I, the Mountain-moving Taoist, Will Never Fight Backwards

It's written for a good reason. There are very few people who write this kind of book. As the author said, you need to have deep knowledge, but it's good to be like the author at the beginning. The protagonist travels to a different world and mutates the Ming Dynasty (it seems that the Fengtian Rebellion was successful, and the Ming Dynasty split into two countries, the north and the south). Fortunately, the dynasty is just the background. , Otherwise I really want to talk about the author. Zhu Di was able to succeed because of the family civil war. Others were watching, and he fought smoothly all the way. Although he was blocked by Zhu Yuanzhang's portrait, it also allowed Zhu Di to win the hearts of bystanders. If he suffered a big defeat as mentioned in the article, he would still be attacked by a group. How can the north and the south be divided? This is also about the background, and then I grew up while robbing tombs, but there is another point. In fact, the author did not handle it well. He wanted to write a low-level mystery, and got a golden finger to create treasures to attract readers. The first two are of no use. The evil-proof stone is the treasure used by Qinglong to become a Taoist. It does not improve the protagonist's cultivation level and has no magical effect. The Qinglong can help the protagonist kill ghosts and act as a converter of divine power. Then even moving mountains and touching the golden cave were useless. Facing Guan Yu's tomb, we still entered the tomb through the holes of other tomb robbers. Of course, these adventure experiences are also quite exciting. The main reason for abandoning the book is the author's acceptance speech. First, he thinks that he is not as knowledgeable as the author of Ghost Blowing the Lamp, which means that the plot behind it probably does not have rich background support. Second, it is clear that this is a low-mystery world, and the protagonist's combat power cannot compete with the big forces in the end, which means that others want to kill him. The protagonist can still be killed, and the protagonist is a troublemaker who is not afraid of anything. (He killed the little duke directly. Although he is not happy with the little duke, it is a big cause and effect that religious people avoid). Moreover, after getting so many treasures, it is still a low-mysterious world. What will you write next. There is no deep tomb-robbery site like Gui Chuu Leng, and it does not write magical and mysterious spells. What are you thinking about? Third, this is an original novel, not a fanfic, and it lacks a sense of expectation. If you don't have the background, you can learn from it and use your imagination, but in the end you don't learn from it. The author is too proud

The writing is sophisticated and the characters are well-drawn. The plot loses the thrills of the early stage when the protagonist goes to the tomb after mastering the magic. The middle and later stages are more like showing off knowledge in front of different people. In the latest plot, the tomb of the king also gains very little, and there is almost no gain in improving the realm of the golden elixir. It gives the impression that just for the sake of a sword hilt and scabbard, the king's tomb has appeared, and the result is that it is done easily and becomes more and more boring. Even the golden elixir has not arrived, and going down to the tomb is like walking on flat ground, dull and boring. If we really reach the golden elixir realm, can we have a grand finale? The choice of era background is also inappropriate. Even if the situation in the middle and late Ming Dynasty is unstable, it is still incomparable with the last years of the dynasty. There is an old saying that when a country is about to fall, there must be evildoers. How do you make up the idea of ​​choosing a slightly more stable era? If a prince rebels by relying on corpse insects, you can be considered creative. The appearance of drought demons is not as effective as corpse insects. In the later stage, you hide the monsters in the Classic of Mountains and Seas in the tomb and wait for the protagonist to eat them? To be honest, the author, your writing style and knowledge reserve are both good, and the subject you chose is also interesting, such as robbing tombs and cultivating immortals. If the era is set in the Republic of China, various film and television novels can learn from it and become a Stitch Monster. The main plot is to defeat monsters step by step, upgrade and change maps. The dungeon can be classic nostalgia or thrilling and suspenseful, combined with the feelings of family and country. The protagonist's current monastic system can be moved to the world of Stitch Monsters. This kind of collision of ideas is even more interesting! Or you can also learn from Captain America now, go to the tomb to find out the situation, and when you come out, it will be seamlessly connected to the Republic of China!

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Which of these tomb robbers is not disgusted by humans and ghosts? And asked you to write it as a sect? Are all the major Dharma families competing to win over you? Funny? Don't you think the tomb robbers have enemies all over the place? It's like a mouse walking around and everyone kicks it, right? You dug up the graves of eighteen generations of people's ancestors? Do they still call you brothers?

Just so-so, a coward who has been abused all the time!

When I heard Chapter 196, it was okay at first, but the progress of the plot was too slow later on, and there were too many explanatory texts.

The first half is exciting, but like many novels, readability quickly declines as the protagonist becomes more powerful. 3.5 Stars because members get an extra half star for free.

It's well written and engaging, but it was too sudden. Isn't there any space about the post-ascension chapter?

I don't know what's going on with this book. The upper limit of two days in three days is waived. My mother is going to be a regular guest.

When there are no two protagonists at the beginning and he is still garbage, let him download the advanced dungeon.