Legend of Konoha from the Heart

This book is not very well written. I would give it three stars at most. In the early stage, the protagonist was a weakling and a bit fat, which many people disliked. The reason why I wrote it this way is because there are too many protagonists who are very happy at the beginning. In reality, is it possible for any cat or dog to travel to Naruto and immediately kill everyone? He was obviously a weakling who had accomplished nothing, but as soon as he became Hokage, he became wily and resourceful. How did he do it? It's hard for me to say that the main character is fat and uninvolving. It's a matter of opinion. I have written it so clearly, Die Hua and Yang Seal, you can't wait, I can only say that I tried my best. Finally, I would like to mention that if a book review says that the book is not good or has problems, I will generally not delete it. As long as you have something to say, I will still thank you. But those who are empty and abusive, sorry, please go away!

Author, how did you come up with the idea that Awakening is the Three Magatama? I'm very curious.

Would you like to know more about the settings of shadow clones? Several clones have been destroyed, but their memories are not transmitted back. I am afraid they are not fake shadow clones.

Taichi is a failure. The author probably wanted to write a friend and mentor jounin who is informal, bold, cares about the protagonist but also plays nonsense, but unfortunately the portrayal is too deliberate and makes people feel sick.,,, And there is also the problem with the protagonist, he has been killed once, and he either hides it in a low-key manner or works hard. Practice, how about getting married? I don't want to practice. The Mangekyou can't beat the second Magatama. I was caught and almost killed by Kidomaru. I really have nothing except the Mangekyo Sharingan. Without it, I will become a waste. I can't pass the Taijutsu and Taijutsu. I have poor combat consciousness and no control on the battlefield. Five years? What have you done? Just eat, eat, eat? ? ? It can only beat the second pillar, Tayuya Kidomaru can't beat it, let alone beat it, even the kaleidoscope is wasted, the three magatama is criticized to death by Kakashi, who is not an Uchiha clan, and it is a waste in the hands of the protagonist...

Kaleidoscope at the beginning, although the pupil technique is not offensive, it can be said to be top-notch according to your settings. However, after watching two pictures, I feel that it is a bit muddy and cannot be used to hold up the wall.

The sense of immersion is too bad. Why! [Emot=default,09/]Boring.

Follow your heart? Cowardly?

Putting respectable people in reality into novels, how do you look at them and change them?

The setting of the shadow clone was subverted by the author: If the main body is asleep or unconscious, the shadow clone will be released directly. Moreover, whether the shadow clone is released by itself or is released by violence, the memory will be fed back to other clones and the original body, no matter how far away they are. There are also a lot of miscellaneous plots in the content. The plot is too protracted. It is just a small fragment and the author needs several chapters to describe it. He even often makes jokes. It's okay to make jokes, but this joke doesn't reach the point at all. Moreover, the character of the protagonist is a bit weird and timid. He usually pretends to be a child, but sometimes he looks mature. The most important thing is that the author is very good at setting the background of the characters, but he cannot describe the characters, not even the characters in the original work. In order to make the readers' emotions fluctuate, the author makes many self-designed or original characters say some words that are inappropriate or even inconsistent with his own setting. This makes me very uncomfortable. If you haven't watched Naruto, forget it. People who have watched it are really... You can tell that this novel should be the author's debut work in the Naruto series. I hope the author will finish reading Naruto, so that he can write more and better Naruto fanfics.

Don't blame the author, just think about it after reading it.