Weird Sequence: Immortality Begins from Chinese Martial Arts

1. The author's writing about Chinese martial arts is very tasteful. 2. The fighting scenes are also good, not a bit of a bastard. 3. The plot is too bad 4. The organization is useless at all. Everyone has factory uniforms when they enter the factory, and the benefits of the protagonist entering the organization are not reflected. 5. As an official, the psychological quality is too poor, and it is outrageous that such a large organization needs newcomers to save the day. 6. The abilities of the protagonist's teammates are too exaggerated, and they are not as powerful as other Chinese zodiac signs. This is the official strength, and the official strength is not as good as the private sector. 7. There is no configuration for official personnel, so you can buy the equipment yourself 8. The currency of resource equipment is money, which is very unreasonable.

I just said, apart from buying pills, did the official give me anything else? You still have to spend your own money to buy it... It's useless to join.

It's an old-fashioned story. In the first few chapters, the first person you come into contact with is a woman, and then the policewoman comes and asks you to do something. And carefully read what he wrote in the second chapter. On the bus, his hand was bloody, and there was a bloody sword on the seat next to him. Then when the woman screamed, she only saw the blood on her hand, and the sword next to her was not covered in blood? Just forcibly reduce your intelligence. Would a normal person see a bloody sword and not call the police? If you just say something directly, people will see the blood on your hands and the sword on the seat next to you. Are you blind?

Deletion of comments is very serious It was very good before it was put on the shelves, but after it was wanted, he suddenly went from being an official to being the "prince" of the underworld? Is this the Dragon King God of War? There is no foreshadowing at all, and the twist is too big. Before it was released, the family aspect was not mentioned at all about the extraordinary. Then all of a sudden, a large extraordinary family came, and there was no care at all. It felt like it was written by another person.

Why do we always weaken the official power? After the Jianghu organizations in the country knew that they had fought with official personnel, they even provoked them by wiping their necks. The background is that the Extraordinary Era has been developing for two years.

It would be nice to change the name of the author or protagonist to Tang Nan or Jiang San, so that all the little poisonous points will have a reasonable explanation.

Everything else is fine, but the progress is a bit slow. It's almost 300 chapters before Sequence 8 is completed. It's been 2 years since Heaven Change and the strongest one who has been grabbing monsters and killing monsters in the real world for 2 years has reached Sequence 4. The protagonist has been awakened for more than half a year, and he still has the gray world full of monsters and resources. In this weird world, there is no need to compete with others. I have just completed Sequence 8. If I give the fastest one, I estimate that I have reached Sequence 7 or 6 in half a year. I can only say that everything else is good, but the pace is very slow, and the updates are slow. Combined with the slow pace, it is easy to stop reading.

There are some typos in the article, but they don't hinder the reading. It mainly uses the protagonist himself to be involved in a strange world, and learns boxing techniques and sequences from the real world to increase his strength. How can I say it, it is quite interesting, but there are a lot of perspectives of the protagonist, and there are still a few other characters, such as the people he comes into contact with in the real world, his family, there is not much space to expand on, but it is normal for the article to be just started. Hahahaha, look forward to the update. Anyway, it is very interesting. I can keep reading. I look forward to it.

It is said to be a cool article but not as good as a cool one. I read it with my brain and the writing is not organized. I only read the first ten chapters and the writing is quite confusing.

The author of this book definitely has a great writing style, and the writing is smooth, concise and clear, but the storyline is not attractive and the plot concept is not very good. There were several films that didn't have a protagonist, and I seem to remember that there were two consecutive films that didn't have a protagonist. Although I knew it was the beginning of the plot, it was without a beginning or end, and people's expectations plummeted. Also, the idea of joining Gongmen is really not good. I believe that many book friends have given up on books for this reason. How can there be so many bullshit and ruinous things just after joining? It has no deterrent effect. In my opinion, such an extraordinary department is like Jin Yiwei, even if it is viewed by people in the same system. It is unimaginable that a department that has to be sidelined is suppressed by a few gangster forces with some background. The protagonist is framed by the superiors and does not react at all. It makes people feel that he is not a normal person. He has quit the department directly. It is not more comfortable to go to any force. Nowadays, when people read novels, they don't like the protagonist being yelled at. Even if he is a chicken head, he is more interesting than you, a phoenix tail.