Full-time Master: Still a Teenager after Returning

The careful and delicate description of the characters' language, expressions, movements, etc. Is a major feature of this article. The ending is full of expectations and enthusiasm. The words have been exhausted, but the meaning is still unfinished.

The work received a milestone plus an update at the starting point, which will be added today. A total of 100 monthly votes plus one update for the month are not capped. Rewarding is optional, will be updated when I have time. What follows is an unrealistic idea: Qidian Shuyou is worth 3 deacons or 1 helmsman per update. One leader updates ten times. One day of silver update (write as much as you like, save all manuscripts and release them) Gold updates for two days, same as above. That's basically it. Although it's a bit too ambitious, people have to have ideals. What if they come true? Right? 🙃

Originally, I wanted to see Mu Qiu and Ye Qiu team up to torture other people, but the opening scenes of the protagonists Mu Qiu and Ye Qiu in the early stage were terribly short, and they always wrote plots where Mu Qiu was spoiling the dog, brother! We are here to watch you play games, not to watch Mu Qiu and Chu Yunxiu's affectionate show. [Emot=default,28/] Just write about games. Just summarize one or two chapters about relationships. I have read almost 90 chapters. Ye Qiu and other friends [Tang Rou, Baozi, Boss Wife] have too few appearances. Ever since I confessed my love to Chu Yunxiu, I have always written dog food notes. How can I get a high rating!

It seemed barely acceptable at first, but the further you go, the more outrageous it gets. Especially when it comes to the playoffs, I can't watch it anymore. The protagonist's halo is so strong that he makes other professional players look like idiots.

I don't understand why there are so many emotional scenes. Just write about games. Most people who read this don't want to see Su Muqiu fall in love, but just want to see Ye Xiu and Su Muqiu fighting on the battlefield. All your adaptations are understandable, but the emotional scenes are very confusing. Now my feeling about this book is that it is a pity to abandon it. Even if there are emotional scenes, I think you can write some people who have nothing to do with games. Isn't it good to write about people who have nothing to do with games and shine in their respective fields? I don't mean that the writing is bad, but some of the plots are very disturbing. Thank you.

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Can the author write a book where Mu Qiu is in a vegetative state after being in a car accident and her body functions are basically unchanged, but she wakes up eight years later before Ye Xiu retires? I really want to see Mu Qiu use her name and identity to get along with Mucheng and Ye Xiu openly. Mu Qiu can truly show her talent, win the championship with Ye Xiu and Mucheng, touch the championship trophy together, and let Excellent Era return to their original status. After all, although Tao Xuan is a businessman, as long as If there is no conflict with interests, I still feel nostalgic. As long as Excellent Era wins the championship again, there will definitely be investment. Letting Ye Xiu retire is like letting him pay attention to his body and practice with Jun Moxiao. Then Qiu Fei or Sun Xiang will know Qiu in a leaf, Ye Xiu, Jun Moxiao, Mu Qiuqiu, Musu, and Xiao Shiqin. Let Ye Xiu poach Xingxin's people in the Internet cafe, push them all the way, and return to the top. It will be like recreating Excellent Era back then and realizing Mu Qiu's dream.

Author, you can write a sharpshooter's account card based on Tokisaki Kurumi, with a long gun in his left hand and a short gun in his right hand. The left-hand long gun's special effect bullets plus four special effects have a chance of firing a few more bullets when firing randomly. The short gun in the right hand adds one special effect bullet and has a chance to trigger the poison effect. The special effect can use the ammunition expert's ice bullet. She is dressed in silver and wears a skirt

I know this book was updated on the Qidian Chinese website, but I don't know if the author of my comment here will see it. But I still want to comment. The author writes so well. I like to read it. Please update it a little faster. I want to see how Fang Rui came to Xingxin. It will be fun.

I only read the beginning, but people of the same age will not be called "little" if they have a good relationship, especially those with a cheerful personality, so Su Muqiu calls Ye Xiu "little leaf" which is very inconsistent.