
Naruto's Catastrophe
by Wild Geese Passing Over Jingyun 1
About This Novel
Earthling Li Ran came to this world for the fruit of the sacred tree. Therefore, it is necessary to seal Kaguya Otsutsuki before he turns into a human form, and then take him back. This is a story about heroes and destruction.
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Official(119)Scraped 12d ago
Brother, let me ask you a question
Are recommendation votes useful? What is it used for? Is it important?
In fact, I really wanted to give it a three-star rating, but suddenly I remembered someone who told me about a bad Samsung review. First of all, this book is very imaginative and bold. Secondly, as for the writing style, it's OK. The plot is not a routine, but for the fact that Kushina falls in love with Li Ran, well, forgive me for not being able to accept it. I feel almost obsessed with this original CP. However, it is considered normal. Then there is the aspect of Li Ran's child, which is well arranged. It refers to character issues, and there is no inexplicable maturity like some novels. Finally, there are some things that I can't name and feel bad about. When I was writing this review, I felt that I had forgotten everything but the name of the protagonist. .
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After being invaded by roe deer, the earth gave birth to such a powerful person, but the problem of roe deer was not solved to prove the power of roe deer? So people who have fused with roe deer are just like normal people? Then there is an additional problem of being afraid of being swallowed and losing control? Can't control it?
😂I just read the first chapter and I can't understand it... I feel like the writing is not so easy to understand. I graduated from junior high school and attended a technical school for another year, but my educational level is not high. However, I fully understand that it is not easy for the author to write a book, so I give you five stars.
Tell us the reason for discontinuation and update plan.
I replied, thank you for your support. I originally thought this book was completely useless. Tell me the reason for discontinuation. 1. A year ago, my baby was born and the pressure in life became huge. I had to find a job. 2. Writing books has become useless. It makes no money and no one reads it. There is no reason to continue. 3. There is no hope. Next, let's talk about the update plan. Because I am at work, I can only find time to write some. Fortunately, there are book friends who have supported me, so I will continue to write this book for the book friends who are still paying attention to this book. I can only update it from time to time, thank you book friends for your support.
About the chunin selection
Yesterday, a book friend talked about the issue of chuunin selection during the war, well, that is, the chunin exam. Jingyun believes that there should be internal selection. First of all, it was the first generation Hokage who established Konoha Village and Konoha Academy, but Konoha Academy and Konoha's various rules and regulations were perfected by the second generation Hokage. During the Second Ninja War, there will also be an internal selection competition for Chunin selection. Maybe, the name will not be called the Chunin Examination. But that's basically what it means. Jingyun also wants to apologize to all readers. After all, it is just a novel and cannot be perfect. In addition, thank you for your support.
A quick way to get the fruits of the sacred tree!
Pretending to cooperate with Uchiha Madara, but betraying him in the end, this way he can be a hero and also be very interesting!
To be honest, I read the plot of the psychic beast in a Naruto novel. It was so long ago that I forgot which one it was. I originally suspected that I had read this book before and just forgot about it, but this is the first time I have seen the plot of Spore. For the psychic beast, you enter a different world, encounter a creature that can devour all things, and then ask the protagonist to take it out. After the protagonist is channeled, you find that the psychic beast has become smaller. . . . (I only saw this part of this book) Hmm. . . Do the authors have the same ideas? I remember that the book later said that the psychic beast helped the protagonist devour the corpse, and the soul skills in this corpse had been taken away by the protagonist. Eliminate traces. In the later stage, the psychic beast will be powerful and have resentment in its heart. But later on, when the protagonist was oppressed by his strength, he didn't resist.
Uh~ I feel like this novel is developing more and more towards the secondary level.
There are many similarities with Naruto: The Scourge. The similarities I am talking about do not only refer to certain plots, but more importantly, the character of the protagonist, which becomes more and more obvious later on. It is just like the various conflicts between Naruto, Sasuke and Itachi in the original work, with a strong sense of second nature. Well, to put it bluntly, he started to abuse the owner. I will bear all the sins and so on...
Very boring.
The pace of the story is too slow, and there is no sense of comfort. Most of the protagonists in this novel are desperately squeezing themselves, which feels very sad, and they do not use their abilities at all, and time feels very focused, which will make readers feel uncomfortable.
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Community(0)
Official(119)Scraped 12d ago
Brother, let me ask you a question
Are recommendation votes useful? What is it used for? Is it important?
In fact, I really wanted to give it a three-star rating, but suddenly I remembered someone who told me about a bad Samsung review. First of all, this book is very imaginative and bold. Secondly, as for the writing style, it's OK. The plot is not a routine, but for the fact that Kushina falls in love with Li Ran, well, forgive me for not being able to accept it. I feel almost obsessed with this original CP. However, it is considered normal. Then there is the aspect of Li Ran's child, which is well arranged. It refers to character issues, and there is no inexplicable maturity like some novels. Finally, there are some things that I can't name and feel bad about. When I was writing this review, I felt that I had forgotten everything but the name of the protagonist. .
...
After being invaded by roe deer, the earth gave birth to such a powerful person, but the problem of roe deer was not solved to prove the power of roe deer? So people who have fused with roe deer are just like normal people? Then there is an additional problem of being afraid of being swallowed and losing control? Can't control it?
😂I just read the first chapter and I can't understand it... I feel like the writing is not so easy to understand. I graduated from junior high school and attended a technical school for another year, but my educational level is not high. However, I fully understand that it is not easy for the author to write a book, so I give you five stars.
Tell us the reason for discontinuation and update plan.
I replied, thank you for your support. I originally thought this book was completely useless. Tell me the reason for discontinuation. 1. A year ago, my baby was born and the pressure in life became huge. I had to find a job. 2. Writing books has become useless. It makes no money and no one reads it. There is no reason to continue. 3. There is no hope. Next, let's talk about the update plan. Because I am at work, I can only find time to write some. Fortunately, there are book friends who have supported me, so I will continue to write this book for the book friends who are still paying attention to this book. I can only update it from time to time, thank you book friends for your support.
About the chunin selection
Yesterday, a book friend talked about the issue of chuunin selection during the war, well, that is, the chunin exam. Jingyun believes that there should be internal selection. First of all, it was the first generation Hokage who established Konoha Village and Konoha Academy, but Konoha Academy and Konoha's various rules and regulations were perfected by the second generation Hokage. During the Second Ninja War, there will also be an internal selection competition for Chunin selection. Maybe, the name will not be called the Chunin Examination. But that's basically what it means. Jingyun also wants to apologize to all readers. After all, it is just a novel and cannot be perfect. In addition, thank you for your support.
A quick way to get the fruits of the sacred tree!
Pretending to cooperate with Uchiha Madara, but betraying him in the end, this way he can be a hero and also be very interesting!
To be honest, I read the plot of the psychic beast in a Naruto novel. It was so long ago that I forgot which one it was. I originally suspected that I had read this book before and just forgot about it, but this is the first time I have seen the plot of Spore. For the psychic beast, you enter a different world, encounter a creature that can devour all things, and then ask the protagonist to take it out. After the protagonist is channeled, you find that the psychic beast has become smaller. . . . (I only saw this part of this book) Hmm. . . Do the authors have the same ideas? I remember that the book later said that the psychic beast helped the protagonist devour the corpse, and the soul skills in this corpse had been taken away by the protagonist. Eliminate traces. In the later stage, the psychic beast will be powerful and have resentment in its heart. But later on, when the protagonist was oppressed by his strength, he didn't resist.
Uh~ I feel like this novel is developing more and more towards the secondary level.
There are many similarities with Naruto: The Scourge. The similarities I am talking about do not only refer to certain plots, but more importantly, the character of the protagonist, which becomes more and more obvious later on. It is just like the various conflicts between Naruto, Sasuke and Itachi in the original work, with a strong sense of second nature. Well, to put it bluntly, he started to abuse the owner. I will bear all the sins and so on...
Very boring.
The pace of the story is too slow, and there is no sense of comfort. Most of the protagonists in this novel are desperately squeezing themselves, which feels very sad, and they do not use their abilities at all, and time feels very focused, which will make readers feel uncomfortable.













