Konoha's Mission Master
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Traveled through Naruto and became the son of an ordinary civilian Chuunin. In this world where life is at stake, he has obtained a golden finger that speeds up the practice of ninjutsu, allowing the ninjutsu itself to undergo magical changes. The sword cuts the Taoist jade, and the water bullet breaks the Susan.
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I saw something like breaking through the genin again. How to break through with a professional title?
Genin, Chuunin, these are all professional titles. There is no breakthrough or no breakthrough. You must always understand that a genin is not necessarily weak, and a jounin is not necessarily strong. Ninjas are about intelligence analysis, and everyone has weaknesses.
Masako Mori made me want to give up the book after reading it. A woman has suffered so much, even more than the protagonist and Kakashi.
The key talent is still high, don't tell me anything about blood returning to the ancestors. If so, wouldn't her parents suffer more? I think just let her or her parents be the new masters of Naruto Village. What you wrote like this is not just a combination of two different bloodlines, but both are geniuses. If two different bloodlines could be combined so casually to form a bloodline rejuvenation, wouldn't it have happened a long time ago? Still waiting until now? Then how come the Senju and Uzumaki have been married for so long and don't have any blood to return to their ancestors? ? ?
The protagonist is not the protagonist
The protagonist doesn't look like a protagonist at all. You made this woman look more like the protagonist than the protagonist. The Uchiha clan hid themselves in a ninja shop for ordinary people. There is no need for the woman to be more mysterious than the protagonist.
I can't stand it when I see pirates.
The front is fine, but the pirates in the back are unbearable. Most of the pirates are from the sea, and the main character is Naruto. His system can tread water and escape through water. Most pirates are fruit power users How can I lose this fight? I can't beat it. One stop on the sea, the water escape, the protagonist is still so grinding, and the plot of One Piece is still so much.
Not so good
There is serious homogeneity, and you are already a movie star at the age of 7?
Konoha's Mission Master
The character Kosuke Maruboshi is considered a mission master (ten thousand years of genin), (rarely seen in fan fiction). I hope the author can write a plot about him.
There is serious homogeneity and it is basically an assembly line work.
No one who pays enough attention to setting and character description can write a work like this.
Use it once and charge it once, use it once and charge it once. What's the use? Do you use it?
1 piece of advice for the author
Everything else is good, but the progress is too slow. The protagonist's growth rate is a bit too slow. It feels like having a system is similar to not having a system. You all rely on doing tasks to train. It's just that the system is a little faster. But I feel that you can strengthen the tasks behind the system. For example, do some B-level tasks or C-level tasks. The strengthening points are 3 to 4.5 Points.
Very good new book
The protagonist has clear goals, good intentions, and tries to help others as much as possible while protecting himself.
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Community(0)
Official(33)Scraped 20d ago
I saw something like breaking through the genin again. How to break through with a professional title?
Genin, Chuunin, these are all professional titles. There is no breakthrough or no breakthrough. You must always understand that a genin is not necessarily weak, and a jounin is not necessarily strong. Ninjas are about intelligence analysis, and everyone has weaknesses.
Masako Mori made me want to give up the book after reading it. A woman has suffered so much, even more than the protagonist and Kakashi.
The key talent is still high, don't tell me anything about blood returning to the ancestors. If so, wouldn't her parents suffer more? I think just let her or her parents be the new masters of Naruto Village. What you wrote like this is not just a combination of two different bloodlines, but both are geniuses. If two different bloodlines could be combined so casually to form a bloodline rejuvenation, wouldn't it have happened a long time ago? Still waiting until now? Then how come the Senju and Uzumaki have been married for so long and don't have any blood to return to their ancestors? ? ?
The protagonist is not the protagonist
The protagonist doesn't look like a protagonist at all. You made this woman look more like the protagonist than the protagonist. The Uchiha clan hid themselves in a ninja shop for ordinary people. There is no need for the woman to be more mysterious than the protagonist.
I can't stand it when I see pirates.
The front is fine, but the pirates in the back are unbearable. Most of the pirates are from the sea, and the main character is Naruto. His system can tread water and escape through water. Most pirates are fruit power users How can I lose this fight? I can't beat it. One stop on the sea, the water escape, the protagonist is still so grinding, and the plot of One Piece is still so much.
Not so good
There is serious homogeneity, and you are already a movie star at the age of 7?
Konoha's Mission Master
The character Kosuke Maruboshi is considered a mission master (ten thousand years of genin), (rarely seen in fan fiction). I hope the author can write a plot about him.
There is serious homogeneity and it is basically an assembly line work.
No one who pays enough attention to setting and character description can write a work like this.
Use it once and charge it once, use it once and charge it once. What's the use? Do you use it?
1 piece of advice for the author
Everything else is good, but the progress is too slow. The protagonist's growth rate is a bit too slow. It feels like having a system is similar to not having a system. You all rely on doing tasks to train. It's just that the system is a little faster. But I feel that you can strengthen the tasks behind the system. For example, do some B-level tasks or C-level tasks. The strengthening points are 3 to 4.5 Points.
Very good new book
The protagonist has clear goals, good intentions, and tries to help others as much as possible while protecting himself.
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[Naruto fan, mission master]
Naruto fan fiction. Well written. Recommendation index three stars
The soul penetrates Naruto and is a commoner ninja, Can become cannon fodder. Fortunately, I have a golden finger. The knife cuts and begs for the liver emperor to be ruthless. Traveling through the world of Naruto, he became the son of an ordinary civilian chuunin in the Konoha Ninja Village. In this world where human life is like a piece of grass, most ordinary ninjas are just cannon fodder. Fortunately, he has awakened the golden finger that can accelerate the practice of ninjutsu. For his own life, let this liver burn! ! ! Recommendation index: ★★★☆☆
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