaven Bottle, let's not talk about what Han Li will think! Do you think Han Li still lacks you as a master after he obtained the Heaven Palm Vase? This is called eating out of control! What can't Han Li get in exchange for the Sky Palm Vase? Have you ever thought about whether he would take it back next time you give him something? People are always reluctant to accept easy gifts, especially when they have the ability to get it easily! This is human nature! Let's make an outline first! The protagonist goes to be a disciple to give you a thousand-year elixir or something. Let's not talk about whether others will investigate the origin of your thousand-year elixir. What is the meaning of this plot? Do you lack the skills to have this golden finger? Also, do you think it's so easy to meet a Danjie elder? It's just like you suddenly want to learn business from Jack Ma. It's not that easy. A little Qi practitioner holding a thousand-year-old elixir is like a child carrying gold through the busy city. It is really blinding.
When rice rises, rice rises and rice falls, and the master is plotted against by his apprentice in the mortal world of cultivating immortals. The wife plots against her husband too much, and her desire cannot be satisfied if she gives too many things. Sooner or later, she will be plotted against in the mortal world.
Such a well-written novel is really rare😥
It's really speechless that Mo Mansion accepts wives.
Write an outline carefully
I have ideas, but the plot is too honest to be honest. Judging from the plot of the original book, the Chen family does not have many worldly connections, but more family interests. Secondly, why did you meet the ancestor of the Dan Jie during the Qi training period? In comparison, Huang Fenggu Hongfu and Li Huayuan are definitely better. Secondly, Li Huayuan has the Qingyuan Sword Art and the third-turn Chongyuan Gong in his hands. In terms of plot, Han Li is only ten times better? The nameless character in the subsequent three spiritual roots, twenty times? If you only look at spiritual root qualifications, why would you accept Han Li? Secondly, there is no need to accept the supporting characters in the original work. Han Li and Zhang Tie are enough. Then I will collect Xin Ruyin, make the characters more vivid, and then collect the chaotic sea of stars that follows.
What a stupid dog. He traded all the talismans of the Void Stage and returned hundreds of thousands of spirit stones. What a fool!
What a stupid dog. He traded all the talismans from the Void Training Stage and returned hundreds of thousands of spirit stones. What a stupid dog. ^_^
































