Supreme Fire

Author, you are writing about immortals, not modern times. If you are too cute and a bit 2B, you can write less. I've only read a few dozen chapters and I can't stand it anymore. If the rest of the series is like this, no wonder no one has read it.

It's really rubbish. No wonder no one sees it. He uses his abilities indiscriminately. No one doubts that he has good stuff. It's so fake and messy.

It doesn't matter whether you wear it or not, as long as it looks good. .

Awesome, passing the mission

There's too much nonsense. Can you please make up the word count? Write well

Come on, author!

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The sky is blue, and in a small village surrounded by auspicious clouds, an old man is talking to a young man in civilian clothes. "Well, your eyes are treacherous, your clothes are tattered, you are wretched and have no temperament! Alas, will our sect rely on disciples like this to carry forward the future? How unworthy of our ancestor!" The fairy-like old man shook his head, looking distressed.

It's really tiring to read in the third person, there's too much nonsense, and it's easy to get distracted just by reading it!