Mortals, Cultivators Have Awakened the Poisonous Body of Disaster!
by Update In The Early Morning
About This Novel
After traveling through mortal life, Han Lin became Han Li's cousin, and together with Han Li and Zhang Tie, he became a disciple of Mo Juren. Because he hinted at Zhang Tie, Han Li was poisoned and assassinated by Mo Juren, but he unexpectedly awakened the evil body of disaster! At this point, other monks took miraculous elixirs to improve their cultivation and realm, but Han Lin only needed to take poison! ... Hundreds of years later, the Mulan people invaded the Tiannan Cultivation World! Other monks use magic weapons, magic weapons, spells, magical powers, talismans, and formations to kill powerful enemies. Han Lin's superb poison magic power killed thousands of Mulan magicians. He was so powerful that no one dared to mess with him!
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Official(10)Scraped 2mo ago
Okay, it's just that the body is a bit short
Very strong, I hope I can become a god within 200 years old
What the hell are you writing? Why is it like anything else? As soon as you arrive at Mo Mansion, you act like an idiot.
The plot of repeated urging for marriage after apprenticeship
It's a bit annoying, and then there is the plot that there is still no breakthrough after becoming a monk after Tiannan Yuanhou. It is limited to the cage of the original work, and the original heroine is used to squander the plot without emotion. What if you write about Han Li's changes? ? It's also better than the poorly written blunt story about choosing a concubine to urge her to get married, and jealousy to steal the bride.
Generally speaking, even though Han Li and I are relatives, we write like strangers.
Do you accept them all? Please reply as soon as possible.
Damn, the subject matter is good, but the details are messed up. There is only a name and introduction to the technique and then nothing else is written. The same is true for the magic weapon. The secret technique is not mentioned at all, just a zombie poison. It feels like I just wrote a framework to fill in the AI.
Poison belongs to wood, so it can be used to practice wood-attribute skills. Also, who is the heroine?
Why does his writing style sound so awkward to read?
When writing a novel, tell more stories and less explanations. . . The author just explains too much, and there are often large paragraphs of explanatory text in the article. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters also like to explain and are particularly good at speaking and expressing their thoughts. For example, the conversation with the Mo family's mother and daughter, or the conversation with Xin Ruyin's master and servant when they first met. . . The author especially likes to write that the protagonist says "I don't want to worry too much, I don't want to talk nonsense, so I won't say much". In fact, he is very eloquent, and the words he speaks take up a lot of space. . .
The author is also a vegetative person, quite quiet.
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Official(10)Scraped 2mo ago
Okay, it's just that the body is a bit short
Very strong, I hope I can become a god within 200 years old
What the hell are you writing? Why is it like anything else? As soon as you arrive at Mo Mansion, you act like an idiot.
The plot of repeated urging for marriage after apprenticeship
It's a bit annoying, and then there is the plot that there is still no breakthrough after becoming a monk after Tiannan Yuanhou. It is limited to the cage of the original work, and the original heroine is used to squander the plot without emotion. What if you write about Han Li's changes? ? It's also better than the poorly written blunt story about choosing a concubine to urge her to get married, and jealousy to steal the bride.
Generally speaking, even though Han Li and I are relatives, we write like strangers.
Do you accept them all? Please reply as soon as possible.
Damn, the subject matter is good, but the details are messed up. There is only a name and introduction to the technique and then nothing else is written. The same is true for the magic weapon. The secret technique is not mentioned at all, just a zombie poison. It feels like I just wrote a framework to fill in the AI.
Poison belongs to wood, so it can be used to practice wood-attribute skills. Also, who is the heroine?
Why does his writing style sound so awkward to read?
When writing a novel, tell more stories and less explanations. . . The author just explains too much, and there are often large paragraphs of explanatory text in the article. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters also like to explain and are particularly good at speaking and expressing their thoughts. For example, the conversation with the Mo family's mother and daughter, or the conversation with Xin Ruyin's master and servant when they first met. . . The author especially likes to write that the protagonist says "I don't want to worry too much, I don't want to talk nonsense, so I won't say much". In fact, he is very eloquent, and the words he speaks take up a lot of space. . .
The author is also a vegetative person, quite quiet.
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