Super Weapon Invasion

What are you writing about? Why do you write novels when you don't understand the principles of being poor in literature and rich in martial arts? Are your younger brothers and sisters who have no father or mother dependent on you to support them? What can you do? Have you gone to an adult martial arts school yourself? Where did you earn your money? Does your younger brother or sister go to school to learn martial arts for free? Do you have money to compensate your brother for fighting every day? Who can see if you don't have any brains at the beginning?

Brother, this book was quite good more than ten years ago, but now, it's rare for a genius to become a loser, a fatherless mother, a pile of debt, and a family to read. The first chapter at the beginning is full of poisonous points. It's really rare.

Based on suggestions and actual conditions, Eggplant has sorted out and modified all published chapters, including the following content. 1. The 'sword species' built into Liu Ping's body that was originally set by a strong man, that is, the 'Sir' who swallowed the blood sword mentioned earlier, was deleted and changed to a simple injury. Within 10 days, through the infuriating energy of 'Mo Guanyin', Liu Ping accidentally helped Liu Ping use the 'Purple Mansion Sutra' to repair his Dantian injuries and restore his cultivation ability; 2. "Purple Mansion Sutra" is set as a kind of internal strength and mental method that can regulate and repair one's own internal injuries, so as to fit in with the advancement of the plot; 3. Add the "Scabbard" setting to complete the bloody sword and find Liu Ping, but the latter has no logical rationality for death and becomes a trump card for Liu Ping; 4. Modify the above optimization settings, involving the content of all current chapters; 5. The deleted part does not affect the plot, but the lengthy content and some typos; The above is an extremely fulfilling seven-hour workload. As a result, Eggplant didn't go to bed until 1 a. M. Last night. I'm currently feeling dizzy. Modifying the entire content is indeed exhausting, but you are still welcome to leave more messages and provide more reasonable suggestions. Thank you all!

It's so frustrating to watch! (Dudududu Shennong Body Protector)

At the beginning, the old genius turns into a loser, but the writing is okay and I can read it. When it comes to evil deeds, it becomes impossible to see them. It rises too fast. Moreover, I don't understand the settings, the level of the skills, what the sword intention and the sword soul do, and I can't challenge past levels. I can only be invincible at the same level. . .

The previous article is pretty good, but in the middle of practicing evil skills, the level will be improved casually. When the seven knives are combined into a sword, the sword can be lent to others for use. These artistic conceptions are like a bad street. The money I spent hundreds of chapters in the past has been wasted. I abandoned the pit and abandoned it.

I started reading at Qidian in 2008, and now I switch to Tencent. After reading novels for so many years, it's not too harsh to judge a novel, right? This book is generally good, with a compact plot and appropriate connections. Although it has flaws, it is still a good work. I don't know why there is no improvement? Is there any deviation in the public's reading taste? I read some trivial articles/no-brainer articles that were sold very well, but what kind of world is this? [Emot=default,02/]

It's quite poisonous, poisonous, poisonous, poisonous

It's okay, but the number of words in each subsequent chapter is too small, and I lost it after just reading it😔

Bringing a bunch of oil bottles, I'm still a loser and I don't know what I'm packing