One Piece Water God Gonggong

This is embarrassing! A water god and a wind god😂😂

I don't know if it's my misunderstanding, but I feel that the writing in the later chapters is slightly better than the previous one 😂 I don't know how many real book friends are reading this. I would like to ask for some motivation. If you think you have made progress, please come in and give me a shout and a like. Many times, knowing that someone is there can give people great encouragement, whether in life or work, I think this is the case, and of course I don't mean those malicious people😝 I hope it can be stacked high (Breaking the Sky is the best? 0? 5)

Why did Straw Hat have to be added to make it called One Piece? Can't the author write it from his own perspective? Writing a new legend and adding Straw Hat is a bit of that, don't you think?

Fruit, water, fruit, water, seawater should be controlled, right? But the fruit ability of the protagonist you wrote is hardly reflected in the story. It doesn't show the ability to restrain people with abilities, and doesn't it have any advantages of the Water Fruit? So why not get a thunder fruit? Another problem is the protagonist's skill name, water whip... Why does it feel a bit low compared to so many fans? Can the name be more domineering? I personally feel particularly embarrassed, I personally feel a little embarrassed, and a little bit rubbish... This book overall looks good. Especially in the first few pictures, Shuiyue's original character was good, but after changing it, it felt a bit... How should I put it, indescribable. It feels okay to watch Luffy being so silly in the anime. But the character of the protagonist is really hard to complain about in the novel... Also, I really don't want to say anything about the battle description... What about the details of the brothers? Not at all. It's just a general battle process and moves, with few details and touching... It feels like it just describes some general moves and the fighting process, without any substantial sense of experience and picture, and the ability to express it is exaggerated and handsome! To put it simply, it depends on people's imagination. The water cage can be regarded as surrounded by the surrounding sea water. Without any special effects, why can't it look more handsome? The ordinary cannot be more ordinary, and the ordinary cannot be more ordinary. For example, to control the water element in the air, the domain of water, the kingdom of water, the breath of water dragon, the sigh of the sea, the names of the moves can be exaggerated and cool! Also, the existence of the protagonist is too ordinary. If a boy doesn't show off, what is a boy? Don't you feel that the protagonist's advantages are not reflected at all? The protagonist's sense of presence... Is completely less touching. Are you writing about the protagonist or the Straw Hat Pirates? The presence of the complete protagonist is not as high as that of the Straw Hat Pirates. The protagonist and others did not show any advantages at all! Also, in the part where he wasn't sick, why didn't the protagonist come out and show off? In this way, readers will feel more comfortable watching, and the protagonist will be completely given over to Luffy, okay? Can you die if you show off? Salted Fish This is the legendary Salted Fish. The author may have considered that there will be no emotional plot in the early stage. But wouldn't it be okay to show it off and make some heroines have a good impression of the protagonist? Is this totally a salty fish? You do nothing? Don't want to be in the limelight? I just wanted to ask what to see? Just watching the protagonist and the Straw Hat fight until the end? Wait until Straw Hat becomes the Pirate King? So what's so cool about this? Protagonist Protagonist Protagonist Protagonist The son of the plane... There is no performance at all, no special advantages at all. Are there any differences between the fruit and other natural devil fruits? The protagonist doesn't show any specialness at all. He wants to be in the limelight but doesn't show off at all. Okay, this way I can accept you being a wise man quietly! Isn't it better to just quietly be a chess player in the world? A wise man is calm, has a keen insight, and has extraordinary wisdom. He is indifferent to everything in the face of it, but there is wisdom in what you wrote, but with a playful smile, what the hell is this? Anyway, I personally didn't show any enthusiasm at all. Instead, he looked at me with a look of embarrassment. I really couldn't help but complain, so I complained. There is also the issue of power level. The protagonist Quan should have half the power of Hawkeye... But? Is Hawkeye that weak? Half the strength is at least half a general, right? But why don't I see it at all? It's a matter of writing style and writing experience. I personally don't quite understand it, anyway, I kind of... Don't want to see it! This is my opinion as an old bookworm, and it is also my opinion as a reader. It is just my personal opinion! If you think it's okay, you can comment if what I said is consistent with historical facts. If you think what I said is bad and inconsistent with the facts, please don't criticize me if you think I'm deliberately being critical, okay? Be civilized! You can tell me my mistakes in the comments below, but please be civilized and don't complain, okay? Thanks! Happy holidays!

The writing of this book is pretty good, but the development by you, the author, is not very good. And the name is not domineering. If you really can't think of a name or skill, I suggest you go to the pirate next door. There was a man there who was very good at using water. The name is Senju Tobirama. It is said that he is the second generation Hokage of a place called Konoha Village. But water is awesome. You can tell her that there is trouble here. What is the water breaking wave, water breaking flow, water dragon technique? Learn from others. And your ability is water control. Not only sea water, river water, but also tap water, clouds and water vapor are also water. You can definitely try these things. You might even be able to let the clouds drag you down the aisle in the future. Then you learn Jinbei's fish-man karate. Right? That's how strong it is. Just invincible. If you don't like anyone, pick him up.

I'm currently thinking about this article, do you have any suggestions?

It's okay to just follow the original work, but you can't even write the battle scenes, so what do you write? After all, One Piece is mainly about fighting!

The dream weaved by straw hats, the promise spelled out by three knives, the route guided by the windmill, the lies slid away by the slingshot, the belief that the family should be passed on, the thoughts of the cherry blossoms, the smiles filled with flowers, the thoughts of going to sea to repair the ship, the lonely music of the bones, and the fearless guardianship of the murlocs.

Isn't it said that the water gods work together? Why are the names different?

It's obviously a copy of that straw hat caster.