The Elixir of Immortality for Mortals to Achieve Immortality
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Huang Yichuan, the legitimate son of a small family in Lanzhou, has mediocre qualifications and a bleak future. When I was fifteen years old, I awakened Su Hui and was shocked to realize that I was a Blue Star person and was reincarnated in this world. From then on, the understanding is greatly increased, and the golden finger is activated: through the improvement of cultivation level, deduction points can be gradually obtained. Starting from the tenth level of Qi refining, as the difficulty of the advancement increases, the points obtained gradually increase. Deduction points can complete and improve elixir recipes, exercises and secret techniques. From then on, he no longer had to worry about his skills, and his cultivation level soared by swallowing the non-resistant 'perfect elixir'. At Tainan's small gathering, he met Han Li, who was still a minor cultivator of Qi Refining. "Brother Han, your alchemy is not strong enough. I have my own experience. Can you and I exchange ideas?" He shared his experience and warned the cautious young man: "The fight for immortality is precious, so don't leave any regrets just because you are too stubborn." After that, he joined the Hidden Moon Sect, practiced in a low-key manner, and silently refined elixirs. However, the potency of the elixir was so strong that it attracted the fairies from the sect to come in droves. He specializes in collecting leftovers of secret techniques and ancient elixirs. Spiritual stones, spiritual elixirs, spiritual talismans and spiritual materials, he would not reject them all. Huang Yichuan: What? You said you don't have any? How can you give good pills away for free? Since you want to make progress so much, then... Go into the cave and have a detailed discussion. ... When Han Li returned from the Sea of Chaos Stars and became famous throughout the world, he finally saw his old friend again. I saw the other party standing on top of the mountain gate of the Hidden Moon Sect, with the Nascent Soul Dharma Standing above the sky and the earth. Han Li couldn't help but said in shock: "Brother Huang, back then you advised me to be brave and diligent, and don't settle for nothing..." "Why did you keep silent and get married to the Nascent Soul first?"
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Official(13)Scraped 23d ago
Fanfic about being forced to become mentally ill in order not to enter the Yellow Maple Valley
On the surface, these authors do not enter Yellow Maple Valley, but they go back and forth and get entangled with Yellow Maple Valley. So why not enter Yellow Maple Valley from the beginning? Going into the Hidden Moon Sect Spiritual Beast Mountain at every turn, without the basis of the original work, I can only make it up randomly, and the style of the make-up is so different from the original work that it makes me sick to watch. It's not that you can't add something to fan fiction, but you have to keep the style consistent and not contradict the original work. Just like some fan authors don't want to learn Han Li's skills, so they can only make up their own, including the Qingdi Muhuang Kung Fu. The seven sects are all losers. How are the other sects better than Huang Maple Valley? My favorite in the fan fiction is Hidden Moon Sect and Spirit Beast Mountain. How can you do well when Spirit Beast Mountain cleans up the portal? Doesn't the Hidden Moon Sect want to run away like a dead dog? What is the purpose of joining the Seven Sects? It is for the foundation building pill and the stable environment in the early stage and the status of the sect monk. As a transition to running away in front of the chaotic sea of stars, it's the same for any of the seven sects. There is also the Dayan Jue in Yellow Maple Valley, and there are so many supporting characters that you don't need to make up your own. Even if they don't run away, in the long run, how are the other factions better than Huang Maple Valley? Is it better to live in Yellow Maple Valley without having to fight within the Hidden Moon Sect? If Huang Maple Valley betrays its disciples, how many other sects will not betray them?
Speechless
The protagonist keeps saying he wants to keep a low profile, so why should Han Lao Mo attract risks? I practice quietly and steadily in the back The problem is that what he does is not low-key. To put it bluntly, during the Qi training period, I improved the ancient elixir and sold it everywhere. The child holds gold, even the gold elixir is jealous To put it bluntly, shouldn't the protagonist build the foundation first and then do this? Why can't Han Li sell the unlimited raw materials for alchemy? Don't you want to? Use your brain, okay?
Don't know what to say
It just doesn't have any highlights. It has cheats but it's of no use. It's just like playing house.
Author, you can create your own ideas, but you need the other party's logic and reasons. Mortals are in a world with strict logic.
Cheng Hanli was so speechless that it was better to compare with his relatives'~~~~
One, the points added are too few. The author said that's enough, but author, think about the exercises, secret techniques, spells, elixirs, formations... What can you do with just the few points you have? You can't even get together the basic magic training. The so-called elixir reform only has a few elixirs, those for detoxification, healing, restoring spiritual energy, restoring the body, improving realm, improving physical quality, improving understanding, improving spiritual root attributes... There are so many types of elixirs, what are you doing with just a few points? Second, I really didn't expect that I joined the Hidden Moon Sect just for women! As long as you say you did it for the elixirs and secret books, it's easy to say that you actually got a girl just to see a girl. For this kind of thing, the author, think about what the readers will think about what you will write next? I think with the way you write it, you don't know how many women the protagonist will accept later on. It's possible that there will be 10 or 100 women. I'm really tired of reading this kind of harem story. After all, the main focus of "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality" is about cultivating immortality, not the harem. If you wrote "Fights Break the Sky" and "Douluo Dalu" like this, there would be no problem. After all, they are harem novels. It doesn't matter if they live forever.
Your second creation is so awesome. A meeting to ascend to immortality. Come to the golden elixir period. Funny
I don't know why the pig's feet are always staying in the Moon Covering Sect. They are either being suspected or bullied. There is no benefit at all. They still want to make the Moon Covering Sect bigger. A child with cerebral palsy
Do you know what low-key is? Too poisonous
What the hell is this written about? If you do this, you will be searched for your soul and refined for a long time! !
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Official(13)Scraped 23d ago
Fanfic about being forced to become mentally ill in order not to enter the Yellow Maple Valley
On the surface, these authors do not enter Yellow Maple Valley, but they go back and forth and get entangled with Yellow Maple Valley. So why not enter Yellow Maple Valley from the beginning? Going into the Hidden Moon Sect Spiritual Beast Mountain at every turn, without the basis of the original work, I can only make it up randomly, and the style of the make-up is so different from the original work that it makes me sick to watch. It's not that you can't add something to fan fiction, but you have to keep the style consistent and not contradict the original work. Just like some fan authors don't want to learn Han Li's skills, so they can only make up their own, including the Qingdi Muhuang Kung Fu. The seven sects are all losers. How are the other sects better than Huang Maple Valley? My favorite in the fan fiction is Hidden Moon Sect and Spirit Beast Mountain. How can you do well when Spirit Beast Mountain cleans up the portal? Doesn't the Hidden Moon Sect want to run away like a dead dog? What is the purpose of joining the Seven Sects? It is for the foundation building pill and the stable environment in the early stage and the status of the sect monk. As a transition to running away in front of the chaotic sea of stars, it's the same for any of the seven sects. There is also the Dayan Jue in Yellow Maple Valley, and there are so many supporting characters that you don't need to make up your own. Even if they don't run away, in the long run, how are the other factions better than Huang Maple Valley? Is it better to live in Yellow Maple Valley without having to fight within the Hidden Moon Sect? If Huang Maple Valley betrays its disciples, how many other sects will not betray them?
Speechless
The protagonist keeps saying he wants to keep a low profile, so why should Han Lao Mo attract risks? I practice quietly and steadily in the back The problem is that what he does is not low-key. To put it bluntly, during the Qi training period, I improved the ancient elixir and sold it everywhere. The child holds gold, even the gold elixir is jealous To put it bluntly, shouldn't the protagonist build the foundation first and then do this? Why can't Han Li sell the unlimited raw materials for alchemy? Don't you want to? Use your brain, okay?
Don't know what to say
It just doesn't have any highlights. It has cheats but it's of no use. It's just like playing house.
Author, you can create your own ideas, but you need the other party's logic and reasons. Mortals are in a world with strict logic.
Cheng Hanli was so speechless that it was better to compare with his relatives'~~~~
One, the points added are too few. The author said that's enough, but author, think about the exercises, secret techniques, spells, elixirs, formations... What can you do with just the few points you have? You can't even get together the basic magic training. The so-called elixir reform only has a few elixirs, those for detoxification, healing, restoring spiritual energy, restoring the body, improving realm, improving physical quality, improving understanding, improving spiritual root attributes... There are so many types of elixirs, what are you doing with just a few points? Second, I really didn't expect that I joined the Hidden Moon Sect just for women! As long as you say you did it for the elixirs and secret books, it's easy to say that you actually got a girl just to see a girl. For this kind of thing, the author, think about what the readers will think about what you will write next? I think with the way you write it, you don't know how many women the protagonist will accept later on. It's possible that there will be 10 or 100 women. I'm really tired of reading this kind of harem story. After all, the main focus of "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality" is about cultivating immortality, not the harem. If you wrote "Fights Break the Sky" and "Douluo Dalu" like this, there would be no problem. After all, they are harem novels. It doesn't matter if they live forever.
Your second creation is so awesome. A meeting to ascend to immortality. Come to the golden elixir period. Funny
I don't know why the pig's feet are always staying in the Moon Covering Sect. They are either being suspected or bullied. There is no benefit at all. They still want to make the Moon Covering Sect bigger. A child with cerebral palsy
Do you know what low-key is? Too poisonous
What the hell is this written about? If you do this, you will be searched for your soul and refined for a long time! !
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